The Great story of the great races that lived long ago.

grimmjowpantera

just going to set this out now I use to draw and I always have wanted to make my own manga so this lil story I have today will be part of that manga. witch btw im going to put one chapter at a time. it will be long so if you like reading I hope you like it and comment on what you liked about it.
(pretend morgan freeman is narrating this )

There once was a Great race of super beings. Between these super beings wars broke out. this is the story of those of those races. their history their future and future more... their today lives. now shall we begin?

Chapter 1. The Great Beings begin.
Long ago. In a place far from humans. There were 11 worlds split into 10 factions. There are the Highbrerions, The Necroberions, The Inslavions, The greetarions, The Blitzquerions, The demandeions, The Great Impelrions. These are the only known 7 to date. Lets start with the Highbreions in chapter 1. in chapter 2 we will talk about the Necroberions.

The Highbrerions are the strongest of all the Great races. Their Ranking system can be questionable about... certain things. but further more they have lived millions of years and were the First race ever created by the Great Council. There has always been one family known to rule over them. they are the Strongest of the Highbrerions. They are known as the Yakato Family. Little history about them as well as the rest of their race.

The Yakato family has always been stronger then everyone else. they have been the protectors of the their people. Each generation they get stronger. The current generation is by far. The complete strongest. The head of the family is Takuya Tatara Yakato. He has classified the different types of Highbrerions. He him self is know as a BerserkKnightHealer. A rare breed in the Highbrerions.

Berserkers are more powerful between them and the knights and healers. they focus on a mix of light and heavy armor in battle. They hit harder and move faster then the knights but if ever in danger of dying their power become Greater as a last resort they will kill over thousands of people before dying off. They gain power by seeing someone they love the most dying before their eyes or thinking of thoughts of someone they love dying. It get mad and with all the anger built up they release it all by evolving into the next stage in their own ways. their look of armor can be different to everyone else to give them their own look. this can be found in all the types.

Knights are heavy armored defensive types. Their heavy armor can protect them from a full blown power blast by a Berserker. They tend to be slower then both Berserkers and healers but with great slow punches. Full force they can one hit kill someone as long as they can land it. They tend to remove their armor if they ever need to win a battle as fast as they can. If ever mixed with a berserker, BerserkerKnights are a lot more powerful then both Knights and Berserkers. They have different ways of powering up then Berserkers. More then one way in most cases like Takuya's Brother Grimm who is a knight. did I forget to tell you they are twins? We'll get more into detail about that later. But back to Knights. all they have to do is think about who they want to protect with their life.

Healers are rare to come by. Takuya's 2 lil sister's Saren, and Sarayza. Healers can heal about anything that comes to mind in many different ways. You often see Knights and Berserkers having been mixed with Healer's healing powers. although it takes slower time to heal. Healers are often in back ready to heal a Knight or a Berserker who has been in battle and switched out to be healed. Though only one Healer can heal instantly and that is the only other Second BerserkKnightHealer. that is Takuya and his great great great great great great great great great grand father who is the Highbrerion's council member.

Takuay has many brothers and sisters. Takuya has 2 other twins other then Grimm. Sakiya and Lexcier. Takuya is the strongest because he was the very first born on his generation. the Second to be born is Grimm and then Lexcier and then Sakiya. Sakiya didn't show any signs of her powers till after 3 times Takuya has put her into a coma do to the fact Sakiya was very weak at first and was never able to withstand Takuya's fire power. Takuya didn't mean to put his little sister into a coma he blamed himself for it everytime he used his fire power. But then one day he had an idea of making something for his sister to withstand his power. As every Highbrerion from the age of 4 has always created their very own necklace witch is a way to show off their power. He gave the necklace he made her and she overflowed with her power finally awakening. Thanks to that she became the Second in their generation to be most powerful next to her idol her Big twin brother she loves very much.

Takuya has 4 other little brothers. The 5 oldest is Drake. a full blow KnightBerserker with fire power. And next to him is Dom Who is a BerserkHealer with darkness power. and Takuya's other 2 brothers are twins as well as his little sister's Saren and Sarayza his little sisters having Bright Light power and his little brothers having Darkness power.

Takuya him self not only being the Second BerserkKnightHealer, he has All three power forms. Darkness, BrightLight, and Fire Witch makes him a dangerous force who is Feared by most of the Necroberions.

Each Highbrerion having all that I have said they also from birth have many spirits living within them. Takuya is the only one known to have many spirits. One of them fights for control witch was the reason why Takuya put his sister in a Coma the very first time and nearly almost killed very Highbrerion. With all that power he has he couldn't control it all till he reached the age of 14 and started to travel to many of the other worlds. He has been inslaved by the Inslavions and have broken free to the great grass fields of the greetions to back home where he finished his training with Sakiya and was able to fully control his power and was the first to fuse with his Dragon Leonides. a Dragon perfect with his personality. Following Takuya his younger brothers and sister, Sakiya, Drake, Dom, and Grimm to fuse with theirs.

