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author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-25 13:43:35 Title: Zanpakuto creating contest

Edited by bossul12345 at 2015-12-3 12:05

WINERS:
1st Place: Yurakyaladei, zanpakuto Arimatsu
2nd place: SeiryuSky, zanpakuto hoshi no yoru
3th place: Raece, zanpakuto Akaihana
4th place: x-zero13, zanpakuto Kira and Kari
5th place Ragnos, zanpakuto Getsugami

Basicaly I just want to put some entertainment into our forum. Everyone who have ideas of your zanpakutos write it down and after week from today I will post top 5 best designed zanpakutos(I will put example of my zanpakuto, but won't participate in this contest).If you want to participate in contest, read example first.

My Zanpakuto
Name:Yosen(Hot metal)
Look: dark Orange hilt and white blade, sword is about japanese katana long.
Release comand: Melt Yosen.
Shikai ability: Sword apereance doesn't change, but there is steam of flames coming out of blade. It can controle fire and the max teperature of flames is 5000 Kelvin degrees.
Special skills:
Kaen no hoiru(flame wheel)- Huge flaming wheel.
suise(comet)- Large ball of flame that you shot at the enemy.Hono keji(flame cage)- Big cage of fire, trap enemy inside with no escape.
Weakness(must for every zanpakuto): If you use zanpakuto too long, it use too much of your reatsu, you can't controle flames and burn in there alive.

Bankai: Choshinsei-Yosen (Supernova- Hot metal)
Look: Sword handle become black with orange squares, blade starts to melt(more like become red-orange, like really hot metal), but don't lose the shape of sword.Abillity: Special ability is basically temperature of 50 000Kelvins, no more water in about 1000 km range, however bad thing is that bankai becomes 10000 ton weight, thats because of extreme density of the sword.
Special skills:Shin kaen no hoiru: Advanced version of regular flame wheel..
Kami no Keji(god's cage)- Extreame heat cage that even gotei 13 captains can't go trough.
Jigoku no mon(Hell's gate)- Deadly slash that cut everything in it's way, burns a lot of reatsu from you.
Chōshinsei(Supernova)- Wave of heat, max temperature of 100 000 Kelvins.
Saigo no kyoda(Final Bang)- Strongest attack of Yosen, user focus 1,42·1032(too many zeros) Kelvin temperature at one wave and shot it at enemy. Wave of extreame heat(max in universe btw)
doesn't harm anyone else, but only persone who stands in range of 1x1 km wave. Anyone who stands there, dissapear from existence. However, user use up all of his reatsu and die.
Weakness of bankai:
1. Can use only for short time, if you don't have ton of reatsu like yhwach.
2. If your reatsu too weak, you burn to death.
3. After final skill you basically die.
4. Dry every wet thing in 1000 km range( poor toshiro

).
5. Kill a lot of guiltless people who can't stand the heat.
6. Weaight is really extreme, if you aren't strong enough, you can't even lift it.
Edited

author: @ra5h_V time: 2015-11-25 16:42:50

simply dark screen and battle ends

author: asunayuki time: 2015-11-25 16:43:44

@ra5h_V replied at 2015-11-25 23:42
simply dark screen and battle ends

Mugetsu?

author: @ra5h_V time: 2015-11-25 16:45:11

asunayuki replied at 2015-11-26 00:43
Mugetsu?

toshiro bug?

author: asunayuki time: 2015-11-25 16:45:44

@ra5h_V replied at 2015-11-25 23:45
toshiro bug?

Bugs are nice but i prefer animals liek tigers and lion

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-25 19:12:52

does the name and the name of skills have to be in a different language or can we use english

author: AssassinwithRPG time: 2015-11-25 19:28:50

Sharingan
Normal Shinigami blade with sharingan hand gurad
Shika
Cast Illusion
Can Slow Down Time
Bankai
You get bitches and money
Sussano
And your opponent losses if he looks at you cos why not?
#Orginal

author: Ragnos time: 2015-11-25 20:13:37

Seen threads like this one three times already. Let me just go to the last one and get my Zanpakuto.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-11-25 20:26:13

Edited by Ragnos at 2015-11-25 19:28

Name:Getsugami (Piercer of Gods)

Release Phrase:Bite the Moon in Two!

What it looks like:The zanpakuto takes the form a sleek, medium to large-sized sword. The hilt has a gentle decorative bend. Instead of a crossguard, there is a V-shaped decoration covers the first three or four inches of blade, with a flame design right as it meets the string-crossguard. It also has a black decorative string wrapped thrice around the hilt, with a three-loop bow on one side. The zanpakuto's blade is straight and slim, with the tip ending in a slanted razor-like edge with very small hooks for tearing apart flesh instead of blade being tapered to a point.

Shikai Ability:Uses spiritual pressure to cover the wielders body, which in turn makes it extremely hard to harm the body. The Drawback to using this ability is that it is impossible to use flashstep while it is active.

Bankai Name:Shinigetsugami (Death Piercer of Gods)

What it looks like: Similar to the Shikai in shape, but is longer and not as wide. The wielder obtains a Black Trench coat.

Abilities
Buraindinguraito- Blinds everyone but the wielder for a few seconds.

*Compression*- Since the zanpakuto's form has, compressed it allows the wielder to move at incredibly high speeds.

