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author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-9 01:03:46 Title: The Great story of the great races that lived long ago.

Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-8-10 09:35

just going to set this out now I use to draw and I always have wanted to make my own manga so this lil story I have today will be part of that manga. witch btw im going to put one chapter at a time. it will be long so if you like reading I hope you like it and comment on what you liked about it.
(pretend morgan freeman is narrating this

)

There once was a Great race of super beings. Between these super beings wars broke out. this is the story of those of those races. their history their future and future more... their today lives. now shall we begin?

Chapter 1. The Great Beings begin.
Long ago. In a place far from humans. There were 11 worlds split into 10 factions. There are the Highbrerions, The Necroberions, The Inslavions, The greetarions, The Blitzquerions, The demandeions, The Great Impelrions. These are the only known 7 to date. Lets start with the Highbreions in chapter 1. in chapter 2 we will talk about the Necroberions.

The Highbrerions are the strongest of all the Great races. Their Ranking system can be questionable about... certain things. but further more they have lived millions of years and were the First race ever created by the Great Council. There has always been one family known to rule over them. they are the Strongest of the Highbrerions. They are known as the Yakato Family. Little history about them as well as the rest of their race.

The Yakato family has always been stronger then everyone else. they have been the protectors of the their people. Each generation they get stronger. The current generation is by far. The complete strongest. The head of the family is Takuya Tatara Yakato. He has classified the different types of Highbrerions. He him self is know as a BerserkKnightHealer. A rare breed in the Highbrerions.

Berserkers are more powerful between them and the knights and healers. they focus on a mix of light and heavy armor in battle. They hit harder and move faster then the knights but if ever in danger of dying their power become Greater as a last resort they will kill over thousands of people before dying off. They gain power by seeing someone they love the most dying before their eyes or thinking of thoughts of someone they love dying. It get mad and with all the anger built up they release it all by evolving into the next stage in their own ways. their look of armor can be different to everyone else to give them their own look. this can be found in all the types.

Knights are heavy armored defensive types. Their heavy armor can protect them from a full blown power blast by a Berserker. They tend to be slower then both Berserkers and healers but with great slow punches. Full force they can one hit kill someone as long as they can land it. They tend to remove their armor if they ever need to win a battle as fast as they can. If ever mixed with a berserker, BerserkerKnights are a lot more powerful then both Knights and Berserkers. They have different ways of powering up then Berserkers. More then one way in most cases like Takuya's Brother Grimm who is a knight. did I forget to tell you they are twins? We'll get more into detail about that later. But back to Knights. all they have to do is think about who they want to protect with their life.

Healers are rare to come by. Takuya's 2 lil sister's Saren, and Sarayza. Healers can heal about anything that comes to mind in many different ways. You often see Knights and Berserkers having been mixed with Healer's healing powers. although it takes slower time to heal. Healers are often in back ready to heal a Knight or a Berserker who has been in battle and switched out to be healed. Though only one Healer can heal instantly and that is the only other Second BerserkKnightHealer. that is Takuya and his great great great great great great great great great grand father who is the Highbrerion's council member.

Takuay has many brothers and sisters. Takuya has 2 other twins other then Grimm. Sakiya and Lexcier. Takuya is the strongest because he was the very first born on his generation. the Second to be born is Grimm and then Lexcier and then Sakiya. Sakiya didn't show any signs of her powers till after 3 times Takuya has put her into a coma do to the fact Sakiya was very weak at first and was never able to withstand Takuya's fire power. Takuya didn't mean to put his little sister into a coma he blamed himself for it everytime he used his fire power. But then one day he had an idea of making something for his sister to withstand his power. As every Highbrerion from the age of 4 has always created their very own necklace witch is a way to show off their power. He gave the necklace he made her and she overflowed with her power finally awakening. Thanks to that she became the Second in their generation to be most powerful next to her idol her Big twin brother she loves very much.

