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Post time 2015-8-9 01:03:46 |Show the author posts only |Ascending
Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-8-10 09:35

just going to set this out now I use to draw and I always have wanted to make my own manga so this lil story I have today will be part of that manga. witch btw im going to put one chapter at a time. it will be long so if you like reading I hope you like it and comment on what you liked about it.
(pretend morgan freeman is narrating this )

There once was a Great race of super beings. Between these super beings wars broke out. this is the story of those of those races. their history their future and future more... their today lives. now shall we begin?

Chapter 1. The Great Beings begin.
Long ago. In a place far from humans. There were 11 worlds split into 10 factions. There are the Highbrerions, The Necroberions, The Inslavions, The greetarions, The Blitzquerions, The demandeions, The Great Impelrions. These are the only known 7 to date. Lets start with the Highbreions in chapter 1. in chapter 2 we will talk about the Necroberions.

The Highbrerions are the strongest of all the Great races. Their Ranking system can be questionable about... certain things. but further more they have lived millions of years and were the First race ever created by the Great Council. There has always been one family known to rule over them. they are the Strongest of the Highbrerions. They are known as the Yakato Family. Little history about them as well as the rest of their race.

The Yakato family has always been stronger then everyone else. they have been the protectors of the their people. Each generation they get stronger. The current generation is by far. The complete strongest. The head of the family is Takuya Tatara Yakato. He has classified the different types of Highbrerions. He him self is know as a BerserkKnightHealer. A rare breed in the Highbrerions.

Berserkers are more powerful between them and the knights and healers. they focus on a mix of light and heavy armor in battle. They hit harder and move faster then the knights but if ever in danger of dying their power become Greater as a last resort they will kill over thousands of people before dying off. They gain power by seeing someone they love the most dying before their eyes or thinking of thoughts of someone they love dying. It get mad and with all the anger built up they release it all by evolving into the next stage in their own ways. their look of armor can be different to everyone else to give them their own look. this can be found in all the types.

Knights are heavy armored defensive types. Their heavy armor can protect them from a full blown power blast by a Berserker. They tend to be slower then both Berserkers and healers but with great slow punches. Full force they can one hit kill someone as long as they can land it. They tend to remove their armor if they ever need to win a battle as fast as they can. If ever mixed with a berserker, BerserkerKnights are a lot more powerful then both Knights and Berserkers. They have different ways of powering up then Berserkers. More then one way in most cases like Takuya's Brother Grimm who is a knight. did I forget to tell you they are twins? We'll get more into detail about that later. But back to Knights. all they have to do is think about who they want to protect with their life.

Healers are rare to come by. Takuya's 2 lil sister's Saren, and Sarayza. Healers can heal about anything that comes to mind in many different ways. You often see Knights and Berserkers having been mixed with Healer's healing powers. although it takes slower time to heal. Healers are often in back ready to heal a Knight or a Berserker who has been in battle and switched out to be healed. Though only one Healer can heal instantly and that is the only other Second BerserkKnightHealer. that is Takuya and his great great great great great great great great great grand father who is the Highbrerion's council member.

Takuay has many brothers and sisters. Takuya has 2 other twins other then Grimm. Sakiya and Lexcier. Takuya is the strongest because he was the very first born on his generation. the Second to be born is Grimm and then Lexcier and then Sakiya. Sakiya didn't show any signs of her powers till after 3 times Takuya has put her into a coma do to the fact Sakiya was very weak at first and was never able to withstand Takuya's fire power. Takuya didn't mean to put his little sister into a coma he blamed himself for it everytime he used his fire power. But then one day he had an idea of making something for his sister to withstand his power. As every Highbrerion from the age of 4 has always created their very own necklace witch is a way to show off their power. He gave the necklace he made her and she overflowed with her power finally awakening. Thanks to that she became the Second in their generation to be most powerful next to her idol her Big twin brother she loves very much.

Takuya has 4 other little brothers. The 5 oldest is Drake. a full blow KnightBerserker with fire power. And next to him is Dom Who is a BerserkHealer with darkness power. and Takuya's other 2 brothers are twins as well as his little sister's Saren and Sarayza his little sisters having Bright Light power and his little brothers having Darkness power.