Boyaku no ken- BY thrusting the Zanpakuto into the earth it is able to summon up to six blades that attack any foe simultaneously.

Short Story it is used in: Coffin of my Imagination

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-25 22:19:02

AssassinwithRPG replied at 2015-11-25 19:28
Sharingan
Normal Shinigami blade with sharingan hand gurad
Shika

lol love your bankai

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-25 22:23:49

Ragnos replied at 2015-11-25 20:26
Name:Getsugami (Piercer of Gods)

Release Phrase:Bite the Moon in Two!

lol ragnos whered you get the name from is it a different language or something like that

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 00:18:13

Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-11-26 17:15

gonna mess with the original design of it a bit and the ability it has a lil.
Name of sword: Kurayami No Tenshi. (angle of darkness)

Shikai form look: full on katana with the back of the blade full of sharp small blades going down on it from the tip to the hilt and has roses designs on the sides and the back part of the blade tinted with dark purple.

Ability: allows you to teleport with shadows all around the area of 4 kilometers from the front to the back of any where of your enemy and shoots shockwaves of darkness witch burns your enemy.

Bankai name: Kurai Tengoku. Dark Heaven.

Form Look: Same look from shikai but over all bigger size of it's self.

Ability: allows you to teleport you to a different realm witch overall gives you a bit increase in dark type attacks it's allowed to use witch in terms lets you fuck with your enemy and messes their minds up then teleports you back where you then cut off your enemies down.

Weaknesses: only real weakness it has is when you teleport the holder's defense is lower.

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-26 07:11:22

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-25 19:12
does the name and the name of skills have to be in a different language or can we use english

It can be english if you want.

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-26 07:14:25

Ragnos replied at 2015-11-25 20:26
Name:Getsugami (Piercer of Gods)

Release Phrase:Bite the Moon in Two!

Pleas add weakness of your zanpakuto, it's a must

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-26 07:14:54

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-26 00:18
gonna mess with the original design of it a bit and the ability it has a lil.
Name of sword: Kuray ...

Pleas add weakness

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 07:32:10

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-26 07:14
Pleas add weakness

hmm. never thought of a weakness for it.

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-26 10:12:03

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-26 07:32
hmm. never thought of a weakness for it.

It's a must, it more interesting like this. You can have small weakness, but it have to be here.
More stronger zanpakuto is, more weakness he have to have

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 10:33:12

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-26 07:11
It can be english if you want.

ok just wanted to check

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-26 11:01:10

Edited by Raeace at 2015-11-26 18:05

Name: Shirotsume No Ha (Whiteclaw blade)

Shikai form: Same length as basic zanpakuto with addition of nightblack hilt, snow white blade and black as dried blood line crossing the blade.
One of the fastest zanpakutos, hard to balance and requires both hands on the hilt or will fly off out of control. Can create sonicwaves with the speed of the blade that are weak in power, but can be casted multiple times in a row and can cast one huge sonicwave, but requires a lot of time to charge, which requires constant movement of the blade. For shikai form it uses extreme amount of physical energy and reiatsu which makes it high risk high reward shikai to use, and is rarely used due to the extreme effects to the user's body (fast depleting of energy, high level of concentration, reiatsu usage, lack of usage for both hands).

Bankai: Turns the blade into 2 white bracelets/knucklers. User gets his/her upper body's speed increased and partial faceguard from both arms. Bankai only gives a lot of speed and some defence with decent amount of damage, its extremely heavy, unlike the shikai form, and uses a lot of reiatsu and physical energy in form of strength. Only skill is rebound, which when taken hits from enemies can charger up the damage from enemy hits and blast it at them at free, it's not free to use technique since you take minor amount of recoil, which in such heavy bankai can cause a lot of selfharm, but it can cover a huge area and finish fight in a flash if the user can control the amount of damage taken. If the user can not control the damage taken he/she will get the damage bound by the Shirotsume No Ha by double it had originally taken, so in action it nullifies the damage and can create own attack by using enemy's attack, but if the enemy uses too much power for user to control or user stores too much it will cause nearly mortal recoil to the user.

So basically this is a zanpakuto with 2 extremely beneficial but risky forms, bankai and shikai, both cost huge toll and don't last long in fights, but can surprise enemies and destroy huge areas. The basic idea of the zanpakuto is its cost and speed it grants and shikai works best in ranged battles while bankai works both in ranged and melee battles due to the nature of rebound. And the difference between bankai and shikai in strength is huge, since the shikai grants a lot of speed, but close to no damage while the bankai grants defence, speed (limited to torso), and damage.

So if you are lazy here is the short version. Its white and black shikai with basic zanpakuto looks which is extremely fast and can create sonicwaves. Bankai is white armguard/faceguard that has huge amount of speed added to torso, can rebound damage with high risk. And both use a lot of physical strength, reiatsu and strength of mind, which is the reason I prefer using the basic zanpakuto form, which is basic zanpakuto with white and black hilt.

And I made this up in the fly so its to be expected to have some serious grammar errors and some repetition. And I didn't proofread it so have fun.
Edit: Bankai name is Kyojin No Shirogōon (White roar of giant)

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-26 11:57:45

Raeace replied at 2015-11-26 11:01
Name: Shirotsume No Ha (Whiteclaw blade)

Shikai form: Same length as basic zanpakuto with addition ...

