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author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-5 18:33:49     Title: The Story thread!!

Edited by YagamiLi at 2015-3-14 12:01

Welcome Netizens, to the Story thread!!

I'll give an intro and you guys will continue the story!!

But the rule is.. each post can only contain 10-30words
DOUBLE EDIT!!: Clown posts will be ignored, make your own thread and write your jokes there instead. srs srs biz here only srsly
@this noob burn95 and this darklordz person

Ex: He ran off with my honey bar, but I know......

Because I am the absolute creatoror the intro gets to be a little bit longer, otherwise the rule still applies for future posts. I will never forgive you if you go over the limit D:< (insert tsundere emoji).

Let the story thread Begin!!

Once upon a time there was an elf named Carasdir. Carasdir was an aspiring treasure hunter and his biggest dream was to find the mythical goblet of Hroshnir. Legend has it that if anyone of the elven tribe drank of Hroshnir they would receive magical powers greater than an arch mage! One day Carasdir was practicing archery in the woods preparing for his great search, until he heard a strange noise....

author: bladeofcloud    time: 2015-3-5 22:33:55

concealed his own presence, searching around him for the disturbance. He was taken by surprise, a malicious wraith sprung from..
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-5 22:34:52

Edited by Leitzur at 2015-3-5 21:50

behind the Holy tree, AVION. Its size is enormous, all black and carrying deathscythe. When it try to attack him...
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-5 23:22:04

I quickly pulled out my spear with a quick transportation spell, and blocked the incoming attack.....................
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-5 23:33:56

Edited by YagamiLi at 2015-3-5 22:41

Immediately the wraith let out a blood curdling shrill throughout the woods, the clouds darkened and swirled..
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-5 23:44:11

Edited by KrisKingOfLegend at 2015-3-5 23:15

a rift is opened up, in the center, and an army of wraiths is unleashed upon the land............
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-6 00:25:20

suddenly a flash coming from unknown camera girl who stand behind me. i told her "BACK OFF! IT'S DANGEROUS!"....
author: bladeofcloud    time: 2015-3-6 00:28:16

In a split second I felt my head leave my body, the last thing I saw, thick flowing tears, regret
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-6 00:35:23

I wake up in a cold sweat, my robes drenched, eyes red, this re-occuring nightmare, Hroshnir I will find you
author: PAOFUI    time: 2015-3-6 05:12:11


until then i ll keep on practising n gettin stronger till tht day come...
author: madarad    time: 2015-3-6 09:50:32

was up bleach fans
author: Animatri    time: 2015-3-6 12:48:28

he said, and kept on practicing whilst the unknown man kept on staring.
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-7 12:23:08

Edited by Leitzur at 2015-3-8 00:24

i put my weapon and stare him back. Then he takes off his hat and comes towards me...
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-7 16:58:22

The man who approached me then whispered to me " Do you want to be stronger? "
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-7 17:02:39

Edited by YagamiLi at 2015-3-7 16:04

Carasdir replied, strong enough to take anything in this world by force, "you have good resolve said the man"
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-7 18:44:20

the mans eyes met with mine and they were glowing red, he had fangs, " Lets test that resolve "
author: Burn95    time: 2015-3-8 00:11:29

and whipped out a green banana. " EAT THIS"
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-8 00:28:29

I blinked my eyes once and gave him a confused look, his eyes were normal, and his teeth human...............
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-8 00:40:35

allow me to introduce myself, my name is Shade, master of dark arts and illusion, I heard you were looking...
author: Burn95    time: 2015-3-8 00:42:58

for the legendary toast of blue mould. well never fear...
author: Eilisa    time: 2015-3-8 02:55:08

I know of the legendary toast of blue mould's location. You can find it. . .
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-8 03:08:25

but you have to give me something good first in exchange of that information, that is....
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-8 03:08:52

sorry, not interested in toast, have a nice day, shade was it?? later
author: Burn95    time: 2015-3-8 05:50:05

and then he skipped off into the sunset. But the story isnt over yet because...
author: PAOFUI    time: 2015-3-8 05:57:30


he hav yet to find the thing tht he is lookin for...
author: zExTrA    time: 2015-3-8 06:50:58

...Hroshnir.
Therefore Carasdir sets out and tries to gather information about the legendary treasure in the town of Yggdrasil.



