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Post time 2015-3-22 16:18:46 |Show the author posts only |Ascending
Ok ladys and gent first of all im starting ths thraed becuase the other story thread is kind og dieded ext for just a few ppl posting and sence im not yagami
you maypost a pargafe or two if you want there really is no limit i dont care as long as you stay on topic and if you think a chater in the story is over fell free
to start a new chater but if you r the one who starts the chapter make sure the last one ended on a good note

Charter name is Bisno he is a wisard worrier use all kinds of wepons and magic

Ok i will start Bisno was in the town of Fare Lake and all of a sudden out of know were thr sky grew dark and a portal apeared
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Post time 2015-3-30 11:54:09 |Show the author posts only
ryana look at bisno and said because this must be some kind of test he is puting me threw . rayan said from now on i will be the one and only one u will anwser to for you will be under my care and the first thing we will need to do is see just how powerfull you are now follow me(walkdown the hall she rambled) we shall return to the forest and start ur training there is pleaty of monsters and badits that need be rid off they will make good taget pratice for you. We will see were u limit is and from there i will train u in hand to hand but the magic is all urs to learn on ur own. Make no mistake bisno we need ur power so that we may cleans this world of evil will u help me in this quest.

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Post time 2015-3-28 14:54:00 |Show the author posts only
and so 5 hours has passed................................waiting at the portal....................another 6hours passed.......................he woke up , made a cofe and went to office .

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Post time 2015-3-28 10:04:52 |Show the author posts only
Bisno finally awoke in the royal suite. Rayna later came in the room to speak with Bisno about their objective. "Why did your father bind me to you exactly?" Bisno asked first. Rayna looked and him and said...

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Post time 2015-3-28 10:01:37 |Show the author posts only
angelswetha replied at 2015-3-28 01:32
what this thread is about imao ?

Read from the first page then you'll know...

(basically add on to the story Note: it is best to read the story before adding))

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Post time 2015-3-28 02:32:28 |Show the author posts only
what this thread is about imao ?

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Post time 2015-3-27 20:35:39 |Show the author posts only
Vegeta wha do da scouta sey bout hes powa livil? Its over 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                  

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Post time 2015-3-27 18:32:44 |Show the author posts only
Edited by selene0818 at 2015-3-27 17:49

Rayna and the Chief stood in shocked stupor.  A young mortal rarely showed such magical promise.  'Maybe he can help us,' she softly said to her father the chief. "He has potential to surpass Marxon the Endurer... Perhaps he can cleanse the corruption that now blights our lands."
"Hrmm," the Chief grunted noncommittally as looked down at the young man. "What is to stop him from being seduced by power as Marxon was?  Our greatest ally or our greatest foe." His eyes took on a faraway look. Rayna narrowed her eyes at her father as he continued on "What indeed," He muttered "Ah binding magic..."
"Father!" Rayna exclaimed "That is dark magic...."
"Silence!" The chief roared "Magic is magic.  Intention determines what is light or dark. Most magic is a shade of grey as you will learn.  I will bind his will to you since you are concerned with this human's wellfare."  Rayna paled and shook her head at her father.  His eyes pinned her to the spot.  "Ever since you were a child, you dreamed of being a hero.  Saving us all from the darkness.  Now you shall have your wish.  Help this mortal return to his world and you will help your people.  However you will find that finding your way out of the dark is no small feat"  The chief took out a small ceremonial knife and jerked his daughter's arm towards him.  He carved a series of small runes in the inside of her forearm.  Then he knelt and did a slight similar rune pattern on Bisno. Under his breath, the chief muttered a life -binding spell in the old world of elvish. The runes flared brightly a dazzling white before dulling to a dark blue. "Now, he is tied to you as you are tied to him.  Do try to ensure he is properly trained dear daughter... you would not want to die over some inexperienced puppy inability to control his own magic."  With that the chief drifted back to his throne waving his hand in dismissal.
Rayna bit the inside of her lip to keep from crying out in rage.  How dare he!  How could her father saddle her with this... this child? She motion for two guards to carry Bisno to her suite in the palace.  When he awoke she needed to be there to set a few things straight.  There was no way SHE would be brought low by a human.

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Post time 2015-3-27 15:35:00 |Show the author posts only
"Damn" Yelled Bisno. He reacted quickly to the appearance and used a combination of a containment spell and constriction spell. It surrounded the portal and magic pushed against magic Bisno struggling to destroy this portal, but the magic was too strong and just when his magic was about fail him the portal was destroyed. Bisno, and hit the floor with a THUD!; and was rendered unconscious from the strain on his mana...

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Post time 2015-3-27 15:24:40 |Show the author posts only
As they were walking out a sudden portal opened.

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