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author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 16:18:46 Title: New Story Thread

Ok ladys and gent first of all im starting ths thraed becuase the other story thread is kind og dieded ext for just a few ppl posting and sence im not yagami
you maypost a pargafe or two if you want there really is no limit i dont care as long as you stay on topic and if you think a chater in the story is over fell free
to start a new chater but if you r the one who starts the chapter make sure the last one ended on a good note

Charter name is Bisno he is a wisard worrier use all kinds of wepons and magic

Ok i will start Bisno was in the town of Fare Lake and all of a sudden out of know were thr sky grew dark and a portal apeared

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 16:25:24

and as the portal grew bigger and bigger the town begain to sucked up nto the air Bisno ran as fast as he could the ach mages house but it was to late before he knew it he and everyone he new was sucked into the portal

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 17:44:29

Soon Bisno could feel the pull of this overwhelming portal he tried to grasp onto something, but it was no use soon he had lost his grip and was sent flying into the mysterious portal.
He landed in a odd place the area was dark and foggy and the sound of thunder could be heard, but no lightning he pressed on into the dark fog...

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-22 18:02:33

Then in a blink of an eye there was a blinding light. Bisno stumbled out of the portal and slammed into a slim figure. As the spots disappeared from his vision... he looked down to see the enraged expression of a young female who pointed the tip of one of her daggers up at him.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 18:04:46

Bisno perishes the thought and asks the mysterious woman her name, and that if she would put down her daggers...

author: Femastrah time: 2015-3-22 18:06:12

This female inparticular had very large breasts, Bisno thought.. "perhaps it's not such a bad thing to die to a beautiful girl with large breasts"..

author: Femastrah time: 2015-3-22 18:10:52

"You fool, I should rid my dagger when you have a dagger hidden in your crotch region?", Bisno was bright red in the face, I... I.. I.I can explain!!....

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-22 18:37:04

Edited by selene0818 at 2015-3-22 17:41

Her long golden brown locks flowed behind her as her mossy green eyes regarded him closely withe thinly veiled anger.
"Explain quickly!" She said in a low tone.. her eyes dancing back and forth between Bisno and the woods that surrounded them. Bisno eyes widen as he saw two large figures rushing towards them.
"Duck!" He exclaimed as he pushed the large brested beauty out of the way. He branished his sword blocking the first incoming sword its blade dripping with a green shimmer...

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 19:08:29

{Ok im loveng this story keep it up}
then the large brested beauty threw her dager strait into the four head of one figures

author: KrisKingOfLegend time: 2015-3-22 19:10:38

please leave out the sexual statements only warning

author: KrisKingOfLegend time: 2015-3-22 19:15:23

airyonskyking replied at 2015-3-22 18:17
we havent got to her name yet get over it virgin

#Proud to still have m Chasity!!!

but still i have seen " underage " people on the forums

and GGS even told me that sexual statements can be bannbale/mutable

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 19:16:51

Nice. Said Bisno he then heads in and attack one of the figures he kills one by dismembering the figures arm and casting a fireball spell into the face of the last standing figure then snaps the neck of the one he dismembered. Afterward he turn to the woman and...

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 19:17:46

KrisKingOfLegend replied at 2015-3-22 19:10
please leave out the sexual statements only warning

we havent got to her name yet get over it virgin

author: Femastrah time: 2015-3-22 19:20:00

KrisKingOfLegend replied at 2015-3-22 19:10
please leave out the sexual statements only warning

sorry it was my fault, but do you like the story anyways?

author: KrisKingOfLegend time: 2015-3-22 19:20:49

Edited by KrisKingOfLegend at 2015-3-22 18:21

Femastrah replied at 2015-3-22 18:20
sorry it was my fault, but do you like the story anyways?

just alter the story a bit so and use other less sexual words

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 19:22:44

Can we continue the story now?

author: KrisKingOfLegend time: 2015-3-22 19:23:57

Ragnos replied at 2015-3-22 18:22
Can we continue the story now?

go ahead

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 19:25:38

I've already posted my response...

author: sohi00 time: 2015-3-22 19:28:03

just as the voluptuous woman was about to reply, a wraith sprung up from a shadow and attacked bisno

(Yagami sent me here to check out this thread, he said it was beneath him to read through a copy cat idea.. that being said so far the flow is better and less interruptions)

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 19:28:25

and bisno said now let start over what is ur name and just were the hell am i

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 19:36:35

How many monsters are here! Yelled Bisno. In an instant he destroyed the wraith with a constriction spell which crushed the monster almost immediately.

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-22 19:37:02

"I'm Rayna... a pleasure I'm sure..." came her quick reply as she tucked a strand of wayward hair behind her ear. She stared down Bisno's form... "What are you doing here mortal?" She spat out the word mortal as though it left a bad taste in her mouth. A small frown marred her face.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 19:41:33

Well a town was recently destroyed by a portal I was sucked in along with the rest. I'm just trying to figure out where I am. This place is quite dark in fact I'd determine that this could be a different dimension. So would you mind telling me what this place is?

author: Femastrah time: 2015-3-22 19:58:53

This is dark elf territory, (hold on wait a second, she's not human??! all my hopes and plans for a wedding and two children crushed.. or perhaps maybe, this makes things even more interesting) Bisno replies with a stern expression (hiding his adolescent desires)..