( Btw Yagami is that premise something from an Anime/LN/Manga ? Cause it sounds pretty interesting ^^ )
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-8 07:34:37

Edited by Leitzur at 2015-3-8 19:36

When he arrived at Yggdrasil, the town is crowded for some reason. He lean forward out of curiosity and found ...



author: PAOFUI    time: 2015-3-8 08:13:55


tht he was on the wanted list... hics... since when i ve been wanted ... then he walks away ...
author: Animatri    time: 2015-3-8 09:49:43

Silently strolling around in the small roads to not gain attention by the public
author: UnKnOwNHoLlOw    time: 2015-3-8 10:32:03

Suddenly the police men of the town saw him and....
author: darklordz931    time: 2015-3-8 11:15:25

I drooled thinking what he was going to do to me as i undid his pants........
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-8 21:46:34

Carasdir ran away immediately. The man with hat that he met before order these policemen to catch him...
author: Burn95    time: 2015-3-8 23:46:30

Awww, sorry Yagami
author: zExTrA    time: 2015-3-9 12:39:23

Edited by zExTrA at 2015-3-9 14:14

Being chased in this unfamiliar town Carasdir runs into a dead end, as suddenly an unknown person appears in front of him...
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-9 14:11:05

the unknown person then grabs on to me and drags me into a portal to...........
author: zExTrA    time: 2015-3-9 14:38:33

...a strange place. All I could see were a crimson moon and creatures different from anything I ever saw before...


(Yagami do you have a general direction you want this to go or shall we just go as we think fitting? )
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-11 16:17:39

then a massive beast appeared before me taller than any skyscraper, dragon-serpent like in appearance, she began to speak..............
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-11 16:39:39

Edited by YagamiLi at 2015-3-11 16:41

Absolute Creator intervention, in order to get things back on track, I am by-passing my 20word limit, this is something ONLY I CAN DO!!!!!

Carasdir...Carasdir...Carasdir, soft and gentle did she speak, betraying her appearance, she took after the likeness of a pure maiden. Shocked and bewildered, I didn't know whether to run or to piss myself, in the end I just stood still, my mouth agape. "Do not be afraid" she said, her voice now no longer perceived by ear but through telepathy. I have a task for you.. young treasure hunter Carasdir.. my people, an evil man has done this to us, just like you.. he searches for Hroshnir. You see Carasdir.. my people we are a tribe of sooth sayers, we served kings of old, from time of yore and yonder. This evil man, sought us to inquire of Hroshnirs whereabouts, but we sensed his evil and declined. He cursed us shortly afterwards.. our land turned into that of a wild beast dwelling. The men were driven into chaos and killed eachother, now I and my female companions are all that remains, as wild as we are.. there is a way to restore us. Please bring to us the Twilight Dew of the ashtar plains, and we will tell you how to find Hroshnir. I thought the ashtar plains were a myth, said Carasdir, and the dew only dropped once a millenia, how am I to acquire of such a thing?? Let alone the king of the pixies will surely be there to guard it. I cannot explain in detail, said the sooth sayer, but I will send with you a spirit guide, he will take you to where you need to go.

Confused, Carasdir figured he had naught to lose, so he set off, the spirit guide was named....

author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-12 11:09:56

Lacus. She cast a spell to show him direction.

It is so far away, across the oceans, beyond the mountains.........
author: PAOFUI    time: 2015-3-12 13:53:06


but no matter how far it is... his heart n mind is set ...
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-12 18:34:14

thus, our heroine sets out to begin his long Odyssey
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-14 14:27:13

Edited by Leitzur at 2015-3-15 02:55

Carasdir walked down the road until dark, then he rested for a while. Not too far away from Carasdir's location, there's a peaceful village but suddenly got caught on fire..
author: KrisKingOfLegend    time: 2015-3-14 16:29:39

When a vicious titan like serpent-snake attacked the village!!
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-14 19:17:32

Lacus cried, there is no time to waste! We must press on for Eagles Breach before dawn tomorrow! There Azyleus master of eagles will take us to..

(Word cap has been extended to 30, due to unforseen circumstances)

Yours truly,
author: bladeofcloud    time: 2015-3-14 19:19:31

yada yada yada yada yada, I got it already, first the wraith, then a teleport to a dragon serpent, a dragon serpent titan??? give me a break already..
author: PAOFUI    time: 2015-3-14 21:35:36


watever it is... just bring it on... i ll send them flying... shishishi

gomu gomu gomu...
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-14 23:15:35

...Alvond a large island in the ocean which would bring us closer to our destination. There we could resupply and plan out next course of action...
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-18 08:37:27

and he died it seems. This thread has died I see. And here I thought it was interesting.
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-18 10:17:53

Before setting off, Carasdir went to hunt for some fox's fur. It's rumored that Alvond resident are fond of that, hence he might get some information from them...


(no worries, I am with you ragnos, as long as you don't add some strange ideas that can confuse me)
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-18 10:22:20

... Carasdir after tracking down 2 foxes managed to kill them and bring them back to the local butcher who...


