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I decided to write this out of pure boredom, and I figured why the hell not? This is a story  in the Bleach universe.

                                                                                                             Unto Thy Enemies
Jasutin charged at the hollow with his sword pointed forward. The hollow tried to strike at Jasutin, but missed miserably when Jasutin jumped forth into the air. Once in the air Jasutin brought down his blade; vertically slashing the hollow's mask in half. The hollow howled in pain and vainished in the void, suddenly a second hollow sprang towards Jasutin from a nearby pillar of crystal catching him off guard, but the hollow was soon dispatched when a blue streak of energy killed the monster.


"About time you decided to show up!" Jasutin yelled.
"At least you didn't draw anymore hollows to our location, and I just saved your ass." Je replied.
"Nah, I had him. These small fries are nothing." Jasutin retorted.  Jasutin looked up into the dark ceiling of the Menos Forest.  "Say that when you run into a Vasto Lorde." Je said as he walked past Jasutin.
"You Quincies need to be more optimistic." Jasutin said as he looked back towards his friend. "And you need to be less reckless." Je replied while looking around the area.
"Anyways, where is Ashido? He should have been here by now." Jasutin inquired while looking around at the crystal pillars that seemed to be endless. "You know him he's a cautious sort." Je answered while looking back at Jasutin.
"Whats the matter?" Je asked.
"I'm just remembering when I got trapped here in Hueco Mundo about two years ago, but you of course have been here longer then myself." Jasutin answered.
"Yes, I've been here for... five years I believe when the last quincy group decided to go to Hueco Mundo to carry out our justice on the Hollows." Je said to Jasutin. Je was still looking around for any hollows that could still be lurking in the shadows."Still a stupid idea if you ask me. If you guys were the last then you should have tried to build up your numbers again." Jasutin replied.

Suddenly, a howl from a Menos Grande startled them. It appeared from the shadows of the forest; quickly releasing a cero towards them. Jasutin and Je easily dodged the blast then moved in to destroy it, but before they could reach the Menos it was killed by a slash across its chest and through it.. came the friend they were waiting for, Ashido.
Ashido landed beside them. Upon his face was the familar dear-like hollow mask he always wore.
"What took you so long?" Jasutin yelled as more menos came upon them.
"I had a few friends following me. Want to help me deal with them?" Ashido silently replied. "And here I was about to offer them something to drink." Jasutin sarcastically retorted.
They all moved backward until they were back to back and prepared to attack the Menos Grande.
"I have the ones behind us." Je said.
"Then I'll take the right!" Jasutin declared.
"And I have the left." Ashido called out.


They all charged in their specified locations except Je who gave his targets a shower of arrows. Ashido jumped and unsheathed his blade, afterward he struck down most of his foes. Jasutin was issuing a flurry of attacks against the menos killing one after the other. Each one was effectively dodging the Ceros being blasted at them while Ashido used his hollow mask as a shield.
The Menos kept coming one after another until they all felt a unique spiritual pressure approching them... Adjuchas.



End of Chapter 1:.





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I'll work on the next chapter later. If you guys like it so far that is.

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Ragnos replied at 2015-4-27 12:15
I'll work on the next chapter later. If you guys like it so far that is.

very nice!  please continue =)

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Thank you . I guess I will.

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Edited by Ragnos at 2015-4-27 19:14

                                                                                                                                Adjuchas!

The Menos stopped firing as four Adjuchas class hollows stepped into the opening.
"You three have been causing us much trouble. I think its time that you met your doom!" Yelled the one who seemed to be the leader of the group.
"You know what you've been causing me? A headache! Now I know how to get rid of it!" Jasutin yelled back at him.
"Control your temper Jasutin." Ashido stated.
"What do you mean temper? I'm always calm." replied Jasutin. Je just shook his head and trained his bow on one of the four new foes. "I will not be ignored!" One of them yelled. "Menos! Fire your ceros!" Another demanded.
Then all the menos at the same time charged and fired their ceros. Je and Jasutin leaped behind Ashido who blocked the attacks with his hollow mask. "Forget about the Menos attack the Adjuchas!" Ashido ordered
"I know the drill." Jasutin said. Je released a string of arrows at one of the Adjuchas who was not suspecting an attack, which proved fatal. One arrow struck his chest and the other finished by piercing his mask and skull.
The others dashed towards Ashido and Jasutin while another went after Je.

