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author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 17:14:08 Title: hetalia and bleach in the same world

now first off before I type the first chapter I got this idea while I was reading my friend Ragnos fanfic http://forums.gogames.me/forum.p ... 15601&pid=99887 he is a really good writer. So a special thanks to him http://forums.gogames.me/forum.p ... 15601&pid=99887

CHAPTER ONE: THE GATHERING

Well one day ichigo was with orihime they where on a mission to destroy hollows that came to earth. and wile that was going on the axis from hetalia where training because of Germany. back to ichigo and orihime "ICHIGO WACH OUT!" orihime yelled at him wile a hollow snuck up behind him and wile ichigo had to deal with that there was a hollow inching its way behind her. as soon as they where going to attack the hollows they got transported to a strange odd place that looked like a blank plan of grass and trees. now back to hetalia "Germany Germany im lost I don't know where I am-a" Italy yelled. they where already in the same place as ichigo and orihime. ichigo heard what sounded like two of his other friends chad and rukia. he ran to the sounds and saw chad and rukia. "what happened where are we?" rukia asked ichigo franticly "i don't know" ichigo said then orihime came running to ichigo "ichigo please don't leave me alone out in the open again" she said "Germany Germany where are-a you at-a?!" they heard an Italian voice. than the Italian ran into ichigos back and fell over "please-a don't kill me-a please please-a please im-a not very good-a to kill you-a wouldn't want to kill-a me please!!!" the Italian cried. later on the German came to wear Italy was at to see Italy crying and pleading for help and mercy and ichigo,orihime,chad,and rukia sweat dropping. "oh italia" Germany face palmed "im sorry about him crying he just gets too vorried at times" Germany said and went to Italy then they heard a certain Prussian nearby "im awesome so suck it loser" he said "oh bloody Prussia your not awesome you twit" a England said as they walked to wear the six where "hallo little brother!" Prussia cooed "hey I have a question why are we hear?!" England asked "i don't know why we are here" chad said "maybe we have to do something to get out of this place" ichigo said "THATS RIGHT YOUNG ONE" the person named Tamaki yelled (he's from dead man wonderland) from a tv screen "now you have to do something to get out of here and return to your places but im not telling you what just now *evil giggle*" they all looked up...............TO BE CONTINUED

if I have any mistakes please tell me them by all means

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 17:21:19

girl i will not read this right now it's midnight and what you wrote seems more of a financial times for me right now

btw from what i can speculate are you german or something cuz prussia was the old name of germany before 1st world war.

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 17:45:37

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 17:21
girl i will not read this right now it's midnight and what you wrote seems more of a financial times ...

im not full German but read this story when you can bro

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 17:47:35

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 23:45
im not full German but read this story when you can bro

ok so you at least 3/4 german or half, i will read the story but not tonight goodnight then

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 17:50:11

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 17:47
ok so you at least 3/4 german or half, i will read the story but not tonight goodnight then

ok bro but im also Italian Japanese American German and I think some Scottish and Irish and England (uk)
but mostly American so good nugtcan or bonsorno

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 17:55:44

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 23:50
ok bro but im also Italian Japanese American German and I think some Scottish and Irish and Englan ...

loooooooooooooool alright you're a genetical equatition

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 17:59:56

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 17:55
loooooooooooooool alright you're a genetical equatition

ummm what do you mean by that dude? I mean I don't know what you said and why did you put a blushing sweatdrop emoji?[img]http:http://emoticoner.com/files/emot ... accoon-emoticon.gif[/img]

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 18:07:09

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-27 18:07
he means this http://faculty.uca.edu/benw/biol4415/popgnotes.pdf ur basically a mix of alot edit im ...

ok I know im some of them and some I think I am but I do know a lot of different lingos

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:07:29

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 17:59
ummm what do you mean by that dude? I mean I don't know what you said and why did you put a blushi ...

he means this http://faculty.uca.edu/benw/biol4415/popgnotes.pdf ur basically a mix of alot edit im part german and part irish but speak neither due to being raised without knowing i was either irish OR german

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:10:30

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 18:07
ok I know im some of them and some I think I am but I do know a lot of different lingos

oh ya same i can speak a little german but nt a lot XD

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 18:11:28

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-27 18:10
oh ya same i can speak a little german but nt a lot XD

do you know Italian?

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 18:11:55

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-27 18:12
nope :/

huh si I understand do you speak Danish?

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:12:54

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 18:11
do you know Italian?

nope :/

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:13:49

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 23:59
ummm what do you mean by that dude? I mean I don't know what you said and why did you put a blushi ...

don't take it the wrong way i'm just chilling, means it's a melting pot of all of the world gentic formulas,

i'm also a mix of morocco france spain and italy so just saying,

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:15:53

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-5-27 18:11
huh si I understand do you speak Danish?

nope lol i jsut know a few words in spanish 1 or 2 in german and 1 in japanese

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-5-27 18:16:34

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:13
don't take it the wrong way i'm just chilling, means it's a melting pot of all of the world gentic ...

you changed your picture O_O

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:17:22

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:13
don't take it the wrong way i'm just chilling, means it's a melting pot of all of the world gentic ...

soo in other words adnane i was right with the link lol ??

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:18:16

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:19
yep that's my gto library collection

gto?

