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Coffin of my Imagination (Bleach Story) [Copy URL]

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Post time 2015-5-13 08:02:03 |Show the author posts only
Edited by Ragnos at 2015-5-13 18:35

                                                                                   Training for Bankai!
Getsugami raised his hand to Jasutin's face.
"If you wish to fight me to obtain Bankai, then you must defeat me... blind..." Suddenly Jasutin's vison slowly faded into darkness. He could feel Getsugami's footsteps slowly walking away from him.
"You must win using all your senses. In this way you will learn to use all your senses to defeat a enemy without having to soley rely on your sight for combat. Are you ready?" Getsugami asked loudly, everything was silent as Jasutin attempt to adjust. He could hear Je cough in the distance.
"I'm ready whenever you are Getsugami!" Jasutin yelled.
Everything fell silent no sound was made Jasutin concentrated with his sense to try and find Getsugamis location. Suddely a kick landed on Jasutin's back causing him to fall to the ground. He immediately got onto his feet and gripped his sword which he told himself he should have done in the beginning. He heard a gush of wind to his right and raised his sword to defend himself in that direction. To his suprised his sword clashed with Getsugamis, but took a punch from him to the left side of his face. Jasutin was beginning to lose hope that we would ever be able to defend himself without his sight, and using only his senses.


"He seems hopeless." Je said to Ashido.
"Maybe, what would you do in a fight if you lost your sight?" Ashido asked.
"I'd just seek out their spiritual pressure." Je replied
"But what if there were multiple of them?" Ashido asked him.
"How does that fit his situation?" Je inquired.
"Do you not feel it? His zanpakuto has concealed his spiritual pressure. Jasutin cannot find him by just searching for his spiritual pressure." Ashido answered.
"Now that you mention it. Your right; his zanpkauto is concealing his presence." Je said back.
"I guess we will have to stand guard here until he is able to complete his training." Ashido said as he turned toward the exit.
"I suppose your right." Je said
A few hours passed and Jasutin has used his Shikiai in an attempt to better defend himself, but it seems futile. Jasutin has been slashed from all over, and he is on his last reserves of energy. Getsugami continues to assault Jasutin. Jasutin has slowly becoming used to the new situation; he was blocking and dodging more blows then when he began, but he could feel the wounds that have been inflicted on him begin to take their toll.
Suddenly he heard a voice.
"Concentrate Jasutin. Concentrate your energy." Gestugamis voice rang out in his mind.
I am, but it's not really helping. I've been able to feel the vibrations in the ground from when he is running towards me, and I can sometimes hear him approaching, but that does not seem enough!  Jasutin said to himself in his mind. Getsugami caught him off guard, and cut deeply into Jasutins back.


"I've got it!" Jasutin said. He slowed is breath and pulled all of his senses inside of his head blocking out all outside presence. He took two blows from Getsugami while he was concentrating. Slowly a small red glow appeared in Jasutins mind; it was in the shape of a person, and it was walking to his right. Jasutin gripped his sword and leaped towards the glow his sword was blocked by it. It was Getsugami, he jumped backward from Getsugami and prepared to attack. He was quickly attacked by Getsugami; the glow in his mind flickered when he blocked Getsugami's sword.


"Good. Now I can attack in earnest." Said Getsugami.
"Bring it on. I have you now, your going down!" Jasutin yelled
"That remains to be seen." Getsugami retorted.
Getsugami and Jasutin leaped toward each other resolved to defeat the other. Jasutin felt confident now that he was able to at least see the presence of Getsugami with his mind. He was determined to achive what he has worked for years to obtain.


End of chapter 5:.



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Post time 2015-5-13 17:15:35 |Show the author posts only
Ragnos replied at 2015-5-13 07:02
Training for Bank ...

Great job!
Keep at it!

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selene0818 replied at 2015-5-13 16:15
Great job!
Keep at it!

Thanks. I'm currently working on GoGreed. Looking good so far.