Takuya has 4 other little brothers. The 5 oldest is Drake. a full blow KnightBerserker with fire power. And next to him is Dom Who is a BerserkHealer with darkness power. and Takuya's other 2 brothers are twins as well as his little sister's Saren and Sarayza his little sisters having Bright Light power and his little brothers having Darkness power.

Takuya him self not only being the Second BerserkKnightHealer, he has All three power forms. Darkness, BrightLight, and Fire Witch makes him a dangerous force who is Feared by most of the Necroberions.

Each Highbrerion having all that I have said they also from birth have many spirits living within them. Takuya is the only one known to have many spirits. One of them fights for control witch was the reason why Takuya put his sister in a Coma the very first time and nearly almost killed very Highbrerion. With all that power he has he couldn't control it all till he reached the age of 14 and started to travel to many of the other worlds. He has been inslaved by the Inslavions and have broken free to the great grass fields of the greetions to back home where he finished his training with Sakiya and was able to fully control his power and was the first to fuse with his Dragon Leonides. a Dragon perfect with his personality. Following Takuya his younger brothers and sister, Sakiya, Drake, Dom, and Grimm to fuse with theirs.

After fully mastering his powers and continues to grow stronger his Father tried to force him into being the king. He has faced many challenges and completely killed his Father for good letting Lexcier be the queen of their people seeing Grimm and Sakiya never wanted to be the head of their people.

After living their days in peace The Necroberions started to attack and Takuya was forced to finally take the thrown and fight off the invasion and winning the 5 year long war. Takuya and the Necroberion king Vice make a peace treaty. living their days as allies. and Readying for future invasions from the other races, Impelions, Blitzquerions, Demandeions and Inslavions.

End of chapter 1.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-9 06:12:30

The great story of the great races Chapter 2. The Necroberions history.

Necroberions are a war based driven of all the great races. They are pretty similar to the Highbrerions like the ways they look and the ranking system they work very differently. In all their history they have had many civil wars over opinions. Never once have they been in peace longer then a few years. Weather it's over other races or their own they always seem to go into war. The one race they seem to go into war with the most is the Highbrerions because they are natural enemies. Though they never seem to win any of those wars they always seem to have a reason why to keep trying. No one but them know the reason why.

They have a type of necroberions they are called copy kings. They copy the face of the current king of the Highbrerions and always fail. They may have the look of the king but they never seem to be close in the power range to even try to completely kill a king off before he comes back to life and destroy them. In each generation the number of the copy kings always have a limited range of 50. They don't live long because of the randomness they bring to their lives. Each one is picked randomly from birth. weather want to or not and never has one ever reached the age of 30.

Another type of necroberion is the blast beasts. They are a powerful power house type of necros. The way they are not one of them will give mercy to someone even if told to by their king. With their power they are very insane and tend to go have in packs of 5 to 7 to attack randomly the king of the highbrerions. If they weren't wasting time on random attacks they would have been useful in very war the necros have faced. Because of their personalities they tend to fight with one another over leadership of their packs.

One other type of necroberions are very known to be similar to highbreion berserkers but have different types of patterns. The whole type it's self is what makes up most of the necroberion armies. And for some reason they are the only one of the types to follow orders to every word given by the king. not much is known about this type but we do know they don't act like normal berserkers. They also like the blast beats fight in packs but only in 3s.

The necros are the one of the only 3 races that are known to have elemental powers mixed with everything. Like the Highbrerions they also have their own birth type of element. But unlike Highbrerions they only have 1 type. Their king Visural Gan Vice is known to have an Ice element. Each fight he had with Takuya he hardly ever won because of the fact Takuya has 4 elements. Darkness, Brightlight, fire and lightning. Always known to be in Darkness mode Takuya can pull his element together. How ever he rarely ever uses all of them at once against anyone. Normally he fuses his fire with his darkness and lightning with darkness and brightlight with lightning. And it's thanks to that power Takuya always won against a fight with Visural, and for some reason he always let Visural get away. Maybe he sees him as a great friend in the future.