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 18:18:53

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:13
don't take it the wrong way i'm just chilling, means it's a melting pot of all of the world gentic ...

si I understand now dankie

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 18:19:17

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-27 18:15
nope lol i jsut know a few words in spanish 1 or 2 in german and 1 in japanese

ok but like I said I speak a lot of lingos

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:19:18

sirnibbles replied at 2015-5-28 00:16
you changed your picture O_O

yep that's my gto library collection

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-5-27 18:21:00

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:19
yep that's my gto library collection

wow

such anime

very manga

many volume

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:24:57

sirnibbles replied at 2015-5-28 00:21
wow

such anime

not that many it was common to have books cuz anime didn't exist before youtube and dailymotion came to europe hahahahahaah, i have also 40 books of dbz

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:26:18

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:27
great teacher onizuka, if you didn't read or whatch it go check it out

nvr EVN heard of it XD

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:27:44

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-28 00:18
gto?

great teacher onizuka, if you didn't read or whatch it go check it out

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:41:23

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-28 00:26
nvr EVN heard of it XD

go whatch it right now

hahahahhaa

for real it is a classic manga

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:41:42

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:41
go whatch it right now hahahahhaa

for real it is a classic manga

im watching rosario + vampire XD

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:45:29

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-28 00:41
im watching rosario + vampire XD

already did nice one go chek also elfen lied very nice too

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:48:17

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:45
already did nice one go chek also elfen lied very nice too

also watching tht XD i cant keep focus on 1 anime for a certain amount of eps then i switch to watching another for a certain amount of eps then switch back to the other 1 lol

author: Xcution12 time: 2015-5-27 18:57:26

[email protected] replied at 2015-5-27 18:57
focus!!!! hahahah well goodnight

i have ADHD so its hard to do tht and ok gn

author: [email protected] time: 2015-5-27 18:57:59

Xcution12 replied at 2015-5-28 00:48
also watching tht XD i cant keep focus on 1 anime for a certain amount of eps then i switch to wat ...

focus!!!! hahahah well goodnight

author: Ragnos time: 2015-5-27 19:43:17

Dakara, ōku no erā! (So many errors!) I noticed that you had quite a few spelling errors. Along with some sentence fragments, and run-ons. Your on the right track though.

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 19:49:54

Ragnos replied at 2015-5-27 19:43
Dakara, ōku no erā! (So many errors!) I noticed that you had quite a few spelling errors. Along wi ...

ummm can you tell me the word that I missed so I can fix them please

*works on chapter*

author: Ragnos time: 2015-5-27 19:59:42

Edited by Ragnos at 2015-5-27 19:09

Oriheme needs capitalization at a few parts.(in fact head back through and Capitalize all names.) "Where" in first sentence needs to be "were". Earth needs capitalization. All words at the begining of new sentances needs to be capitalized. (since it's the beginning of a new sentence) "wile" needs to be "while".
The "Back to Oriheme and Ichigo" needs to be in (parentheses). "WACH" needs to be "WATCH". "franticly" needs to be "frantically". Some I's need capitalization.

That's all the spelling errors I could find. the sentences and Run-ons will have to wait.

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-5-27 20:02:40

Ragnos replied at 2015-5-27 19:59
Oriheme needs capitalization at a few parts.(in fact head back through and Capitalize all names.) "W ...

nein gott now I feel stupid

author: pavan93 time: 2015-6-1 23:11:41

i am dud at reading manga dude if you don't feel bad make it in video i like video watch than manga reading

author: [email protected] time: 2015-6-2 06:12:29

well i had to edit for ya.
my edit skill isnt prefect

One day Ichigo and Orihime is on a mission to destroy hollows that came to earth. While that was going on, the axis from Hetalia whose on training because of Germany. Back to Ichigo and Orihime "ICHIGO WATCH OUT!" Orihime yelled, While a hollow snuck up behind him and while Ichigo had to deal with that there was a hollow inching its way behind her. as soon as they where going to attack the hollows they got transported to a strange odd place that looked like a blank plan of grass and trees. now back to Hetalia "Germany Germany im lost I don't know where I am-a" Italy yelled. they where already in the same place as Ichigo and Orihime. Ichigo heard what sounded like two of his other friends chad and Rukia. he ran to the sounds and saw Chad and Rukia. "what happened where are we?" Rukia asked Ichigo frantically "i don't know" Ichigo said then Orihime came running to Ichigo "Ichigo please don't leave me alone out in the open again" she said "Germany Germany where are-a you at-a?!" they heard an Italian voice. than the Italian ran into Ichigo`s back and fell over "please-a don't kill me-a please please-a please im-a not very good-a to kill you-a wouldn't want to kill-a me please!!!" the Italian cried. later on the German came to wear Italy was at to see Italy crying and pleading for help and mercy and Ichigo,Orihime,chad,and Rukia sweat dropping. "oh Italia" Germany face palmed "im sorry about him crying he just gets too worried at times" Germany said and went to Italy then they heard a certain Prussian nearby "im awesome so suck it loser" he said "oh bloody Prussia your not awesome you twit" a England said as they walked to wear the six where "hello little brother!" Prussia cooed "hey I have a question why are we hear?!" England asked "i don't know why we are here" Chad said "maybe we have to do something to get out of this place" Ichigo said "THAT`S RIGHT YOUNG ONE" the person named Tamaki yelled (hes from dead man wonderland) from a TV screen "now you have to do something to get out of here and return to your places but im not telling you what just yet *evil giggle*" they all looked up...............
TO BE CONTINUED

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-6-2 14:48:18

[email protected] replied at 2015-6-2 06:12
well i had to edit for ya.
my edit skill isnt prefect

would you like to help me write this story please!

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