Nice one, you done great job of creating it.

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-26 12:37:17

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-26 18:57
Nice one, you done great job of creating it.

Imagination is the best weapon ever created.

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 13:50:29

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-26 07:11
It can be english if you want.

lol I don't wanna do it in a different language than everybody else so can u tell me what language youre using

author: Suzuken time: 2015-11-26 14:03:52

Raeace replied at 2015-11-26 20:37
Imagination is the best weapon ever created.

it is indeed
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author: Raeace time: 2015-11-26 14:06:31

Suzuken replied at 2015-11-26 21:03
it is indeed

Tbh, I didn't even think of that...

author: Suzuken time: 2015-11-26 14:07:18

Raeace replied at 2015-11-26 22:06
Tbh, I didn't even think of that...

mmmmmm, you're dangerous

jk jk XD

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-26 14:10:18

Suzuken replied at 2015-11-26 21:07
mmmmmm, you're dangerous
jk jk XD

And I just read that chapter like 1 week ago... I just think somewhat 'artistically' and imagination just clicked...

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-26 14:34:36

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-26 13:50
lol I don't wanna do it in a different language than everybody else so can u tell me what language ...

Japanese language for name, just to make it sounds better.

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 14:37:02

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-26 14:34
Japanese language for name, just to make it sounds better.

lol true

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 15:57:46

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-26 00:18
gonna mess with the original design of it a bit and the ability it has a lil.
Name of sword: Kuray ...

lol dammit grimy I want to use something similar to that.
im still gonna do it though just having a hard time finding translations

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 16:12:40

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-26 15:57
lol dammit grimy I want to use something similar to that.
im still gonna do it though just having a ...

if ya need help let me know. with the power of google i shall find out what everything means.

author: domjiro time: 2015-11-26 16:26:08

Edited by domjiro at 2015-11-26 16:29

how about aizens Zanpakuto: Kyoka Suigetsu , maybe it will give
Vanguard: dmg rate +0%, hp +50%, avoid injury + 10%, recover rate 25%.
Assaulter: Dmg rate 17%, speed 12%,
Support: Dmg rate 19%, Speed 16%.
His ability will be :Atk will happen every 1,4,7 rounds. Attack all enemys growth rate 20%, decrease enemy speed and hitrate by 15% and increase ally supports and assaulters dmg rate by 20% and speed by 18% for 2 rounds.
and make the Attributes:
+375 Kido Atk
+375 Phys Atk
+375 Speed.

author: Crylix time: 2015-11-26 16:34:39

I love this thread, i'm lazy and uncreative to think of an intersting zanpakuto but reading yours makes me feel better. Keep up the competition :3

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 17:14:31

domjiro replied at 2015-11-26 16:26
how about aizens Zanpakuto: Kyoka Suigetsu , maybe it will give
Vanguard: dmg rate +0%, hp +50%, av ...

we're not doing that thing for in game. we're making our own zanpakuto. not characters who already have zanpakuto.

author: domjiro time: 2015-11-26 17:28:37

w.e still cool idea for in game tho ;p

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 18:24:00

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-26 16:12
if ya need help let me know. with the power of google i shall find out what everything means.

lol thanks my ideas are flowing so I don't need help yet

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 18:45:25

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-26 18:24
lol thanks my ideas are flowing so I don't need help yet

alrighty

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 18:52:41

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-26 18:45
alrighty

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 18:59:07

Raeace replied at 2015-11-26 11:01
Name: Shirotsume No Ha (Whiteclaw blade)

Shikai form: Same length as basic zanpakuto with addition ...

lol detailed mother fucker

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 19:06:45

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-26 18:52

author: Ragnos time: 2015-11-26 19:51:29

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-25 21:23
lol ragnos whered you get the name from is it a different language or something like that

I dunno I just put together.

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 19:54:48

Ragnos replied at 2015-11-26 19:51
I dunno I just put together.

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 19:55:42

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-26 19:06
XD

lol when you get on I would love your help I just cant find the translations.
#butletsdothatinpm

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 19:57:21

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-26 19:55
lol when you get on I would love your help I just cant find the translations.
#butletsdothatinpm

alrighty. im always on lol. just on twitter till events.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-11-26 19:59:47

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-26 06:14
Pleas add weakness of your zanpakuto, it's a must

Shikai Weakness- Unable to use flashstep

Bankai Weakness- Take more damage from attacks.

author: Ragnos time: 2015-11-26 20:02:50

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-26 18:54

It sounded cool so I kept the name. XD

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-26 21:14:16

Ragnos replied at 2015-11-26 20:02
It sounded cool so I kept the name. XD

lol true

author: Yahiger time: 2015-11-26 21:21:43

Zetsukou

Dark Blade with white top [no homo]
Shikai looks all flaming red
Bankai looks black and red
Chaos all enemies for one round
its all enemies

author: Yahiger time: 2015-11-26 21:23:26

Edited by Yahiger at 2015-11-26 21:29

Yahiger replied at 2015-11-26 21:21
Zetsukou

Dark Blade with white top [no homo]

Shikai- nomiai [made up]Burns and chaos for 2 rounds
Silences supporter row
Bankai-nomura flame [made up]

Burns and silences enemies for two rounds
Massive chaos damage on assaulters

[to get this zanpaktou u need to top up 4000]

author: Yahiger time: 2015-11-26 21:44:40

Name: Ilusión

Release words: Light Is My Speed

Looks:All white at the back of the blade its all purple.Looks very sharp the top sude but bottom sude looks like a butter knife the handles color changes dou to the how you look at it

Skills:infinite flashstep can make various clones gives wilder massive speed how ever it reduces strength dou to speed boost.