Visural gan vice. The only known great king of the necroberions to always have a plan of great timing need always won in the civil wars that broke out. His leadership ever since he was at the age of 12 always won in most fights. It's because of those wins he earned he meet his lovely beautiful queen Shaer Lun Vice. Witch has always been at his side of great stress over a lose against Takuya and always have made him feel better.

After of the many loses of his people over the necroberion and highbrerion 5 year long war he made a peace treaty finally with Takuya making him an ally to aid him over his civil war witch Takuya was most thankful to help into show he wants to respect of the peace.

End of chapter 2.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-9 09:28:31

so what does everyone think about the story so far eh? good, bad? yes, no?

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-8-9 16:24:56

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-9 09:28
so what does everyone think about the story so far eh? good, bad? yes, no?

I like it!

author: Ragnos time: 2015-8-9 17:38:05

Reminds me of when I was writing Coffin of my Imagination On the forums, but apparently not a lot of people liked it so I stopped writing it. I was going to do a FMAB Fanfic, but it didn't go over well.
I have tried writting a book called Alvond, but I lost motivation to continue so it just sits in my hard drive with 26 chapters and no one to read it.

author: [email protected] time: 2015-8-9 19:44:34

I like it , It will be wonderfull if imagaes can be included

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-10 07:49:23

[email protected] replied at 2015-8-9 19:44
I like it , It will be wonderfull if imagaes can be included

i cant right now but when my skills at drawing increase and I am able to draw each character and different types of each race I'll post them. at the moment im just introducing each race then the main story will come in on Takuya's life and the shit he went through and the many evos he went through.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-10 07:50:50

Ragnos replied at 2015-8-9 17:38
Reminds me of when I was writing Coffin of my Imagination On the forums, but apparently not a lot o ...

I had this story in my head along time and I just kept making it up like I have my own anime/manga in my head and it never stops. once I finish introducing the last few races i'll do character back grounds getting more into them then the main story of Takuya the main character.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-10 07:51:12

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-8-9 16:24
I like it!

Sweet

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-8-10 07:54:47

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-10 07:51
Sweet

thanx dude! *smiles*

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-10 09:21:36

Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-8-10 12:13

The Great story of the great races. Chapter 3. History of the Impelrions.

The Impelrions.. well lets say most of their work is unknown. They have the weirdest look to them then all the races. Unlike the other races Impelrions don't look much like humans. Fangs with black spikes sticking out with great powerful robot arms. The only time they have ever been seen with another races is when one of their own heard about takuya's power and wanted to test him out for his self. With his king behind him and the king's younger brother and sister all 4 head to where Takuya is and arrives safely where Zekke the one who wanted to challenge him attacks and is beat.

The different types of Impelrions is unknown. As not much is known about them and when asked to they still will not tell because of secrets they have. But they have said before there are many types of them. But will not give a number of how many. The council and Takuya knows how many types there are and what they are, but are not saying anything.

The Impelrions are a secretive race more then the others are and have been allied to the Highbrerions and their allies. Though they aren't good at getting along with the necroberions they still try to be nice to them as much as they can before Takuya steps in. The greetarions are also there as allies but they will come in the next chapter so I cant say too much about them. But mostly each ally there is the impelrions are forced by their king and takuya to stay clam as much of anger there is between the necros and them.

The Impelrions and the Necroberions don't have a good history. The necroberions have launched countless tries in the past to attack the Impelrions and won 15 battles and almost won the war if the current king Visural Gan vice wouldnt have thought the Highbrerions to have been a bigger threat to them at the current state of their well begins after hearing how Takuya broke out of the Inslavions hold on him with all his force and nearly killed their entire race. So the impelrions should really be thanking Takuya a lot more then they have been but still. Takuya wont take thanks that lightly as he was just saving himself a the time and getting back home to his bothers and sisters. Later on Takuya heard they the necros were attacking them and readying up for them and heard again that they stopped attacking them and started to head his way witch he sent 2 messages saying not to thank him but as always the Impelrion look up to him as the savior and their king who is on the council says Takuya is one of the people he is glade to be allies to instead of enemies.