"Be still!" Shouted the Adjuchas that was attacking Je. Je was irritating the hollow by using hirenkyaku to outmaneuver the clumsy hollow. As soon as Je was tired playing with the foe he shot two arrows into the hollows back and another into its head finishing him. Je then went to attack the menos who were firing ceros at Jasutin and Ashido, in all making their fight difficult.
Ashido deflected a blow from his foe and quickly blocked a cero attack from a menos. His foe retaliated with a kick knocking Ashido to the ground, he looked up to see the adjuchas charging a cero. Once the cero was fired Ashido was able to use flashstep just in time to dodge the attack and appear behind his foe and decapitate him.
Afterwards he looked at Jasutin who was battling the last Adjuchas, then he looked at the menos and saw that Je was dealing with them. So he decided to go and assist Jasutin.


Jasutin blocked the adjuchas attack with his zanpakuto, and used flashstep to appeared beside his foe, but his opponent was quick in deflecting his attack. The adjuchas used his bladed arms to attempt to decapitate Jasutins head; Jasutin was just barely able to dodge the attack leaving him with a scratch on his check. Should I go into Shikai? Jasutin said to himself. No, by fighting in my zanpakuto's sealed state my fighting ablites improve. Jasutin moved onto his feet and assumed his fighting stance. Ashido soon appeared by his side.
"Don't worry I got this." Jasutin said. Ashido stepped back and let Jasutin carry on.
The adjuchas charged at Jasutin. The hollow issued an attack from Jasutin's right. Jasutin quickly blocked it and knocked the arm out of the way leaving the hollows stomach open for an attack. Jasutin took the chance and cut the Adjuchas in half. Finishing the fight.


The menos stampered off into the forest seemingly unaware of what just happened.
"Good fight." Jasutin exhaled. Jasutin looked around at his friends. "Lemme guess you guys finished them quickly?" Je just nodded. Jasutin just exhaled.
"Okay back to what we were originally doing. Where is the place again Ashido?" Jasutin asked.
"Oh right the cave. Should be about a mile or two west of here." Ashido said while walking in the directed direction.
"Lets go." Je replied.



End of Chapter 2:.










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Amazing keep it up.

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UCHIHA91977 replied at 2015-4-27 20:16
Amazing keep it up.

Thanks. I'll try to get chapter 3 out tomorrow.

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Edited by Ragnos at 2015-4-29 10:38

                                                                                     Bite the Moon in Two!

"You know how to materialize your zanpakuto right?" Ashido inquired while they walked to their destination.
"Yeah I do. Took some concentration and patience, but I managed to get him to materialize." Jasutin replied. Je just looked on as he listen to the coversation, while searching around for any lurking spiritual pressures.
"Thats good. Then you can continue to the last stage of training for your bankai." Ashido said to Jasutin continuing the conversation. "Your spiritual pressure is about the level of a captain as it is which is quite exceptional considering you don't even have a bankai." Ashido continued.
"Hold up" Je said stopping the others.
"What is it? A hollow?" Jasutin inquired, but only recieved silence. "It... it can't be..." Ashido said silently just now realizing the spiritual pressure.
"Is it a Adjuchas?" Jasutin said to Ashido. "No, greater. A Vasto Lorde." Ashido silently replied.
"We've ran into every class of hollow today! Jeez! I need a break from this." Je said to them.
The Vasto Lorde came into view and stared at them. The Vasto Lorde was human in size, but reslembled a bat more then anything, and have black wings on his back.
"Who are you?" The Hollow silently asked.
"This man and myself are soul reapers. He is a quincy." Ashido explained to the hollow.
"Are you here to fight us?" Jasutin asked. The hollow looked at him with a blank expression. The hollow continued to silently examined the group.


Suddenly with incredible speed the hollow attacked Ashido. Ashido was not able to react in time and was wounded when the hollow stabbed him in the stomach with his hand. Je immediatley began to fire arrows at the hollow only to be deflected by his wings. Using hirenkyaku Je moved quickly around the hollow. When the hollow was focused on Je, Jasutin came in from behind and slashed the hollows back which quickly regenerated. The Hollow attacked Jasutin with his hands while Jasutin blocked and deflected with his blade. Je was able to strike the hollows chest with five arrows, but just disintegrated when the hollows healing ablity took hold. Knocking Jasutin back he went after Je, and with both of their incredible speed battled at high speeds Je dodged many attack though in the end he was heavily wounded and fell to the ground on one knee. The Hollow moved in to finish him, then a shout came out from Jasutin.
"Bite the moon in two! GETSUGAMI!

Jasutin's zanpakuto let a significate blast tranforming in the palm of his hand into Shikai. The zanpakuto takes
the form a sleek, medium to large-sized sword. The hilt has a gentle decorative bend. Instead of a crossguard, there is a V-shaped decoration covers the first three or four inches of blade, with a flame design right as it meets the string-crossguard. It also has a black decorative string wrapped thrice around the hilt, with a three-loop bow on one side. The zanpakuto's blade is straight and slim, with the tip ending in a slanted razor-like edge with very small hooks for tearing apart flesh instead of blade being tapered to a point.

