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Title: the pearls and the hidden soul - Full prologue ( part 1-2-3) [Print this page]
author: SeiryuSky    time: 2015-6-16 08:17:02     Title: the pearls and the hidden soul - Full prologue ( part 1-2-3)

Edited by SeiryuSky at 2015-6-16 08:19

his eyes closed lying on a the top of a mountain , his body with dangerous wounds and broken hand his blood wesseling on the ground , on the barren surface of the mountain , no humans live there , no animals even , only a lonely man who in his life has known what no one have known , oh i forgot let's start from the beginning ... the day "Amadai" was born , the day the parusan was stolen ... On the morning she gets up with her baby in  and laugh with her husband , they are happy , their son will finally be born , the son of the "taiyo no kotei " all the imprial divan will clebrate that day , or maybe one won't , the son of the emperor, "katara" he was always treated as the emperor and tried to kill his father few times he never looked down to anyone , because who don't look down to him get killed , and after the incident from 2 years  and the death of 1875 guards and 14398 inhabitants because of him , He got sealed 5km under ground in the gaol of shadows , the " kage no kangoku" tied to 186 chains made from the steel of karai tamashi  that are supposed to get into the prisoner's soul and and make it disentegrate slowly and the dour made of Daiyamondo jikan that can never be broken and the only way to open it , is the parusan , pearl of sun ...
6 days later...The son got born finally and the emperor celebrated with all the empire and named , his son , amadai , the new emperor , during the ceremonies , the pearl will be putten together finally with the necklace of the sun to name the baby as the successor , the only thing left now is the pearl , suddenly during the ceremonies the right hand of the emperor open the door aggresively and shout : where is the pearl ???? Where is itttt ??? The emperor stand up and look at his friend with eyes of fear and then order the soldiers to search for the pearl while he will see something , the soldiers lope searching for the pearl but nothing , meanwhile the emperor have got to his secret room with his friend revealing fast his legendary outfit with the armor made from the skin of the dragon that was killed by the previous emperors and the sword made from his claws , he knew something for sure , if the pearl was stolen...
The soldiers continue their search suddenly the shadow of a man appear , asking him who he is he disappear , only to appear behind them and kill them in a moment , he continue moving , and fear controling all who see him , the battle start between the empire and the mysterious man , the emperor arrange his army , to fight the enemy , or that is what he thought until an army of 50000 men of a mysterious area join the fight in the side of the mysterious man , the emperor hopeless look at his newborn son crying , call his friend and ask him to save his son and give him the necklace , because he is the only hope for the empire to be revived , his friend not accepting was obligated to for the sake of the empire , therefore he get on a horse hold the newborn baby and the necklace and advance away from the empire for the first time the battle start , and the two armies clash with the emperor waiting to battle the mysterious man .... He shows up the emperor couldn't move he was frightening , the mysterious man ... Was his son , katara smiles and look at his father a look of scorn then show him the pearl ,and laughs , to silentely kill him in a slice. The empire have falled with no hope and the pearl taken , the empire turned to vacuum . "Amadai" continues his escape with the right hand of the dead emperor , to suddenly be caught by the men of katara ,  he hides the baby in a cover and fight the men of katara to only die , the baby discovered by the men and being unknown to them put him on a piece of wood and release him to the sea , where the end never exist ....
continuing his way all over the sea on a little peace of wood , lying like a bottle floating , and a necklace , a gold one glowing in the dark , shining and waiting for the time to awaken , will he survive ? the questions are , let the words show you the truth and lies :
Nights have passed , and the baby crying , his life , his childhood have been destroyed , only with a necklace around his neck , protecting him from any danger . Is it luck ? Or is it its power ? We shall discover , the son of the killed emperor look at his guards , with his eyes holding darkness of his soul , he look at them and stand then drew his sword and said : you know this sword is really beautiful , isn't it ? The guards remain silent , katara get near one of them and smiles only for the guard to fall with dark blood around his heart and the sword absorbing the blood covering it , the guards started trembeling , he look at them , with his smile , the smile of death and reassure them , his sword , called " akuma ryu no ken " was said to have the power when pierced in the body of the enemy to reach the depth of his soul and curse it , only for his dark claws to show in it and eat it , it is said that the dark soul of the god-like dragon was sealed in that sword , being able to pass through anything , awakening the " kage no geijutsu " , the art of rulling over shdows and curses , that sword was supposed to kill his little brother , amadai , so the emperial chair will be for him alone and he will be the only successor , because no one know yet from the high council of the 7 lords who was responsible of this incident and who killed the emperor . Meanwhile a storm was getting near from the little baby who was freezing from the cold , when it arrived the piece of wood started to sink under the water along with the child , the kid faling into the sea , closed his eyes not knowing what is happening , not knowing death finally caught him ... Or is it really the end ? Who knows ... Reaching a high depth the baby open his mouth only for the water to enter his mouth , then his lungs and being his end . SUDDENLY , a hand pull off the baby from water , from the deep water , and saves him from death again , while the kid lost his consciouness , the storm was gone , he opens his eyes , getting his life back thanks to the man who pulled him , it was a stranger , an unknown man , never seen in the empire before , the necklace glowed , the reason being unknown , the man looked at the baby laughing , only for him to laugh with him . At that time THE GUARDS ENTERED TO katara's room telling him they didn't find the baby but telling him the story of the little kid they left in the sea , katara pissed off look at them taking his sword out and killing all three and sending them to the shadows where their soul is transformed to the guardians of shadows , looking nervous , he was smiling in fact , he knew that was going to happen ...  that is because he planned for that , but what was his intention . Did he really have mercy for his little brother ? Or was it for another thing ? And why the necklace glowed when the baby waked up ? What is the secret between all those facts .... That's where mystery begins , where lies and truth get mysterious ....