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-22 20:06:57

Bisno looked more closely at his surroundings. The towering trees that ominously creaking in the slight breeze. The forest was silent except for the singular crow cawing. "What happened here?" his voice slightly trembled. His skin broke out in goosebumbs. There was something very wrong here. His senses screamed at him to run.. run...run..

Rayna gave him an appraising look. Her sharp eyes piercing his soul. Mockingly she said "What didn't happen here?"

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 20:08:15

then bisno said dark elf territory (think to him self airt dark elf just a mith) ok well wat planet am i on and were r all the towns ppl that got sucked in with me at he strains to calm

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 20:13:08

"Its possible that this portal that you speak of my have transported everything and everyone to different dimensions. I'm not sure what could cause this. What do you plan to do now? said, Rayna.

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-22 20:19:39

His gut gave a twist in panic. Everyone he ever knew gone! The she-elf brought up a good point what was he going to do? As his emotions began to rise he felt the magic build rapidly seeking an outlet. 'this is odd' he thought to himself 'i can call forth my powers more easily.'
"I am at a loss... everything is gone" his voice cracked with emotion running a hand nervously through his hair.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-22 20:27:10

It appears so. But I'll help you if I can. So where are you from? What was the place called that you came from? Inquired Rayna.

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 21:18:50

bisno told her i am from fare lake of the planet doren and first thing i have to do is find out (then they herd some sound comeing from the east) well never mind first thing i need to do is get to a town and get somethng the eat im starveing and need to replinish my streath

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-22 21:25:54

"My lady.. I hail from a small town called Fair Lakes.  There was ever peace and prosperity there.  We were a simple folk who could do minor magics.. but here even the air is thick with it." He bit the inside of his cheek unuse to having such a piercing gaze upon him.

The elf tilted her head slightly to the right weighing her options. She could kill him where he stood, but a whisper on the wind stayed her hand.  She took in his frame.. he was quite large..two or three hands taller than herself with a solid build but was clumsy like a puppy than needed to grow into its paws.  His auburn hair was shorter than any male she had ever seen.. but it was his eyes a stormy blue that gave her pause.
"Follow me Traveller. I will take you to my clans elders and they will decide your fate.". She turned sharply on her heel causing her long hair to circle out like a cloak.  Rayna dunked into the forest as quiet as a thief.  "We must move  quickly and quietly least we bring more enemies upon us.". She warned in a low tone.

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-22 21:39:59

as they moved threw the forest bisno ask how far is they village of your rayna replieded the night is young we shall be there befor daybreak an hour past and all of a sudden bisnos eyes grew heavy and he hit the ground rayna stoped tryed to wake heim up but it had seemed that the ice raith had posined him when it was distroyed 3days later bisno awoke in a cell with his hand in shakles he herd a vocie chief that outlanded is finally awake

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-23 13:08:39

Bison looked around dumbfounded by the predicament that he was in. "Why am I in shackles?" He thought to himself.
Soon Rayna appeared before him outside his cell...

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-23 14:09:42

Bisno asked rayna what is this i thought u were going to help me (rayna replied) this is just untill we find out the true about u. besno the use his ice magic to frezz and break the shackles from his rist and right after he used his streath to bend the bars and walked strait to rayna and said this is no way to treat your guest

(and on athere note lets make bisno walk a fine line between good and evil maybe sence he went to this other deminstion let give him a doble personalty the longer he stays here the more he starts to go crazy there is no limit to what he can do good or evil i will let you deside

)

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-23 14:32:08

bisno demaned that rayna take him to her cheif as bisno was talking to rayna two gaurds ran twords him he trew up his hand and use his ce magic to frezz them in place (now said bisno) rayna then begain to walk follow me she said (thinking to him self wow what is happening to me i would have never done something like that before)

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-24 13:40:00

Edited by Ragnos at 2015-3-24 12:46

Bisno was beginning to realize that his magical powers have been substantially increased in this odd dimension. "How powerful is your magic" Rayna inquired. "I've no idea how strong my magical abilities are; this world has increase the potential of my magical ablities, and at this rate I'll be more powerful than an Archmage. Back in my world my powers were below that of an Archon." Bisno explained. Soon they had arrived at the Rule Hall were with chief resides and administers his daily orders. Rayna opened the large door and soon Bisno was face-to-face with the Chief who was sitting upon his foreign throne...