[size=14.3999996185303px]Jasutin immediatley engaged the Vasto Lorde. The hollow tried to block with his left arm, but was slashed in half by the tip of the blade, continuing Jasutin drove the zanpkauto through the hollows left shoulder. The hollow used his right hand to attack and wound Jasutin's left side, jumping backward Jasutin freed the hollow from his blade. The attack seemed in vain as he watch the hollows awesome regenerative ablites heal his wounds.

[size=14.3999996185303px]The Hollow attack again using his speed to appear from behind and lightly attacking Jasutin from behind, but did not cut Jasutin. The Hollow was puzzled he could not understand how he was able to cut him earlier but not now.
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[size=14.3999996185303px]Jasutin jumped to engaged the hollow once more. The hollow dodged the attack easily enough.
[size=14.3999996185303px]"Why can I not cut you?" Asked the Hollow.
[size=14.3999996185303px]"Oh that. Well my zanpakuto's ability wraps my body in spritual pressure to lessen the damage of attacks or negate them all together, but this sacrifices my ablity to use flashstep" Jasutin replied.
[size=14.3999996185303px]"I see. Then my attacks need to have more force." The hollow silently answered. Raising a finger he charged a cero with a green color and fired it at Jasutin. The attack was strong though due to his zanpakuto's ablity it did not cause as much damage as it would have.
[size=14.3999996185303px]Jasutin charged at the hollow once more the hollow used his speed to get behind Jasutin and with a heavy downward kick sent Jasutin to the ground. Then the hollow quickly charged and fired a cero damaging Jasutin heavliy. The hollow walk over to the crater left behind from the blast.

"You are a good fighter. I will not kill you or your friends. Not today that is." The hollow stated while standing on the edge of the crater looking down at Jasutin. Jasutin used his sword to help him stand.
"Do you have a name hollow?" Jasutin asked.
"Ulquiorra." He replied as the Vasto Lorde walked away.

Jasutin went to help his injured friends after the hollow had left. Ashido was injured though very much alive. Jasutin managed to tend to their wounds before collasping from exhaustion.

End of chapter 3:.
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Edited by Ragnos at 2015-5-5 18:04

I've no idea why it is saying the "[sizepx]" Thing. I've tried fixing it but when I go to edit it, it leaves but then comes back once I save it.

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Edited by Ragnos at 2015-5-7 21:01

                                                                                                                                                  Getsugami
After tending to the wounds of everyone for a while, Ashido and Je were mostly recovered. Ashido was standing around the area keeping guard, and Je was slumpped against a pillar of crystal.
"I would have been able to defeat that Vasto Lorde if he hadn't caught me of guard." Ashido said breaking the silence.
"His regnerative ablities were insane!" Replied Jasutin. He looked down at the sandy ground.
"I've never seen a hollow regen that fast... freak of nature." Je finally said.
"Lets hope we don't run into anymore. Je are you able to walk?" Ashido asked.
"I'll live..." Je replied.
Suddenly Ashido felt a hollows spiritual pressure moving in fast, there were three of them. He immediately grabbed the hilt of his blade. The three hollows came into sight from the darkness, they were regular small time hollows. Before he was able to engage them three energy bolts flew past him and dispatched the hollows.
"We don't need to waste time." Je said while putting down his bow which he held in his left hand with steam still coming from his fingers.
"Right, Ashido lead the way." Jasutin said. Ashido nodded and moved in the direction of the place they were heading. After a few hours of walking they found a cave embbed in a rock wall near the outskirts of the Menos forest.
"Lets go." Ashido said. They proceeded into the cave which seemed filled with small hollow-like creatures. After a while they came upon a very large cavern.
"We can train you here, for your Bankai training. The materials in this cave will shutout all spirtual pressure so no hollows will be drawn to our location. Ashido said a phrase to a kido spell he created to make light so that they could see better. Je leaned up against the wall to the exit of the cave and watch the training begin from afar.
"Okay, materialize your Zanpakuto." Ashido said.
"Alright." Jasutin replied. Jasutin closed his eyes and began to concentrate on his zanpkauto until he found the familar presence of Getsugami, and called him into his world. Blast of wind appeared and once the dust settled there stood a young man with a trench coat like outfit. He had Blonde hair with glowing blue eyes. He had the usual serious face with his head tilted down looking at Jasutin with his hands inside his pockets.


"It's been a while Getsugami." Jasutin said to the materilized form of his Zanpakuto.
"I'm going to assume you know why Jasutin called upon you here?" Ashido asked Getsugami.
"Yes." The zanpakuto repiled his response straight forward, and his voice that of a teen, but with a rough sound.
"Then I'll leave it to you." Ashido said.
The zanpakuto turned towards the open area of the cave.
"Lets begin." Getsugami said.






End of Chapter 4:.


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