No Shikai

Bankai:Non-Illusion

Looks:top looks like a butter knife bottom looks sharp. Instad of the blade being white its no Sun Orange the bottom of the blade is now red.The handle is now white and its very long aswell

Skill: Doesnt reduce strength gives the user speed at even the eye gets confused.When flashstepping the user gets massive strength boost to attack and finally it can spot time for 10 minutes.

author: grimmjowpantera time: 2015-11-26 23:16:18

Yahiger replied at 2015-11-26 21:23
Shikai- nomiai [made up]Burns and chaos for 2 rounds
Silences supporter row
Bankai-nomura flame [m ...

you do know this is not for in the game stuff. just think of a personal zanpakuto.

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 03:47:52

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-11-27 06:16
you do know this is not for in the game stuff. just think of a personal zanpakuto.

Yeah and only one entry since people can only use one zanpakuto.

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 06:22:24

can we post more than 1 zanpakuto? It's just that I have several ideas...

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-27 07:40:41

Yahiger replied at 2015-11-26 21:23
Shikai- nomiai [made up]Burns and chaos for 2 rounds
Silences supporter row
Bankai-nomura flame [m ...

We are creating zanpakutos, but not for game. Better write it's ability

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-27 07:41:13

X-Zero13 replied at 2015-11-27 06:22
can we post more than 1 zanpakuto? It's just that I have several ideas...

As many as you want mate

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 07:42:56

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-27 14:41
As many as you want mate

That will ruin it :< Like in the series itself each person can only have one zanpakuto so with that rule this could become a spamfest. :|

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 07:55:35

Edited by SeiryuSky at 2015-11-27 08:11

Name: hoshi no yoru ( stars night )

Release Phrase: illuminate the shadows , hoshi  .... no yoru

What it looks like: the zanpaktou grip takes the shape of  a mid regular one but with two white rubans surrounding it on the same form of a DNA , then the part between the grip and the blade is a wave like silver from the 2 sides one getting down and the other up  , then the blade is a white-silver blade completely straight and on its end the half of it continues few cms straight and curve a little

Shikai Ability : while saying the release phrase the blade slowly fades up to very little light points  except the grip , the user then call its name loudly , like :" Hoshi no yoru , saiga no hikari , step 1 " and the little lights begin to grow traping the user and the enemy/ies in a light dome , the user then join his 2 hands with the grip horizontally between them and release his reiatsu to the grip ,the  dome then suddenly explodes , and the enemies soul are binded to chains , the user then shout :"step 2 " and and 7 swords get out of the enemies bodies all meeting in one point , the user then continue :" step 3 ( while leaving the grip to fall) ." and when it touches the land it slowly fade away and a light appear the chains that the enemies are bind to ,head to it and a light begin to pass through the chains turning enemies souls to dust

Bankai Name: Sutā paradokkusu ( star paradox)
release phrase : jikan o suka ( pass through time ) , that release phrase doesn't release his true power it just increases , speed , slows down time , and increase battle skills

true release phrase :kimemasu

What it looks like: Similar to the Shikai but the blade turns white with a light aureole covering it , the grip becomes easier to fight with .

Abilities

1/ jikan ono ( time axe ) : turning the sword 90 degree , the wielder close his eyes and condense his reiatsu in the blade , the light aura becomes wider , the aura then began to slowly condense as well becoming an intense  light aura , with little width , the wielder then is able to control the flow of time in the space-time  plan as well as permitted to pass through the limits of time ( AKA freezing or instant traveling in time) , the wielder can slow down time or accelerate it depending on his will , however the effects of the ability will not affect him , which will make the enemy feel that the wielder teleported while in fact he just moved after slowing down time.

2/photon Kakkitekina ( photon breakthrough) : the wielder gains an unbelievable increase in his agility and speed , as well in his battle abilities , being able to move faster than light itself , far though affecting time plan .

3/Sutārirīsu : final ability , the ability of creating an over master level kido , the effects of those kidos , are incomparable to the original ones , being able to cause much more damage ( one of them is vacuumasation , turning energy or something or anything to vacuum ) , more defense ( barriers ) , more speed and physical abilities ( shunko and hakuda ) , and as well a new type , the paradox , the ability to travel through the space-time plan , to anywhere and to anytime , mastering all these skills , will open you the gate to learn a forbidden level , the fate level , deciding fate itself , as well as being able to access to the soul paradox , far though controlling the everything

weakness :

shikai : the wielder is trapped in the explosion too , defenseless , leading to being damaged as well

bankai : when releasing his bankai consumes  part of the wielder's soul , making him weaker after finishing the battle , when using his last skill ( fate one ) , the amount consumed is far greater leading him to be unable to use his zanpaktou , until his soul recovers from the damage , if using it before it , the wielder soul will not be able to recover well , leading it to lose permanently ( unless someone sacrifice his soul for it ) a part of his soul

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:08:17

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 14:55
Name: hoshi no yoru ( stars night )

Release Phrase: illuminate the shadows , hoshi .... no yoru

Are YOU serious? Like are you Seiryu, are you ill? Whats happening?