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Post time 2015-5-13 22:07:15 |Show the author posts only
awesome rag thanks for sharing

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Post time 2015-5-14 05:10:36 |Show the author posts only
Awesome Man ! Keep It Up !
Samejima/YoshiMitsu

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Edited by UnKnOwNHoLlOw at 2015-5-14 07:56

So far so good mate keep up the good work

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Post time 2015-5-14 08:00:57 |Show the author posts only
Thanks, Until next Wedsday.

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Post time 2015-5-14 12:16:48 |Show the author posts only
good text keep it up

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Post time 2015-5-14 12:46:38 |Show the author posts only
Thanks. I'll post the next chapter on Wednesday of next week.

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Post time 2015-5-21 16:13:11 |Show the author posts only
Edited by Ragnos at 2015-5-23 23:28

                                                                                                                                             Press the Attack!
Jasutin maintained his strength against the onslaught of attacks he was receive from Getsugami. Using his mind he was able to see the spritual presence of Getsugami, but it did not make fighting him any easier. Getsugami was 'his' zanpakuto. Getsugami knew every weakness Jasutin had; which made fighting him a real challenge.
Jasutin had blood running down his body from the wounds he was given by Getsugamis attacks. Jasutin could feel his legs start to tire from exhaustion and his breathing was heavy plus being blind made it worse. I don't know how long I can hold out against him, but one way or another I will achieve bankai. I have to achieve bankai...I have to... Jasutin blocked several more attacks from Getsugami and attempted a counter attack which Getsugami dodged easily enough.


"Wow, hes really getting his ass handed to him." Je said starting a conversation with Ashido.
"So it seems." he replied as he stretched his arms out.
"Think he will manage to defeat his zanpakuto?" Je continued.
"Who knows at this point." Ashido replied.
"You don't talk much do you?" Je asked.
"Nothing to talk about." Ashido answered.
"Tch..."  


The fighting was relentless, Jasutin managed to wound Getsugami's left shoulder in a quick counter attack slightly restoring some of Jasutin's confidence. He's getting tired... slowly, but he's getting tired. Then again I may pass out before that happens... Jasutin and Getsugami clashed, but this time Getsugami sent Jasutin flying backward with a strong power attack. Jasutin stumbled to his feet just in time to barely dodge another one of Getsugami's attacks, and just as he did so Jasutin was kicked in the left cheek with Getsugami's right boot causing Jasutin to lose his balance. Getsugami took advantage of the small opening an punched Jasutin in the stomach with his left fist. Jasutin quickly brought down his sword upon Getsugami since he was close. Jasutin managed to finally obtain a solid hit on Getsugami's left arm. Getsugami retreated backwards after receiving the heavy attack. Jasutin took the time to recover his breath after being punched in the stomach.


"Damn! That had to hurt. Being punched in the stomach is never fun. The wind being knocked out of you is a real adrenaline kicker though." Je comment once he saw the flurry of attacks Jasutin recived.
"Looks like his zanpakuto is beginning to go all out against him. Using everything he employs in his arsenal, and not just relying on his sword alone." Ashido commented after Je.


Jasutin's breathing was turning harsh and his hands starting to shake slightly. Sweat mixed in with his blood slowly dripped down his body. He's going all out... and I don't have much left in me.  Maybe... I should do the same.
Getsugami approched Jasutin prepared to give another flurry of attacks. Suddenly Jasutin leaped towards Getsugami for the first time in the whole five hours of them constantly fighting Jasutin was on the offensive. Jasutin, and Getsugami were locked in a stream of relentless combat. Getsugami blocked attack after attack with Jasutins blows being furiously quick and heavy; if Getsugami made one mistake in his defense he would be defeated. Press the attack! Don't stop now, give it time there has to be an opening at some point! Jasutin yelled in his mind as he continued to push back Getsugami. Getsugami continued to block all of Jasutin's attacks. Jasutin swung his sword towards Getsugami's left, and Getsugami blocked it, but then suddenly Jasutin used his left fist and gave Getsugami a left hook to the face. This suprised Getsugami that Jasutin did not rely alone on his sword, and used his fist instead. This knocked Getsugaimi off balance; Jasutin took the chance and instantly went in for the killing blow.


:End of Chapter 6:.


   
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