Calling any Good Writers: Game Intro

Ragnos

Hey everyone!
Dreadnought Interactive has been steadily working on our new game Terra Evil, and we wanted to have a voiced-over intro which calls for a good writer. I have three other working on creating a intro script and I'm either going to blend it all together or choose the best one.
So I decided why not have my good and trusty friends on Bleach Forums have a crack at it so if you think you can write a pretty good opening script for the game go ahead!

SETTING FOR THE CURRENT EVENTS
About 1000 years ago (897 years to be exact) a demon arose in an attempt to destroy all of humanity. The demon's shear destructive force earned him the name of Ragnarok. Three great armies of the three greatest kingdoms came together to defeat Ragnarok, only to be miserably crushed under Ragnarok's power. Then when humanity was on the verge of existence with only small pockets of survivors scattered throughout the world, six heroes appeared to fight Ragnarok. No-one knows how or what happened on that day, but the heroes returned with news of Ragnarok's death, and the fate of two of their fellow members who died in the fight. Years after Ragnarok's defeat a rumor arose that Ragnarok had a son who is named Ragnos (I know I know, don't judge), but it was only a myth and no-one believed it.
You are a Myth Hunter trained from the age of ten who decided to track down and prove if the Myth of Ragnarok's bastard son who would be hundreds of years old, and to find out why he had not yet attacked humanity after so long... if he exists.

Suzuken

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-30 01:48
And here is the ending product!

woah XD that's much better than what  i wrote .
sounds like a promising start .

ajoalex

i so miss this section. that was a good read ragnos

Ragnos

Dreadnought finally finished our title screen. And man it looks awesome!

Ragnos

Suzuken replied at 2015-10-29 14:29
hahah no problem xD i think i changed too much stuff about the story though lol

And here is the ending product!


About 1000 years ago a demon who once was human arose from his slumber in an attempt to take revenge on humanity. The demon's powers were something no human could imagine, and the fiery rage he brought with him earned him the name Ragnarok.

After the news of the long feared and awaited day spread throughout the land, three great armies of the three greatest remaining kingdoms gathered in hopes of defeating the vengeful god that had brought destruction to the world. Sadly their hopes of victory were crushed in an instance, not even a soul remained after seeing the power of Ragnarok.. no one survived.

When humanity had lost all hopes even the desire to live and  was on the verge of extinction,  only a few lucky wandering souls that no longer knew peace had managed to survive the frightening rage of the vengeful god.

On one fateful day the wishes of the  dead came true when finally six heroes appeared to fight Ragnarok.
After the long awaited day the heroes marched out to end Ragnarok's fiery torment , and in the end, they did. No one knew exactly how they managed to do so, and to this day it still remains a mystery all what was known about that day is  that 2 heroic souls lost their lives in the attempt to kill Ragnarok .
Years after Ragnarok's defeat a rumor arose that Ragnarok had a son from a human .. a bastard son who was called by the name Ragnos it is said that his appearance would mean our damnation...

Ragnos

Suzuken replied at 2015-10-29 14:29
hahah no problem xD i think i changed too much stuff about the story though lol

Wow! I just looked it over and made some corrections to it, and so this is the best one that I've seen. I'll definitely use this.

Suzuken

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-29 23:20
I'll look it over and get back to you. Thank you for your time. ^.^

hahah no problem xD i think i changed too much stuff about the story though lol

Ragnos

Suzuken replied at 2015-10-29 10:14
okay so what i though about might change what you said but it's the same story with a different plot ...

I'll look it over and get back to you. Thank you for your time. ^.^

Suzuken

okay so what i though about might change what you said but it's the same story with a different plot, here it is
About 1000 years ago a demon who once was human arose from his slumber in an attempt to take revenge from humanity. The demon's powers were something no human can imagine a mysterious force that earned him the name of Ragnarok,
after the news of the long feared and awaited day spread through the land,Three great armies of the three greatest remaining kingdoms gathered in an attempt to gain glory by defeating the vengeful god that have brought destruction to the human world.... Ragnarok , but their hopes of victory were crushed in an instance, not even a soul remained after seeing the rage of Ragnarok.. no one lived to tell the tail.
Then when humanity lost all hopes even the desire to live and humanity was on the verge of extinction with only the few lucky wandering souls that managed to survive the rage of Rag the souls that no longer knew peace, just wandering .... around the hollow land with sounds of cries echo through the wind...
but that didn't last forever, because one day the wishes of the dead became true when finally six heroes appeared to fight Ragnarok.
after the long awaited day the heroes went to kill Ragnarok , and that's exactly what they did , no one knew how that happened though ... it remained a mystery til out current day... all what was known about that battle that 2 brave souls lost their lives in the attempt to kill Ragnarok ...
Years after Ragnarok's defeat a rumor arose that Ragnarok had a son from a human .. a bastard son who was called by the name Ragnos  but it was only a myth and no-one believed it.
sorry if i made it too long ._. and i might have missed a thing or two because i copy/paste what u said and adjusted it a bit

SeiryuSky

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-27 20:27
Yeah, I started my book Alvond when I was 15.
I would do it myself, but I'd like to see what othe ...

i completed 1/4 of the pearls and the hidden soul part it's turning to be so interesting even to me the story maker lol