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:09:55

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 14:55
Name: hoshi no yoru ( stars night )

Release Phrase: illuminate the shadows , hoshi .... no yoru

Btw, I love that broken English bankai name. <3

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 08:13:25

Edited by SeiryuSky at 2015-11-27 08:14

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 08:09
Btw, I love that broken English bankai name.

yeah , i love it , i have created many things like that i can add more , i am really creative ;) and yeah it is me , i was a good man who helped ppl who asked question until ppl begun to take me as a tool to have fun , so pao sensei took me in his arms and taught me troll , lol

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:15:40

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 15:13
yeah , i love it , i have created many things like that i can add more , i am really creative ;) an ...

I meant "Sutā paradokkusu" which is just broken English for Star paradox.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 08:16:43

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 08:15
I meant "Sutā paradokkusu" which is just broken English for Star paradox.

oh well that's its japanese name lol

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:19:41

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 15:16
oh well that's its japanese name lol

hoshi is a star

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:21:17

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 15:19
hoshi is a star

and you should know that being a naruto fan, there was that one country named after star (hoshi) and they had hoshikage

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 08:21:20

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 08:19
hoshi is a star

in japanese name in a sentence changes than just a name , for example the word star in star paradox , is defined by another word than the simple word star , see ? it's a complicated language lol

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:23:58

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 15:21
in japanese name in a sentence changes than just a name , for example the word star in star parado ...

You have your opinion, I have mine and your suta paradokkusu just looks like broken english to me, if you look how japanese spell english words that would be one example, and thats whats called broken english, or engrish, but I think engrish is more like 'all your base are belong to us'.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 08:26:31

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 08:23
You have your opinion, I have mine and your suta paradokkusu just looks like broken english to me, ...

lol yeah anyway , you like the zan ? i added weaknesses BTW

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 08:26:36

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 07:42
That will ruin it :< Like in the series itself each person can only have one zanpakuto so with tha ...

If a user inserts more than one, bossul could pick just one of them to count for the contest.
Also, i just have 2,5 ideas, so at least I wouldn't spam that much ;).

And on a side note, to me, this is more about sharing my ideas than participating or winning in a contest.

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:37:21

X-Zero13 replied at 2015-11-27 15:26
If a user inserts more than one, bossul could pick just one of them to count for the contest.
Also ...

I think its about sharing the best idea and maybe changing the other ideas to make more sense and maybe get in the same level as your best in originality.

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 08:37:40

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 15:26
lol yeah anyway , you like the zan ? i added weaknesses BTW

First time I read it felt a bit broken.

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-27 08:54:08

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 07:55
Name: hoshi no yoru ( stars night )

Release Phrase: illuminate the shadows , hoshi .... no yoru

nice mines still in the making

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-27 08:55:22

Edited by bossul12345 at 2015-11-27 08:57

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 07:55
Name: hoshi no yoru ( stars night )

Release Phrase: illuminate the shadows , hoshi .... no yoru

Really nice one mate, one of the better ones I could say.

author: [email protected] time: 2015-11-27 09:06:17

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 08:37
First time I read it felt a bit broken.

yeah cz it's not ingame :p you see i love broken things XD , but his weakness is deadly too lol

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 09:07:23

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-27 08:55
Really nice one mate, one of the better ones I could say.

thanks

i just created it right away when i saw the thread lol ... well i am thinking to add it to my novel lol

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 09:08:02

[email protected] replied at 2015-11-27 16:06
yeah cz it's not ingame :p you see i love broken things XD , but his weakness is deadly too lol

When I read it first time it didn't have a weakness.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 09:14:08

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 09:08
When I read it first time it didn't have a weakness.

OH I SEE

WELL I REALLY LOVE IT THOUGH XD

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 09:15:06

So, I'll start with the one I once came up with for a fanfiction. I hardly have any clue about japanese terms and names (where do you guys always get these?) for it, so it''s in english.

Name: Kira and Kari (It's a twin zanpakuto, like Kyoraku's)

Sealed form: 2 Tantos (More a knife than an actual sword, so even shorter blade than a wakizashi) with a Tsuba (hand guard), one with a red handle wrap, the other one with a blue handle wrap. Despite their shortness, they are kept in black scabbards for regular length katanas.

Shikai
Release command: "Spark!"
In Shikai form, the Tanto transform completely into 2 different kinds of Claws. The red one transforms into some kind of oversized glove that begins at the elbow. The back of that ellbow's hand and lower arm is covered in permanent flames. The blue tanto transforms into a claw that consists of 4 parallel blades, attached on a rail, which seems "equipped" to the arm. It has little lightning bolts constantly sizzling around it.
Powers: The red fire glove is very powerfull in terms of physical force. It can crush rocks and break guards easily, but it lacks speed. A punch engulfs the entire fist into flames and shots a fireball. A special technique is the five-stars-flame, that shots smaller fire projectiles from each finger that home in to the enemy in unpredictable flight lines from different angles. It is more suited for clawing/swiping moves than the other claw.
The other claw can summon a lightning bolt, even out of the blue. That bolt usually ends in the clarso the target needs to be above the user, to be in the line of the bolt. The claw can also emit high voltage on contact, making for a convenient counter when blocking metal weapons like other swords. Physical attacks are lower in attack power, but very fast, rapid stab attacks can be executed in fast succession easily.