(NP Leitzur. I won't add anything werid... well maybe not hehehe.)
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-18 10:33:58

can do skinning thoroughly. Once the local butcher saw them, he was astonished. The two foxes that he killed are rare breed magical fox, they are worth for high price...
author: [email protected]    time: 2015-3-18 19:06:33

then the high price went down cuz of the burst buble of the magical fox meat making impossible to the butcher to sell them at a high price
author: airyonskyking    time: 2015-3-18 19:08:50

Edited by airyonskyking at 2015-3-18 19:11

he offered to go and retreave the the a blade that would allow him to skin the the foxs


i havent been keeping up with the story so hope this is ok
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-19 16:55:51

"Ugh"... said Carasadir. "Where can I find this blade you need." He asked...
author: airyonskyking    time: 2015-3-19 17:05:04

the butcher said there was an under water cave on the east side of the iland were is said to be the blade
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-19 17:26:21

Carasdir headed of to the location the butcher had told him about. In about an hour he had reached the water cave were....
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-19 21:47:04

there are mermans and some aquatic creatures around. He search the cave thoroughly until he arrived at basement with treasure chest and guardian boss. He thought maybe blade is there...
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-20 08:35:47

Carasdir faces the boss, and looks at the treasure chest. He takes his battle stance and unsheathes his sword to face the creature, and prepares to attack...
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-21 04:50:24

Carasdir dodged it. The guardian boss's attack left a hole at cave's wall. He thought "Whoa.. this boss sure is strong. I must avoid taking damage as much as possible..
author: Masqurane    time: 2015-3-21 07:21:24

I must end this now. In a flash he shot an arrow.It dosent seems that gaurdian has taken much damage , but he is slow
author: PAOFUI    time: 2015-3-21 09:36:29

Edited by PAOFUI at 2015-3-21 13:30
Masqurane replied at 2015-3-21 07:21
I must end this now. In a flash he shot an arrow.It dosent seems that gaurdian has taken much damage ...


hmmmm... looks like i hav to go full strength to take it down...

shento kaishin ~~~~
author: airyonskyking    time: 2015-3-21 14:37:11

carasder rears back and take stance once more and unleashs a huge magicgal sword slash at the beast face
author: bladeofcloud    time: 2015-3-21 16:10:02

Edited by bladeofcloud at 2015-3-22 00:26
selene0818 replied at 2015-3-21 14:34
However, he didn't notice the forum trolls steathily crawling behind him with mouths full of razor s ...



The Aquatic guardian beast let out a fierce roar which summoned an ancient water dragon, for it appeared the slash had inflicted heavy damage, and he was in need of recovery.
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-22 00:05:10

(This is a lot of work for one blade to skin some animals)

He ran as fast as he could to the chest, opened it obtained the blade and managed to barley escape with his wounds...
author: airyonskyking    time: 2015-3-22 14:11:05

on the jorney back to the bucher shop he was then anbushed by three bandits
author: 4Kaatumis    time: 2015-3-22 15:06:54

Three bandits put their giant dicks inside Carasdir and  Carasdir died from internal bleeding.
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-22 15:15:43

(WTF!! I'm disregarding that last post)

The bandits demanded that he hand over everything he was carrying; to which Carasdir refused...
author: airyonskyking    time: 2015-3-22 15:16:38

after he refused the badits drew there blades and begain to rush twoards Carasdir
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-22 15:28:09

Carasdir parried one of the strikes with his blade. Another bandit was coming from his right, he immediately broke off from his current opponent and decapitated the bandit charging from his right. He then turned to face the other two...
author: airyonskyking    time: 2015-3-22 15:49:30

Ragnos replied at 2015-3-18 08:37
and he died it seems. This thread has died I see. And here I thought it was interesting.

yeah it didnt start geting good till u and leitzur came in on it good job
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-22 16:50:43

airyonskyking replied at 2015-3-22 14:49
yeah it didnt start geting good till u and leitzur came in on it good job

Thanks Kinda reminds me of some Rpg forums I used to hang out in.
author: YagamiLi    time: 2015-3-22 22:44:38

This thread isn't dead, rather the plot has been disrupted. If any of you read the story Carasdir has a spirit guide (Lacus) with him, why does he need to hunt fox pelts for the citizens, to get "information"?? That's unnecessary addition. The story should've left off on their journey to Eagles Breach, fox pelts had nothing to do with it.
author: Masqurane    time: 2015-3-23 00:01:08

Edited by Masqurane at 2015-3-23 00:49

He defeted the bandits and returned the sword to the butcher.Butcher rewarded him a crystal fire stone and a map. The shortest route to Eagles breach is  through  Agnor caves .
author: Leitzur    time: 2015-3-24 04:50:17

Edited by Leitzur at 2015-3-24 16:51

"Caves again? Is there another route, at least safer than the caves?", he asked.
Lacus said "Fly with magic. Sadly, I can't brought anyone with me when I fly"..


(sry yagami because you didn't told how the story must proceed, but the battle story for obtaining that blade is interesting though, and I like ragnos's idea to hurriedly open the chest and run away)
author: Ragnos    time: 2015-3-24 08:04:02

Leitzur replied at 2015-3-24 03:50
"Caves again? Is there another route, at least safer than the caves?", he asked.
Lacus said "Fly wit ...

Thanks Figured it was a bit much for a single carving blade...



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