p.s: continued below


author: SeiryuSky    time: 2015-6-16 08:17:58

The light have appeared again and the sun have rised again , unlike the sun of the sun empire , where the darkness of hatred and destruction was still covering it , the little "Amadai" opened his eyes looking at the sun , the same from 6 years ago , the same when he escaped from death that time , he stood up , and got down the stairways till he reached the room of the man who saved him , the man whom he don't know anything about except the fact that thanks to him he's still alive , that he rised him during those 6 years , treating him as his real son , he touchs the door quietly then open it without making much sound looking at the sleeping man , he  gets closer and look at him , all memories returned , all those years passed like flash , he touch his father and try to wake him up , even though he knew he won't , because yesterday was a tiring day , they waked up early so they can look at it , the "Siradena" the legendry pegasus , reborn from the light of the sun every 7000 years , to protect the land that exist between the gates of heaven and hell , the interval earth , known as universe for us , that little dimension exists in the middle of the "karpos" , the gathering of the 7 universes , each one containing one of the legandry empires , and one of the legendry lords , lords who are chosen being the most powerful , sapient and brave men of each universe , but the real thing that caracterize the legendary lords is that  each one of them have a skill , that makes them different , as for the necklace and pearls , " Amadai " , still didn't discover the meaning of their existance , he knew that he isn't allowed to ask about it , because if he does his father will be pissed , he just knew that they aren't normal ones , that secrets and mystic stories  hidden are held by them . but even after all those years he still didn't figure out what is his story , his real one , his father called him "tekine" it was for his sake , if his brother "Katara" , found out where is he by his name , he will kill both of them , "Amadai" and his father were leaving on a far island from the land of sun , alone , here they were safe but not forever , sooner or later guards will find them , till that time "tekine" should be ready to protect the necklace with his life , and not allow the revolver to take it . that's the job of his father , the job that "tekine" didn't figure out yet , but he felt that that necklace is precious to him , when he touch it , a strange feeling ruled over him , like memories returning , but he couldn't remember , it was like a message . The kid headed to the top of the hill , from there he could see all the island , the sea , the forest , the light of sun appearing with a color that separated him from the current world , he felt it was nostalgic , he took out the necklace and looked at it , the same feeling ruled on him again , this time stronger , for a moment he felt that he remembered something , but his father was shouting , while searching for him . He was obligated to return , while he greeted his father with joy and smile , his heart felt sadness , and unknown one , sadness that appeared after that moment , even he didn't remember a thing but he knew his heart saw it , saw sadness in his memories.
author: SeiryuSky    time: 2015-6-16 15:02:39

bump waiting from weeks and no one still cares about it
author: MATTRAT    time: 2015-6-16 15:06:32

hahaha well this novel is pretty ineresting but make it more exciting plz
author: SeiryuSky    time: 2015-6-16 15:07:58

MATTRAT replied at 2015-6-16 15:06
hahaha well this novel is pretty ineresting but make it more exciting plz

dude its not the novel.... it is the prologue the 3-4 pages that are putten in a book before it starts , it is only supposed to talk about past not action here , action begin in chapter 1
author: MATTRAT    time: 2015-6-16 15:16:35

oh ok lol xD
author: MATTRAT    time: 2015-6-16 15:18:49

it's sorta funny to see u yelling and scream in anger about nobody cares about this lol u enjoy me very well ;)
author: SeiryuSky    time: 2015-6-16 15:19:47

MATTRAT replied at 2015-6-16 15:18
it's sorta funny to see u yelling and scream in anger about nobody cares about this lol u enjoy me v ...

well i am not really screaming at all , angry yes i am but not showing it , i mean the heck why someone who posts a useless thread get a lot of interest 400+ view and 10+ replies in 1 hour while i dun get 1/4 of that in 2 weeks
author: MATTRAT    time: 2015-6-16 15:24:03

welll yeah i guess u really lack ur demonstrate of interest so keep improving and u might end up having million fans ;) if u dont give up and work hard. That is writers' common personality and common ability
author: SeiryuSky    time: 2015-6-16 15:25:25

MATTRAT replied at 2015-6-16 15:24
welll yeah i guess u really lack ur demonstrate of interest so keep improving and u might end up hav ...

yeah right anyway i dun really care anymore i wanted to make forums have fun reading the story before i leave , if they dun want no problem 1 week left so no problem dun read cz i won't really have a disdvatage , so 1 week and bye bye lol , wanted to keep that a secret till last day but NP now cz no one sees this thread anyway



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