Weakness: Water. Of course, water puts out the flames of the flame glove, taking it its fire-elemental abilities. While the user is immune to the other claw's electricity in the dry, the electricity becomes just as harmfull to the user when conducted through water.

I have a link to a drawing of the shikai available, if needed/wanted.

Bankai
Name: Blazing beast and sparking monster
The user gets claws on both hands and feet, with the elements fire and lightning for the diagonally placed claws (so what I mean is: fire on right hand and left foot and lightning on left hand and right foot). The emitted flames and lightnings get much larger, engulfing about 50% of the user's entire body.
The Bankai greatly increases the users speed and attack power as well as the energy output in form of flames and bolts. All 4 claws get the attack power of the shikai's red claw and the speed of the shikai's blue claw. A special technique is a large tornado of flames and electricity, paralizing the enemy and burning him at the same time.

Weakness: The water weakness remains. Adittionally, the user can't hold up this form very long, because the high energy output is very exhausting. Also, activating the bankai puts the user in some kind of half-berserk state, making him act and attack wildly and primarily out of instinct, leaving him mostly unable to think rationally and reasonable (tho the user can still distinguish friends and foe). This state makes the user narrow-minded and -sighted and vulnerable to strategic movements.

I also have the zanpakuto's spirit and the spirit's world, but since this is not asked here, I'll leave it at that

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 09:18:24

anyone interested in my other creation?

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-27 09:30:25

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 09:18
anyone interested in my other creation?

put it up lets see this beautiful creation

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 09:31:45

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-27 09:30
put it up lets see this beautiful creation

LOL IT IS BASICALLY A BBROKEN BUT BEAUTIFUL ONE

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-27 09:32:47

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 09:31
LOL IT IS BASICALLY A BBROKEN BUT BEAUTIFUL ONE

lol

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 09:35:20

Shadow49999 replied at 2015-11-27 09:32
lol

>_> i am writing it

author: Shadow49999 time: 2015-11-27 09:36:46

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 09:35
>_> i am writing it

lol yay mines gonna take a while but I will have it ready sometime

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 09:56:44

Edited by X-Zero13 at 2015-11-27 10:54

and the next one.

Name: Blade of changing form (I'm sure that name would sound awesome in japanese XD).

Sealed: Regular katana. Golden diamond-shaped tsuba, lemon green handle wrap. Scabbard with the same green color.

Shikai
Release command: "Lose shape!"
The sword loses it's blade and tsuba, the handle becomes completely white and symmetrical. The shikai's ability is to take on one of 5 different forms. The form is made out of pure light blue energy (reishi) that takes on the different forms. The basic form is still a sword, with a straight, triangular/arrow-shaped blade. It has a strong cutting power and can be wielded rather easy and fast. 2nd form is that of a big broad sword. Even tho the blade is still made out of energy only, it gets some weight what makes it slower, but also heavier and more powerfull in it's attacks. it's actually the slowest, but most powerfull form of the shikai. 3rd form transforms the blade into a scythe, giving it more range and a balance of speed and power. 4th form is that of a naginata (japanese spear with a curved blade at the end), also giving it more range as well as more various and defensive possibilities of usage. Last form is that of a long bow, shooting arrows that are made of the same blue energy as the bow itself. Its rather similar to a quincy's bow, but notably less powerfull and it also can't fire as rapidly.

Weakness: as every form has it's advantages, each of them ahs their weakness too. For example, the slower broad sword is weak against fast attacks. Also, changing the forms takes a little moment which leaves the user totally open for attacks, since the blade disappears completely while changing and the moment is long enough that even the average opponent could use it for a counter attack.

Bankai
Name: infinite forms
In Bankai state, the entire weapon disappears. Instead, the user can freely create and manipulate the energy that the shikai's blade(s) consist of. So as the bankai's name implies, the shapes that energy can take on is basically infinite, only limited to the users creativity and imagination. it can be any kind of weapon summoned out of nowhere, an armor, a 360° barrier without any blind spots, a complete doppelganger, even a small army of energy-shinigamis or an imitation of Senbonzakura Kageyoshi or Tengen Myo-oh. But: it can only take on shapes and hardness, no special properties as heat, coolnes, toxicness etc..

Weaknesses: As the bankai's power is determined by the user's imagination, it's also limited to it's thought processes. So if there is an attack that comes faster than the user's mind can get a grip on, he is still vulnerable. Same goes for anything that is simply beyond his attention; he can be hit by surprise attacks he doesn't notice. ...unless he protects himself in advance. Also, gas can penetrate even a barrier of the energy (but slowly only). And last but not least, a long and/or high usage drains out the users energy too, especially when summoning large amounts of the energy (like mentioned army or Tengen Myo-oh).

