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author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-24 17:58:57 Title: Ragnos: Drawing (Incomplete)

Hey Guys!
I got into the drawing mood, and so I drew this (He is not from any anime, I just drew him) I'm not completely done with him yet, I still have to make a few tweakes and do his upper-most body.
If there are any flaws that you see that I can fix let me know and I'll see about making adjustments to it.

[attach]8545[/attach]

author: ryugakill time: 2015-9-24 18:11:44

Looks good to me

author: awesomeprussia1 time: 2015-9-24 18:27:16

that looks wonderful!

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-24 18:35:03

ryugakill replied at 2015-9-24 17:11
Looks good to me

Thanks, but something just seems off to me... hrm.

author: ryugakill time: 2015-9-24 18:46:35

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-24 18:35
Thanks, but something just seems off to me... hrm.

The shadow looks bad to me now that I looked closer

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-24 18:52:52

ryugakill replied at 2015-9-24 17:46
The shadow looks bad to me now that I looked closer

Under the neck or the slight shadow I gave to the hair?

author: ryugakill time: 2015-9-24 18:53:35

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-24 18:52
Under the neck or the slight shadow I gave to the hair?

Yeah that's what I'm talking about bro

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-24 18:54:13

ryugakill replied at 2015-9-24 17:53
Yeah that's what I'm talking about bro

So both...

author: ryugakill time: 2015-9-24 19:18:11

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-24 18:54
So both...

The hair is fine but the shadow is bad

author: erlonr time: 2015-9-25 10:50:06

it looks very nice dude!

author: TanakaAiri time: 2015-9-25 10:53:17

Edited by TanakaAiri at 2015-9-25 10:54

Well I'm not an artist .....(failed every art exam in school) but anyway, on topic of shadows, the shadows under his neck on the right side looks a bit odd? Idk like if its just "too much". The left side looks more smooth...even ...to me

But other than that!! Looks awesomeee! Should totally draw me a pic of Shunsui so i can print n hang in my room....wud totally be my BFFL

author: RiadDahoe time: 2015-9-25 11:19:52

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-24 18:35
Thanks, but something just seems off to me... hrm.

maybe the scar is 2 big, anyways, awesome work , i have problems drawing a square ..lolzz

author: SeptaTK time: 2015-9-25 11:36:35

You drawn super nice his Hair.

You should make him look Angry ;D (Eyes)

author: MylarHyrule time: 2015-9-25 12:28:25

nose and chin don't quite line up right... check the jaw line from the tip of the nose down. and to have that hard of a shadow on the right side of his neck, he'd need a much stronger jaw to have that much shadow on the left. he looks good, just the devil is in the details.... BTW, I can't draw to save my life... just took too many art classes, lol

author: criminal238 time: 2015-9-25 12:41:54

Eyebrows maybe.

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-9-25 15:33:36

TanakaAiri replied at 2015-9-25 10:53
Well I'm not an artist .....(failed every art exam in school) but anyway, on topic of shadows, the s ...

nibbles seconds this

author: [email protected] time: 2015-9-25 19:38:55

ummm , it will be cool if he get some shade above his eyes , that will be awesome , btw nice effort brother!

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-25 20:09:43

you chose a mix between 3d and 2d on this drawing which doesn't bode well for a sketch/anime drwaing like that rejoices only the body, so try and find the certain style of 'camera' onto the picture

missing quite a lot on the face in terms of detail, go wild on there!

the layered hair looks to be the best of it all, nicely done from top-bottom, great job ^^

author: [email protected] time: 2015-9-25 22:48:27

Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-25 20:09
you chose a mix between 3d and 2d on this drawing which doesn't bode well for a sketch/anime drwaing ...

agree with this here, the shadow in hair would be better if you mirrored it onto the left side and the right side, at first glance i thought it looked crooked due to the nose and chin, the idea of the scar is good.. but might wanna slim that up a bit and probably add face lines, laugh lines, 5'0'clock shadow.. maybe even cheekbone indents

author: ataksuki time: 2015-9-26 03:50:17

iBrows

author: sithumya time: 2015-9-26 09:35:16

looks great to me!

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-26 22:00:15

MylarHyrule replied at 2015-9-25 11:28
nose and chin don't quite line up right... check the jaw line from the tip of the nose down. and t ...

Well, it is work in progress.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-26 22:01:11

criminal238 replied at 2015-9-25 11:41
Eyebrows maybe.

To be added. Don't worry.