In further more ways. The Impelrion king Phoenix who has lived thousand of years before Takuya's time has been in many battles and should have great time thinking of ways to have beaten the necros. instead the necroberions were to trouble some it took only Takuya the Highbrerion king to beat the necroberions over the time of 5 years witch took longer time then when necroberions attacked the Impelrions. It comes to show one great race to be the strongest and the second to take 5 years over one generation while it took thousand of years for the impelrions to fend off the necroberions.

End of chapter 3.

author: sithumya time: 2015-8-10 09:46:57

Nice!

Looking forward for the rest!

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-13 05:43:06

The Great story of the great races. Chapter 4. The Grass Fields of the Greetarions.

The greetarions are a peaceful race of the super beings. No other race is strong enough of a will to try to destroy that peace. Takuya has learned many things from the Greetarions of the ways of grassy life from his master. Shinko Monkata. and old wise member of the council. He is the only greetarion other then his father and his father and is father are the only known to know the ways to bring life back into a once dead begins. It was thanks to him that Takuya was able to restore the ones who lost there lives on one of Takuya's rampages. His mother was one of those many people who lost their lives and has been brought back to life thanks to Master Shinko Monkata.

Shinko Monkata travels to many of the worlds of the begins. from the necroberions to the Inslavions to the Highbrerions and Impelrions. He sometimes takes his duty seriously and when the other council members point him to a task he will do it with peace. He was once forced to show his great power of nature to clam Takuya down from a rampage to his people. It was then and there he made Takuya his student and shown him many ways to live in peace and to control his anger and power.

Greetarions have been known to always try to stop wars by stepping in and going to each side and try to teach them war wasnt the answer then needed. They often leave if they cant help either side of a war.

There are 4 different types of greetarions. One of them is a wise group of FieldKickers. They help speed nature for crops and other things. They dont talk much as taking to nature takes alot out of them more then the others. They each have Scythes they use to rake the fields to plant speeds, and use there powers to complete the whole Field in one days. But they can only do that if there are 5 of them giving power to the field.

A different type of greetarions are those who can restore bones and flesh to things that once was removed from a battle and other things. Though they tend to the animals more. They cant do much. This is one type that cant do alot because of many reasons. One of those reasons and cuz they hardly leave their home world and the council world to help animals.

One of the other greetarion types can be defensive and offensive As they can control the ground at will. It takes them many years of training to perfect it. They tend to be 50 year old men. They start at the age of 8 to 50. It may take many years but with so much training and caring love from loved ones They can forcefully move Mountains at will and shape them to create many different things. The way it can be offensive is that when in danger they will cause an earthquake in an area to knock their enemy down and crush them if needed to protect someone in danger. They tend to help in a few select wars, But they only join a war of a different race if the Environment is in grave danger.

The last type are the Women of the greetarions helping with water flows through rivers, lakes ect. They are the more peaceful ones of the race and never leave their world for any reason. At an young age they marry their lovers In the meadows Picking flowers they love the most. Once they find their lovers and connect to Them They marry at the age of 14 through 16 and have Babies at the Age of 17.

The king of the greetarions are the only ones who have a certain type of nature power. They have knives and normally join a war if the ones they sent to take care of the land cant be helped. So they through their knives at the center of the land and sit down and channel the power of nature and with a single touch the land is restored in matter of seconds. The only known non-Greetarion who can use this power if Takuya cause his Master Shinko Monkata shown him this power to help him take care of his lands on his own home world after his restored his people.

The greetarions are the allies of the Highbrerions, Impelrions, the Necroberions and BlitzQuerions. They serve as peace makers to make sure no fight between their allies over come the reason of being allies. Shinko Monkata and the other kings of the allied races Takuya, Visural, Phoenix and Mat Taow hold many meetings on the greetarion home world. If any fight between the kings over come Takuya and Shinko looks at each other and know what they are thinking of what to do in a matter of sorts.

End of chapter 4.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-13 06:50:50

The Great story of the great races. Chapter 5. Inslavions controls most.