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-27 10:04:15

All you guys are putting so much great job in to thous zanpakutos. It will be interesting contest

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 10:48:22

Name: kogane no taka ( golden falcon)

Release Phrase: rise from the last skyline ... kogane , no taka

What it looks like: the zanpaktou grip takes the shape of a black medium grip , the sword weight is so low , which enable to easilly battle with it , between the blade and the grip there is a round circle attacked to the grip by 4 curved gold metal rubans and in the circle there is a small eclipse linking the 2 extremities of the circle , the blade is a golden one , long but light . the extremity of the sword curve a little by little and the katana itself is curved from the cutting side

Shikai Ability : while saying the release phrase the sword and the user become surrounded by a thin golden reiatsu , the wielder is guaranteed a master level of agility and combat abilities , as well as mental abilities , like analysing the enemies combat styles and countering it , as well , as a special ability to see through the person soul , being able to read his mind , see through his memories , and affecting them by a degree , like creating illusion at a high level of affection . during the shikai state , the wielder becomes so light , and gain a godlike force , as well as his perceptions level increase being able to see even fast thing clearly and avoid them , using noise , smell , touch and view to analyse the situation around him , wielder's recovery rate can be compared to an immortal . when mastering this ability , the user can learn another ability , using the aura , in order to create an attack and user is able to manifest another sword linked to the other one by a chain on the grip that can extend ( because it's formed of reiatsu ) , allowing the user to create a reiatsu clone , to confuse the enemy , while holding 2 swords the wielder can learn many other combat techniques.

Bankai Name: Taiyō no kami ( god of sun )

release phrase : Yoake kara mezamemasu , that release

What it looks like: Similar to the Shikai but the blade is longer and the aura gets wider and more intense , it manifests a high gravitational push , that makes enemy unable to release their reiatsu , the aura can be manifested on the form of offensive dragons that attack enemies and launch shockwave and energywaves

Abilities

1/Shin ryū ga umarekawarimasu ( the divine dragon reborn ) : the aura is manifested on the form of a giant golden dragon , guilded by the sword , it can cause destructive damage as well as it is a undestructable dragon due to it being formed of reiatsu , it form a great defense as well due to the instense and condensed reiatsu surrounding the user .

2/Saigo no yoake ( the last dawn ) : that ability guarantee the user a godlike power , while using that ability the divine dragon can not be used .... all reiatsu is compressed to surround the user , it slowly turns from golden to bloody gold same as dawn color , that states cause the user to break through his limits ( unlike the shikai one ) , breaking through limits allow him to get to the titan level ( higher than gods) , the use of kido in that shape is forbidden due to the unpredictable destruction that can be caused , it too allows the user to combine different kido , but the status the user will be on , can lead to him harming himself due to the excessive use of kidos ( because of the large wide of damage area and him being on the center of it , however speed and perceptions get to a level that it can not be used repeatedly even by the user , due to it resulting a simultaneous damage to the user physical body ( because of the very very very high speed ).during that form the wielder's blood is used with the energy as well , that's why after that skill the user will suffer many insane pain attacks .

3/ Saishū-tekina bīmu ( the final beam ) : that technique is also called the hopeless's miracle , and there is a reason behind's that ... it's because that technique is the god power , the power to turn reality into illusion and illusion into reality . in that state , all the aura disappear and the light around the sword as well , only a defenseless person and the sword , that ability , the ability of decision is the true key to the full power of the bankai .the user is able to create a extremely high level illusion ( on the level of a god , which even overcomes the master level ) , the illusions created can be turned to reality , and in the same time any action that happened on reality can be turned to illusion , it's basically like creating a world whom you are the god , after that technique is gone , the wielder's loses all his , powers , energy , memories , and suffer from half death , and lastly that technique is not only able to turn the current reality to illusion but any reality that existed in any world , at any time . after losing everything and awakening , the user slowly loses his soul and his sword fades away ... that's the origin of it's name.

weakness :

shikai : the wielder suffers from some internal injuries if he exesses the use of his shikai power

bankai : when releasing his bankai it consumes a great part of his enegy and after 1st technique , a great amount of energy would have been used , 2nd technique lead the user to suffer from insanely high pain and lead him to have consumed a great matter of his energy and the 3rd technique is already mentioned

i have worked hard on that one lol , specially the last technique

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 10:50:59

bossul12345 replied at 2015-11-27 10:04
All you guys are putting so much great job in to thous zanpakutos. It will be interesting contest

see my last one i have worked insanely hard on it lol ( those descriptions take time to think of XD)

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 10:51:54

I realize that I'm not spamming with my amount of posts, but with their size XD... but this'll be my last one and it's just a half idea. "Half" meaning: I have no name or bankai idea for it. I'd actually like to let this one open for everyone to come up with ideas to complete this incomplete idea, if anyone is in the mood for it.
I don't mind if this one is put into consideration for the contest or not.

Name: ?
Sealed: Regular katana with dark brown scabbard and dark brown handle wrap.

Shikai
Name: ?
Release command: "Boom, [name]!"
The sword transforms into a double-bladed axe with jagged blades, that is actually an axe and a guitar in one, with the blade as the guitar's body and the long handle as the fretboard. Playing the "guitar" creates different sound waves, that are amplified by the Shikai itself. Those sound waves can be used to repel/push back attackers and attacks, distort the enemie's balance sense, immobilize/paralyze them with extremely loud and high-pitched sounds or break brittle structures like stone or ice; a wild solo may even controll weaker enemies for a few seconds. Since sounds spreads out in every direction, the sound abilities of this weapon also work in every direction. Attacking with the axe in close combat has a pretty destructive force. When the axe hits something, it triggers the axe to emit another sound shock that amplifies the physical hit a bit, making it easy to pulverize rocks or knocking back targets even more.
Weakness: in close combat, the axe is rather slow cuz of it's weight. Also, the strings are just as durable as regular strings, so they can be cut apart easily. Once they are, the shikai loses all it's sound-based abilities, making it nothing but a regular axe with unusally shaped blades. Of course, turning back to sealed form and re-entering shikai repairs the strings, just as it usually goes with the shikai forms, but the user may also repair the strings manually with regular strings, if he has some spare ones with him... and the time to replace them, in the middle of a battle.
And since the direction of the sound abilities can not be focused or otherwisely altered, they may effect allies as well.