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-24 20:44:49

Edited by selene0818 at 2015-3-24 19:49

The Chief had long deep blue robes with gold and silver embellishments. In his right hand he held a blade staff that looked worn and well card for. An old battle wound heavily scarred the left features of his face and his long hair held multiple braids with decorative beads.
"So you awaken star traveller," the chief's voice was deep and harsh from lack of use. "Be you friend or be you foe?" Bisno nervously licked his cracked lips as he felt the magic wield up and swell to his finger tips. Small sparks of static shot from the tios as he nervously began to reiterate his tale of confusion and woe.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-24 21:46:39

Edited by Ragnos at 2015-3-27 14:29

"I see you have magical powers." The chief exclaimed in his rough tone. "Yes I do indeed." Replied Bisno. He glanced at Rayna for a moment then back at the chief. "I was sent to this world by a magical portal which absorbed my entire town. I was curious to see if you knew anything about this?" said Bisno. The chief suddenly looked grim. "A portal you say? That took you and your town and sent them flying through dimensions?" He answered in his harsh voice. "This sounds like something Marxon the Endurer would know about." The chief continued. "Endurer?" Bisno questioned.
"Yes, he is a being that cannot die of old age and his body is that of a thirty year old. He should be about a thousand years old by now." The Chief explained. "But he can be killed by another other mortal means, and he his a master in the schools of magic." Rayna finished. Bisno begin to collect his thoughts on what he had heard and stood silent for about a minute. "Where can I find this Marxon?" Bisno inquired. "Oh, his home is halfway up Mount Void. I don't know what it is with mages and high places..." The chief said. "Then I will make my journey to Mount Void." Bisno concluded. "I will go with you and show you the way." Rayna offered. "Thank you" replied Bisno. "We will leave as soon as we are prepared." Rayna finished. They turned and left the rule hall...

author: UCHIHA91977 time: 2015-3-27 15:24:40

As they were walking out a sudden portal opened.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-27 15:35:00

"Damn" Yelled Bisno. He reacted quickly to the appearance and used a combination of a containment spell and constriction spell. It surrounded the portal and magic pushed against magic Bisno struggling to destroy this portal, but the magic was too strong and just when his magic was about fail him the portal was destroyed. Bisno, and hit the floor with a THUD!; and was rendered unconscious from the strain on his mana...

author: selene0818 time: 2015-3-27 18:32:44

Edited by selene0818 at 2015-3-27 17:49

Rayna and the Chief stood in shocked stupor.  A young mortal rarely showed such magical promise.  'Maybe he can help us,' she softly said to her father the chief. "He has potential to surpass Marxon the Endurer... Perhaps he can cleanse the corruption that now blights our lands."
"Hrmm," the Chief grunted noncommittally as looked down at the young man. "What is to stop him from being seduced by power as Marxon was?  Our greatest ally or our greatest foe." His eyes took on a faraway look. Rayna narrowed her eyes at her father as he continued on "What indeed," He muttered "Ah binding magic..."
"Father!" Rayna exclaimed "That is dark magic...."
"Silence!" The chief roared "Magic is magic.  Intention determines what is light or dark. Most magic is a shade of grey as you will learn.  I will bind his will to you since you are concerned with this human's wellfare."  Rayna paled and shook her head at her father.  His eyes pinned her to the spot.  "Ever since you were a child, you dreamed of being a hero.  Saving us all from the darkness.  Now you shall have your wish.  Help this mortal return to his world and you will help your people.  However you will find that finding your way out of the dark is no small feat"  The chief took out a small ceremonial knife and jerked his daughter's arm towards him.  He carved a series of small runes in the inside of her forearm.  Then he knelt and did a slight similar rune pattern on Bisno. Under his breath, the chief muttered a life -binding spell in the old world of elvish. The runes flared brightly a dazzling white before dulling to a dark blue. "Now, he is tied to you as you are tied to him.  Do try to ensure he is properly trained dear daughter... you would not want to die over some inexperienced puppy inability to control his own magic."  With that the chief drifted back to his throne waving his hand in dismissal.
Rayna bit the inside of her lip to keep from crying out in rage.  How dare he!  How could her father saddle her with this... this child? She motion for two guards to carry Bisno to her suite in the palace.  When he awoke she needed to be there to set a few things straight.  There was no way SHE would be brought low by a human.

author: shieldandsword time: 2015-3-27 20:35:39

Vegeta wha do da scouta sey bout hes powa livil? Its over 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The End

author: angelswetha time: 2015-3-28 02:32:28

what this thread is about imao ?

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-28 10:01:37

angelswetha replied at 2015-3-28 01:32
what this thread is about imao ?

Read from the first page then you'll know...

(basically add on to the story Note: it is best to read the story before adding))

author: Ragnos time: 2015-3-28 10:04:52

Bisno finally awoke in the royal suite. Rayna later came in the room to speak with Bisno about their objective. "Why did your father bind me to you exactly?" Bisno asked first. Rayna looked and him and said...

author: playbleach1 time: 2015-3-28 14:54:00

and so 5 hours has passed................................waiting at the portal....................another 6hours passed.......................he woke up , made a cofe and went to office .

author: airyonskyking time: 2015-3-30 11:54:09

ryana look at bisno and said because this must be some kind of test he is puting me threw . rayan said from now on i will be the one and only one u will anwser to for you will be under my care and the first thing we will need to do is see just how powerfull you are now follow me(walkdown the hall she rambled) we shall return to the forest and start ur training there is pleaty of monsters and badits that need be rid off they will make good taget pratice for you. We will see were u limit is and from there i will train u in hand to hand but the magic is all urs to learn on ur own. Make no mistake bisno we need ur power so that we may cleans this world of evil will u help me in this quest.

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