The Inslavions are the slave masters of all the races. They go to random towns thats not well protected and destroys the whole town and enslave everyone from it to be forced to do their dirty work in the mines and torture. They do this cause it's in their blood. They are the only Race who dare tries to enslave Greetarions. But never do. The inslavions over a time once enslaved Takuya to control him to wipe out towns faster and control every race. But thanks to His uncontrollable power deep within him self Takuya broke free and was no longer their slave.

Inslavions tend to attack small towns. Never big ones with many guards. They do this cause they know they would have bigger chances of taking over then they do with bigger towns without plan. Inslavions know how to think of he best ways to take ever and thats is with smal teams of 5 to a town and over time they forcefully put everyone in chains and force them to be slaves of any kinds. For the female Inslavions they seek the children to fetch them drinks and tortures them till they are painfully broken. The men seek power and lust. You can often find them being lustful then greedy with power. They take the women of ages 14 and keep them around in chains and broken them of their will to be saved. While they have the men work in the mine in search of a powerful stone that is said to take control of any of the kings of the other races. They found and used the stone on Takuya but his will to be freed was to powerful for them.

The many types of Inslavions are dangerous to meet. If you do indeed meet any of them you will forcefully be raped by one tpye of them. The Lustful Beasts. They tend to act nice to you buying you drinks and stuff you seek. And once they have you by their finger tips they take you to a place known to never let you go unless you are broken of will and serve a master. It can be any gender. It's mostly men tho. Takuya has encountered 3 of these kinds and Killed them before they could try anything. You can tell they are the Lustful beasts when you cut them their blood is yellow.

The other types of them are just as dangerous. They are called the Masters of Slaves. Once they have their eyes set on someone they will not lose them. In most cases they tend to stalk you to your home and kidnap you in the middle of the night and through you in a cell in their leaders dungeon and will ultimately brake your will to live and will force you in the mines to find stones that can control others then kill you once meet a certain stand. Once they are done with you. You can run but you will die.

The last type is known to be the higher ups. In charge of the Master of Slaves. Giving orders to the lower ranks and waiting till they have what they want and spend most of their time planing each town's downfall and sleeping with women. They are powerful. The most powerful of the higher ups are mostly women. Men in their eyes are just toys to be used. They often plan and talk about Enslaving Takuya to wed them by force but each time one tries they Die. Completely since the Highbrerions are the strongest race they are well protected by their king and The armed forces of the knights and berserkers.

One of the Higher ups in the Inslavions is known to be named Spindra spida. The Queen to over rule of the Inslavions. She has allied her self with the other great evil races to bring Takuya's allies and him down at once To all be slaves for her. She is the most Terrifying one of her and her allies but there is a much more greater terror awaiting Takuya.

End of Chapter 5.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-13 06:56:55

2 more races to do.

then character back grounds...... god why did i do this?....

author: Suzuken time: 2015-8-13 08:20:05

you better continue this because i really hate cliffhangers

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-13 08:39:50

Suzuken replied at 2015-8-13 08:20
you better continue this because i really hate cliffhangers xD

dont worry. im done with the chapters today. i got all that i was going to do. missed 2 days got those. wait.... shit. 6 is today.... well. going to work on that one. hopefully i can think of the rest of this chapter. last 2 races are rarely in the main story.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-13 09:43:52

Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-8-14 11:27

The great story of the great races. Chapters 6. The Blitzquerions and the Demandeions Unknown story.

The Blitzquerions and the Demandeions are 2 rare races that hardly show them selves to the other races. The only things the council knows about them is limited. One of the things thats known about the Blitzquerions is that they all have blades. Many blades on them. Their armor of choice.... is a bit weird, but it still provides what it's made to do. Protect the wearer and kill. One time a Group of them Attack Takuya and his family.
Takuya ended up killing the leader of the group and the 3 others that attacked stopped and tried to become allies with the highbrerions after what they just saw. One of their own one of the strongest in their race dead in the blink of an eye. After talking with Takuya and making peace only for a short time one of the men Taranyun Litze looks to the side lines and sees a highbrerion girl. She looks back. They looked deeply into each others eyes and Seemed like they were in a trance of love at first sight, buuuuuut Takuya knew who the young Blitzquerion was looking at , and boy did Takuya almost kill him. Tatanyun was looking straight at One of Takuya's Daughters. His Oldest daughter. Kaysen. Not a fun day for that guy.