Takuya him self not only being the Second BerserkKnightHealer, he has All three power forms. Darkness, BrightLight, and Fire Witch makes him a dangerous force who is Feared by most of the Necroberions.

Each Highbrerion having all that I have said they also from birth have many spirits living within them. Takuya is the only one known to have many spirits. One of them fights for control witch was the reason why Takuya put his sister in a Coma the very first time and nearly almost killed very Highbrerion. With all that power he has he couldn't control it all till he reached the age of 14 and started to travel to many of the other worlds. He has been inslaved by the Inslavions and have broken free to the great grass fields of the greetions to back home where he finished his training with Sakiya and was able to fully control his power and was the first to fuse with his Dragon Leonides. a Dragon perfect with his personality. Following Takuya his younger brothers and sister, Sakiya, Drake, Dom, and Grimm to fuse with theirs.

After fully mastering his powers and continues to grow stronger his Father tried to force him into being the king. He has faced many challenges and completely killed his Father for good letting Lexcier be the queen of their people seeing Grimm and Sakiya never wanted to be the head of their people.

After living their days in peace The Necroberions started to attack and Takuya was forced to finally take the thrown and fight off the invasion and winning the 5 year long war. Takuya and the Necroberion king Vice make a peace treaty. living their days as allies. and Readying for future invasions from the other races, Impelions, Blitzquerions, Demandeions and Inslavions.

End of chapter 1.
To stay in line with every one imam update my profile picture as well lol.

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Post time 2015-12-29 12:58:21 |Show the author posts only
grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-12-29 00:27
ok 1,2,3,4,5.6 are right. i have to look back at what i asked for in the 7th question XD lol.
EDIT ...

yay
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I look forward to another chapter



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Post time 2015-12-29 01:56:16 |Show the author posts only
imam say fuck it. tomorrow when i get up im going to find some god damn paper and a pencil and just draw what i can of each race. if its shit oh well lol. but if someone can point in to the way of a good site i can at least try to draw on the internet and shit. i have ideas and they need to be put out on this lol.

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Post time 2015-12-29 00:27:53 |Show the author posts only
Edited by grimmjowpantera at 2015-12-29 00:29
ShiroKamikaze replied at 2015-12-28 23:59
Q1: Takuya
Q2: Sakiya? (Not so sure)
Q3: Greetarions

ok 1,2,3,4,5.6 are right. i have to look back at what i asked for in the 7th question XD lol.
EDIT: 7 is right. i guess since at least one person answered them all i can continue with the story now.

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Post time 2015-12-28 23:59:37 |Show the author posts only
grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-14 08:33
ok today is going to be something different. im going to test you guys on what you know so far about ...

Q1: Takuya
Q2: Sakiya? (Not so sure)
Q3: Greetarions
Q4: Inslavions (?)
Q5: Necroberions (?)
Q6: (hehe Imma look back for this one) wait what. I don't really know how to answer this question. x~x um um
they can control the ground and are old men of 50
Q7: Chapter 6
I'm sowwy if I answered a lot of them wrong DDDDDDDD:

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Post time 2015-11-8 21:37:58 |Show the author posts only
gonna give this a lil bump. did anyone like it at all?

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Post time 2015-8-15 11:20:16 |Show the author posts only
Suzuken replied at 2015-8-15 08:54
everyone is too lazy to read it again because am sure 99% of those who read it forgot everything

well. that'd explains alot. guess i'll take that quiz down and post chapter 7 later.

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Post time 2015-8-15 08:54:11 |Show the author posts only
grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-15 14:40
im shocked that there were so many people viewed this post but no one answered any of the easiest qu ...

everyone is too lazy to read it again because am sure 99% of those who read it forgot everything

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Post time 2015-8-15 08:49:07 |Show the author posts only
grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-8-15 06:40
im shocked that there were so many people viewed this post but no one answered any of the easiest qu ...

-Pats your head- there there bro. i like it. X3

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Post time 2015-8-15 06:40:07 |Show the author posts only
im shocked that there were so many people viewed this post but no one answered any of the easiest questions i could give. kinda sad now.

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