Alvond (The book I never finished)

Ragnos

Hello, everyone. I know that some of you remember when I posted a poll about whether or not I should post the book I never finished the outcome of the yes catagory was substantial.
I decided to post it in chapters like COMI, but... well the first chapter is to long for a post to handle (It was 14,589 out of the 10,000 letter limit XD) though I was able to post it in my forums so you guys can read it there and give feeback here if you wish, or you could go ahead and register.

The link to the book's first chapter is below, and the reason I stopped writing (before you ask) is because I lost the motivation to continue. So that means the book will come to an abrubt end once you reach... I think it was chapter 16 were I left off. But anyway the link is below if you wish to read it.



   ALVOND

Ragnos

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Ragnos

Also I should probably mention that if your health points reach zero, your real body perishes as well.

SeiryuSky

Ragnos replied at 2015-5-31 15:58
Also I should probably mention that if your health points reach zero, your real body perishes as wel ...

that's a really good story anyway i liked it because in start there is mystery and i love mystery a lot

Ragnos

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-5-31 15:06
that's a really good story anyway i liked it because in start there is mystery and i love mystery  ...

Oh yeah, Alvond has some mystery to it. Especially once you meet Marxon.
I can upload the rest now if you want.

SeiryuSky

Ragnos replied at 2015-5-31 16:09
Oh yeah, Alvond has some mystery to it. Especially once you meet Marxon.
I can upload the rest now ...

i would like to you encouraged me to write a new story the idea of it just came into my mind

Ragnos

SeiryuSky replied at 2015-5-31 15:14
i would like to  you encouraged me to write a new story the idea of it just came into my mind {: ...

                                                  Posting now check in about 5 minutes...

Ragnos

Okay I posted all the way to the Semi- finals.

Ragnos

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