The demandeions are a real rare races allied with the Inslavions and the Blitzquerions and the other 3 Unknown races. Once thought to be to all dead proved to be wrong in history. The council when met with Takuya were shocked as he was of them. They are a rare unknown race. Though it is clear to everyone. They Hate Takuya Deeply.

End of chapter 6.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-14 08:33:44

Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-8-14 10:37

ok today is going to be something different. im going to test you guys on what you know so far about each race.

Q#1. What is the main character's Name?

Q#2. who is the second strongest of the Highbrerions of the current generation?

Q#3. Witch race did i do an introduction about in chapter 4?

Q#4. Witch races is always looking for stones to mind control people?

Q#5. Witch of the races are war based?

Q#6. Witch of the greetarions is the most offensive type?

Q#7. in witch chapter did i say Takuya has kids?

Im only doing 7 questions sine there should be to hard for yall

let me know all the answers you can think of in one full message. winner will get.... NOTHING XD hey im broke. planing a wedding can take alot of money and out on a guy. o-o btw im not putting chapter 7 witch gets into the main story till i see at least 9 people answer the questions. i want to see who all is really into it since 7 is the start of the main.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-14 10:53:03

^ read the last bit plz. i edited it.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-15 06:40:07

im shocked that there were so many people viewed this post but no one answered any of the easiest questions i could give. kinda sad now.

author: Ladylust time: 2015-8-15 08:49:07

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-15 06:40
im shocked that there were so many people viewed this post but no one answered any of the easiest qu ...

-Pats your head- there there bro. i like it. X3

author: Suzuken time: 2015-8-15 08:54:11

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-15 14:40
im shocked that there were so many people viewed this post but no one answered any of the easiest qu ...

everyone is too lazy to read it again because am sure 99% of those who read it forgot everything

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-8-15 11:20:16

Suzuken replied at 2015-8-15 08:54
everyone is too lazy to read it again because am sure 99% of those who read it forgot everything

well. that'd explains alot. guess i'll take that quiz down and post chapter 7 later.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-8 21:37:58

gonna give this a lil bump. did anyone like it at all?

author: ShiroKamikaze time: 2015-12-28 23:59:37

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-14 08:33
ok today is going to be something different. im going to test you guys on what you know so far about ...

Q1: Takuya
Q2: Sakiya? (Not so sure)
Q3: Greetarions
Q4: Inslavions (?)
Q5: Necroberions (?)
Q6: (hehe Imma look back for this one) wait what. I don't really know how to answer this question. x~x um um
they can control the ground and are old men of 50
Q7: Chapter 6
I'm sowwy if I answered a lot of them wrong DDDDDDDD:

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-12-29 00:27:53

Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-12-29 00:29

ShiroKamikaze replied at 2015-12-28 23:59
Q1: Takuya
Q2: Sakiya? (Not so sure)
Q3: Greetarions

ok 1,2,3,4,5.6 are right. i have to look back at what i asked for in the 7th question XD lol.
EDIT: 7 is right. i guess since at least one person answered them all i can continue with the story now.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-12-29 01:56:16

imam say fuck it. tomorrow when i get up im going to find some god damn paper and a pencil and just draw what i can of each race. if its shit oh well lol. but if someone can point in to the way of a good site i can at least try to draw on the internet and shit. i have ideas and they need to be put out on this lol.

author: ShiroKamikaze time: 2015-12-29 12:58:21

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-12-29 00:27
ok 1,2,3,4,5.6 are right. i have to look back at what i asked for in the 7th question XD lol.
EDIT ...

yay
XD
I look forward to another chapter

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