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Coffin of my Imagination (Bleach Story) [Copy URL]

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Post time 2015-5-28 18:19:26 |Show the author posts only
selene0818 replied at 2015-5-28 18:16
i always thought pregnant women waddle
i don't see how it's good for your hips though

i don't think it actually is

i'm not sure though

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Post time 2015-5-29 00:29:48 |Show the author posts only
selene0818 replied at 2015-5-29 06:16
i always thought pregnant women waddle
i don't see how it's good for your hips though

it's too tiring


your writing pace is quite fast ragnos..
mind give hyperlink to each chapter at page 1, so that everyone can search the chapters easily?

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Post time 2015-5-29 02:54:01 |Show the author posts only
Leitzur replied at 2015-5-28 23:29
it's too tiring

Recommend reading it here
http://dreadnought.forumotion.co ... agination-no-replys

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Post time 2015-6-3 20:35:12 |Show the author posts only
                                                                           Now What?  
"Ugh..." Jasutin grunted. He looked around to see that he was in Ashido's hideout, and saw Je leaning up against the wall by the entrance.
"Hey. You holding up alright?" Je asked while adjusting his postion to get more comfortable.
"Ugh, yeah so far. I feel like I'm covered in fire ants, but I'll live. Wheres Ashido? Jasutin said as he looked at his bandaged covered body.
"Ashido is out dealing with some hollows that some Adjuchas sent to scout out his hideout. Seems that they are not to fond of him." Jasutin got up from the stone slab he was laying on and stretched his aching muscles.
"Well, I guess I know bankai now. Soooo... Now what?" Jasutin said. Je chuckled and shrugged at his remark.
"So why don't you tell me what ablities you have in bankai. I already saw that... what was it called? Buraindinguraito what it?" Je asked.
"Yeah, that ablity blinds everyone, but me for a few seconds. And now since my zanpakuto has compressed allowing me to use flashstep at high speeds, since my shikai hinders me in using flashstep to protect me from damage. Buraindinguraito coupled with the high speed makes quite the deadly combo." Jasutin explained to Je. He then went to a small chair made out of wood to sit down.


"Huh, any others? Or is that all you can do?" Je asked.
"Well, there is one more, but I dunno if I should tell you. Plus I have yet to use it." Jasutin answered.
"Ah, come on. Not like we have anything else to do here."
"Okay I'll tell you. It's called "Boyaku no ken". Apparently according to Getsugami: by stabbing my zanpakuto into the earth it will summon a total of 6 swords that will attack  simultaneously. And thats all my bankai abilites."
"Well now, me and you need to fight sometime. SO I CAN PROVE TO YOU THE MIGHT OF THE QUICIES!!!" Je announced.
"I thought you gave up on that gallantry a while ago? Plus if you were so mighty you would still exist in large numbers now wouldn't you." Jasutin calmly stated.
"Yeah I did just adjusting the mood." Je said.


Jasutin let out a short sigh and relaxed in his chair. His mind then turned to his encounter with the vasto lorde named Ulquiorra, and how strong he was. I need to get stronger then a vasto lorde. I need to pit my new strength against someone my equal. Hmmm. Jasutin said in his mind. Slowly his mind wandered back to his life before he was trapped in Hueco Mundo. His days as third seat in squad 8 two years ago, and the day he got trapped in Hueco Mundo. A group of Menos Grande had managed to open a Garganta into the Soul Society. Squad 8 was assigned to deal with it and captain Kyoraku decided it would be a good training excercise for the squad to go head to head with Menos Grande. After some time of fighting the Menos had been pushed back except one that was still on the ground. Jasutin and his friend Kera Hiru which was the 5th seat of squad 8 were by the Garganta making sure no more menos come through. Suddenly the Menos on the ground targeted Kera with a cero blast. Jasutin barely made it in time to knock Kera out of the way and take the blast head on by himself the force of the impacted knocked Jasutin into the Garganta which closed before he could escape. Trapping him inside.


"Jasutin, Jasutin! Wake up!" Jasutin had passed out in the chair and Ashido was nudging him to wake up. Jasutin opened his his and was startled for a moment when he saw Ashido's unique hollow mask which he wore over his face.


"You feeling alright?" Ashido inquired.
"Yeah I'm fine. Just dreaming about the past." Jasutin responded.
"Well, I got some food for us to eat so dig in. It's gourmet." Ashido said sarcasticly as he handed Jasutin a small bowl with various mushrooms and herbs.
"Those three Adujchas still giving you trouble?" Je asked as he bit into a lettuce-like herb.
"Yeah, their leader the "Guardian of the Menos Forest" was with them. We fought, but he escaped. Damn coward." Ashido said.
"Well why don't we just track them down and kill them? Jasutin stated once he finished one of the mushrooms.
"No, lets not. He's not worth the time." Ashido said after he ate a small herb.


They all contiuned eating in silence. Once they had finished eating they all got everything together to go and kill some more hollows in hopes to reduce their numbers.
Once they had left the hideout they went a considerable distance and let out their spiritual pressures to draw hollows to them. And they came.


End of Chapter 9:.









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Post time 2015-6-9 18:22:11 |Show the author posts only
The latest chapter will be the last. Considering no one reads it anymore, so no more reason to write.
But it the want is great enough I will return to write it, though I doubt I ever will.

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