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-9-26 22:31:18

Edited by sirnibbles at 2015-9-26 22:33

[attach]8693[/attach]my first graphic tablet drawing

author: [email protected] time: 2015-9-26 22:44:05

sirnibbles replied at 2015-9-26 22:31
my first graphic tablet drawing

cooollllllll

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-26 22:46:27

sirnibbles replied at 2015-9-27 03:31
my first graphic tablet drawing

dude

i mean cat

when the fuck could you do this shit

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-9-26 22:47:02

Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-26 22:46
dude

i mean cat

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-26 22:48:44

sirnibbles replied at 2015-9-27 03:47

seriously

this is something im happy to last see before i go to sleep

author: MylarHyrule time: 2015-9-27 07:10:35

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-26 22:00
Well, it is work in progress.

and a hell of a work it is!! please don't' take my critiques as negative. You asked where it needed work because it didn't look right... those were really the only places i saw little tweeks would help the overall look of it. Keep up the good work bro, You might have a chance to make a paycheck with them pencils, take it!!

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-27 18:29:12

MylarHyrule replied at 2015-9-27 06:10
and a hell of a work it is!! please don't' take my critiques as negative. You asked where it ne ...

No, I'm thankful for your feedback. Always got to strive for better.
Though no matter how good I get there is always someone better.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-27 18:30:06

Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-26 21:48
seriously

this is something im happy to last see before i go to sleep

Please me tell you guys are joking...

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-27 18:34:19

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-27 23:30
Please me tell you guys are joking...

dude this is not planned, i didn't know the cunt could draw xDDDD

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-27 18:44:13

Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-27 17:34
dude this is not planned, i didn't know the cunt could draw xDDDD

*Sigh* The things people take from Deviantart....

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-27 18:51:34

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-27 23:44
*Sigh* The things people take from Deviantart....

ikr what horrible people ;)

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-9-27 19:04:16

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-27 18:44
*Sigh* The things people take from Deviantart....

ugh

no one can actually do good things anymore can they, everything just has to come from somewhere

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-9-27 19:08:20

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-27 18:44
*Sigh* The things people take from Deviantart....

maybe this will convince you?
[attach]8715[/attach]
if you're wondering why it says "fo nibs" that's because i wanted to put a signature on it but my handwriting sucks, especially when trying to write all fancy...also the friend of mine that did do that part is just weird

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-27 20:38:07

sirnibbles replied at 2015-9-27 18:08
maybe this will convince you?

if you're wondering why it says "fo nibs" that's because i wanted t ...

I see three improvements done by Abode Light room.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-27 20:39:22

I've been working on the drawing. I'm must say it is starting to look very good, thanks to everyone's feedback.

author: sirnibbles time: 2015-9-27 20:59:23

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-27 20:38
I see three improvements done by Abode Light room.

..............

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-28 10:56:50

sirnibbles replied at 2015-9-28 01:59
..............

because paying for a software is what you'd totally do, especially with your mad editing skills right cat?

Also if you can pay for an app, why not break the #EternalF2P code huh?

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-28 17:16:18

I've been practicing on some eyes. I'll upload them and see what you think.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-28 17:37:14

Edited by Ragnos at 2015-9-28 16:38

I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on.
I have two types (well three if you count the one on the bottom left with flames in his eyes.) one facing the viewer and the same, looking to the left.

[attach]8728[/attach]

author: ryugakill time: 2015-9-28 18:46:56

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-28 17:37
I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on. ...

Some of the eyes are good

author: Zento-Hazashi time: 2015-9-28 18:51:11

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-28 22:37
I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on. ...

most potential is within the 2nd and 4th eye

you should focus on tonal shading a bit more, seems quite identifiable there on how you're drawing those eyes

also im guessing you're using rubber for shine right? Work around it, don't just leave it there as a rub out, put light shine there, take a look at you're no.2 eye there more accurately, stare at it, think it's good? good, think you see something bad with that rubber space? improve

author: Ragnos time: 2015-9-28 20:52:04

Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-28 17:51
most potential is within the 2nd and 4th eye

you should focus on tonal shading a bit more, seems ...

Thanks for the feedback.

author: erlonr time: 2015-9-30 16:47:26

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-28 19:37
I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on. ...

wow,The 2nd eye is really good!

author: [email protected] time: 2015-9-30 17:07:10

kinda looks like starwind from outlaw star

author: Ragnos time: 2015-10-1 08:38:14

[email protected] replied at 2015-9-30 16:07
kinda looks like starwind from outlaw star

Huh, yeah it does. I never noticed that. Now I just need to give him a cape and a Caster. XD

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