MikeDragneel Publish time 2015-9-13 14:45:40

Nice short story. Ending with the question 'Is it an eternal cycle?' as if the Zyls were once weak too, but to defend themselves, they got stronger. Upon defeating their predators, they became the predators themselves and tried to conquer all other stars. Now I, the main character became like them and later maybe some other civilization also become this in order to stop me...... Overall cool story.. I like it. :D

[email protected] Publish time 2015-9-13 22:07:59

nice one ragnos :) Guess i'l start waiting for this one as well :D
I hope u know what i mean ;P

sithumya Publish time 2015-9-14 04:03:52

Edited by sithumya at 2015-9-14 15:04

Great story Ragnos! I loved it!:D

ryugakill Publish time 2015-9-14 07:10:57

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-13 12:46 static/image/common/back.gif
Sounds like an interesting game.

So why did you want to build a storyline

pst123world Publish time 2016-2-3 04:31:13

Nice one there,kind of like continuous cycle of rule

Uzumakia1 Publish time 2016-2-3 04:38:44

Sorry, i skipped after imagine.... i have a short atten


Ooh look, a butterfly :o

Lucky__Black Publish time 2016-2-3 05:53:55

There's a board game called Eclipse similar to that Suzuken
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