Edited by TanakaAiri at 2015-9-25 10:54
Well I'm not an artist .....(failed every art exam in school) but anyway, on topic of shadows, the shadows under his neck on the right side looks a bit odd? Idk like if its just "too much". The left side looks more smooth...even ...to me
But other than that!! Looks awesomeee! Should totally draw me a pic of Shunsui so i can print n hang in my room....wud totally be my BFFL
Ragnos replied at 2015-9-24 18:35 static/image/common/back.gif
Thanks, but something just seems off to me... hrm.
maybe the scar is 2 big, anyways, awesome work , i have problems drawing a square ..lolzz
You drawn super nice his Hair.
You should make him look Angry ;D (Eyes)
nose and chin don't quite line up right... check the jaw line from the tip of the nose down. and to have that hard of a shadow on the right side of his neck, he'd need a much stronger jaw to have that much shadow on the left. he looks good, just the devil is in the details.... BTW, I can't draw to save my life... just took too many art classes, lol
Eyebrows maybe.
TanakaAiri replied at 2015-9-25 10:53 static/image/common/back.gif
Well I'm not an artist .....(failed every art exam in school) but anyway, on topic of shadows, the s ...
nibbles seconds this
ummm , it will be cool if he get some shade above his eyes , that will be awesome , btw nice effort brother!
you chose a mix between 3d and 2d on this drawing which doesn't bode well for a sketch/anime drwaing like that rejoices only the body, so try and find the certain style of 'camera' onto the picture
missing quite a lot on the face in terms of detail, go wild on there! :D
the layered hair looks to be the best of it all, nicely done from top-bottom, great job ^^ :)
Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-25 20:09 static/image/common/back.gif
you chose a mix between 3d and 2d on this drawing which doesn't bode well for a sketch/anime drwaing ...
agree with this here, the shadow in hair would be better if you mirrored it onto the left side and the right side, at first glance i thought it looked crooked due to the nose and chin, the idea of the scar is good.. but might wanna slim that up a bit and probably add face lines, laugh lines, 5'0'clock shadow.. maybe even cheekbone indents
iBrows :lol