That's it. I actually had a bankai idea for it, but I think it's lame; I want something more creative.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 10:57:00

X-Zero13 replied at 2015-11-27 10:51
I realize that I'm not spamming with my amount of posts, but with their size XD... but this'll be my ...

instead of doing too much zans , try to do 1 with the quality of all 3 ... it's not quantity it's qulaity

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 11:03:21

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 10:50
see my last one i have worked insanely hard on it lol ( those descriptions take time to think of X ...

Pretty OP, dude

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 11:05:43

X-Zero13 replied at 2015-11-27 11:03
Pretty OP, dude .

tnx ;p well if you combine all of yours in one it will be OP too

author: X-Zero13 time: 2015-11-27 11:05:58

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 10:57
instead of doing too much zans , try to do 1 with the quality of all 3 ... it's not quantity it's ...

Well, it's not as if I'm forcing myself to come up with these. I had all those ideas in my mind for quite some time, I just took the opportunity to write them down and share the ideas with others.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 11:09:31

X-Zero13 replied at 2015-11-27 11:05
Well, it's not as if I'm forcing myself to come up with these. I had all those ideas in my mind fo ...

ohhhhhh i see now

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 11:11:04

Ok, I'll try again. xD No one will care, I will improvise so it will take some time.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 11:17:30

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 11:11
Ok, I'll try again. xD No one will care, I will improvise so it will take some time.

SEE MY 2ND ONE

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 11:41:31

Name: Akaihana (Red Flower)
Look: Red and white flower shapes in hilt and hiltguard is red steel with white flower carved in it. Blades backside is deep red while blade is pure white, basic length.
Release command: Wither to rebirth, Akaihana
Shikai: Creates afterimages that slowly turn red and then to gray, leaving a smell of roses. Increases speed and stamina, blade becomes 2, can be combined at any point, each blade has their own purpose, gray (left handed one) creates destruction and can decay any kind of target, red (right handed one) can bring life and heal, and combined into one blade it can create illusions and hallucinations.
Bankai: Creates chaotic look where left hand looks withered and dead(nearly transparent), while right hand embraces the life and wields redbladed zanpakuto with beautiful white rose texture in the hilt. User's clothing changes only for the arms, left hand up untill shoulders dead, transparent, hollowlike even. Right hand white, shiny, strong, creating visible red reiatsu around it. It increases immensly speed, recovery, and strength but lacks in defences and usage of left hand. Even tho the left hand becomes useless and the longer bankai is kept on the longer it takes for left hand to recover, despite disabilities left hand brings touched by enemy it can wither part being touched. Its also risk for the user since touching self with left hand will cause withering, and the lack of control while using bankai makes it a hazard. Bankai name: Chi No Akaishi (Bloodred Death)

WEAKNESSES: In shikai form the strength and reach are lacking and easily played around since right blade alone close to no damage. Left blade in the other hand (yeah pun intended) destroys everything it touches, but both blades are short in length while being in shikai form, but in second shikai form where they are combined they gain length, but can not be taken off each others untill your reiatsu gains balance, and both shikai and bankai form destroy the balance of reaitsu, where combined they can create windows for attacks and escapes but doesn't provide heal, uses a lot of reiatsu, and doesn't powerwise differ at all from basic zanpakuto. Bankai's weakness as said is left hands hazardous nature which can wither the user's whole body and when exposed for too long can even cause permanent effects on user's body, it's illusion which can become reality if not taken into account. It takes a lot of power to go back from bankai, so those with no strength to do so will wither to death.

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 11:42:38

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 18:41
Name: Akaihana (Red Flower)
Look: Red and white flower shapes in hilt and hiltguard is red steel wit ...

It's like beautiful blade turning to balanced destruction and beauty every turn, while pushing everything off the balance.

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 11:42:58

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 11:41
Name: Akaihana (Red Flower)
Look: Red and white flower shapes in hilt and hiltguard is red steel wit ...

i just had an idea of a great zan , but i am too tired to do it now lol , gonna do it later , it's awesomer than the last 2

author: Raeace time: 2015-11-27 11:44:15

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 18:42
i just had an idea of a great zan , but i am too tired to do it now lol , gonna do it later , it's ...

What if you tried to draw your favorite zanpakuto concept?

author: bossul12345 time: 2015-11-27 11:54:43

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-11-27 10:48
Name: kogane no taka ( golden falcon)

Release Phrase: rise from the last skyline ... kogane , no t ...

Wow, really good one

author: SeiryuSky time: 2015-11-27 12:01:19

Raeace replied at 2015-11-27 11:44
What if you tried to draw your favorite zanpakuto concept?

i suck at drawing but i will try

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