After fully mastering his powers and continues to grow stronger his Father tried to force him into being the king. He has faced many challenges and completely killed his Father for good letting Lexcier be the queen of their people seeing Grimm and Sakiya never wanted to be the head of their people.

After living their days in peace The Necroberions started to attack and Takuya was forced to finally take the thrown and fight off the invasion and winning the 5 year long war. Takuya and the Necroberion king Vice make a peace treaty. living their days as allies. and Readying for future invasions from the other races, Impelions, Blitzquerions, Demandeions and Inslavions.

End of chapter 1.

grimmjowpantera

The great story of the great races Chapter 2. The Necroberions history.

Necroberions are a war based driven of all the great races. They are pretty similar to the Highbrerions like the ways they look and the ranking system they work very differently. In all their history they have had many civil wars over opinions. Never once have they been in peace longer then a few years. Weather it's over other races or their own they always seem to go into war. The one race they seem to go into war with the most is the Highbrerions because they are natural enemies. Though they never seem to win any of those wars they always seem to have a reason why to keep trying. No one but them know the reason why.

They have a type of necroberions they are called copy kings. They copy the face of the current king of the Highbrerions and always fail. They may have the look of the king but they never seem to be close in the power range to even try to completely kill a king off before he comes back to life and destroy them. In each generation the number of the copy kings always have a limited range of 50. They don't live long because of the randomness they bring to their lives. Each one is picked randomly from birth. weather want to or not and never has one ever reached the age of 30.

Another type of necroberion is the blast beasts. They are a powerful power house type of necros. The way they are not one of them will give mercy to someone even if told to by their king. With their power they are very insane and tend to go have in packs of 5 to 7 to attack randomly the king of the highbrerions. If they weren't wasting time on random attacks they would have been useful in very war the necros have faced. Because of their personalities they tend to fight with one another over leadership of their packs.

One other type of necroberions are very known to be similar to highbreion berserkers but have different types of patterns. The whole type it's self is what makes up most of the necroberion armies. And for some reason they are the only one of the types to follow orders to every word given by the king. not much is known about this type but we do know they don't act like normal berserkers. They also like the blast beats fight in packs but only in 3s.

The necros are the one of the only 3 races that are known to have elemental powers mixed with everything. Like the Highbrerions they also have their own birth type of element. But unlike Highbrerions they only have 1 type. Their king Visural Gan Vice is known to have an Ice element. Each fight he had with Takuya he hardly ever won because of the fact Takuya has 4 elements. Darkness, Brightlight, fire and lightning. Always known to be in Darkness mode Takuya can pull his element together. How ever he rarely ever uses all of them at once against anyone. Normally he fuses his fire with his darkness and lightning with darkness and brightlight with lightning. And it's thanks to that power Takuya always won against a fight with Visural, and for some reason he always let Visural get away. Maybe he sees him as a great friend in the future.

Visural gan vice. The only known great king of the necroberions to always have a plan of great timing need always won in the civil wars that broke out. His leadership ever since he was at the age of 12 always won in most fights. It's because of those wins he earned he meet his lovely beautiful queen Shaer Lun Vice. Witch has always been at his side of great stress over a lose against Takuya and always have made him feel better.

After of the many loses of his people over the necroberion and highbrerion 5 year long war he made a peace treaty finally with Takuya making him an ally to aid him over his civil war witch Takuya was most thankful to help into show he wants to respect of the peace.

End of chapter 2.

grimmjowpantera

so what does everyone think about the story so far eh? good, bad? yes, no?

awesomeprussia1

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-9 09:28
so what does everyone think about the story so far eh? good, bad? yes, no?

I like it!

Ragnos

Reminds me of when I was writing Coffin of my Imagination  On the forums, but apparently not a lot of people liked it so I stopped writing it. I was going to do a FMAB Fanfic, but it didn't go over well.
I have tried writting a book called Alvond, but I lost motivation to continue so it just sits in my hard drive with 26 chapters and no one to read it.

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I like it , It will be wonderfull if imagaes can be included

grimmjowpantera

[email protected] replied at 2015-8-9 19:44
I like it , It will be wonderfull if imagaes can be included

i cant right now but when my skills at drawing increase and I am able to draw each character and different types of each race I'll post them. at the moment im just introducing each race then the main story will come in on Takuya's life and the shit he went through and the many evos he went through.

grimmjowpantera

Ragnos replied at 2015-8-9 17:38
Reminds me of when I was writing Coffin of my Imagination  On the forums, but apparently not a lot o ...

I had this story in my head along time and I just kept making it up like I have my own anime/manga in my head and it never stops. once I finish introducing the last few races i'll do  character back grounds getting more into them then the main story of Takuya the main character.

grimmjowpantera

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-8-9 16:24
I like it!

Sweet                     

awesomeprussia1

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-10 07:51
Sweet

thanx dude! *smiles*