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Post time 2015-6-14 18:06:59 |Show the author posts only |Descending
continuing his way all over the sea on a lil peace of wood , lying like a bottle floating , and a necklace , a gold one glowing in the dark , shining and waiting for the time to awaken , will he survive ? the questions are , let the words show you the truth and lies :
nights have passed , and the baby crying , his life , his childhood have been destroyed , only with a necklace around his neck , protecting him from any danger . is it luck ? or is it its power ? we shall discover , the son of the killed emperor look at his guards , with his eyes holding darkness of his soul , he look at them and stand then drew his sword and said : you know this sword is really beautiful , isn't it ? the guards remain silent , katara get near one of them and smiles only for the guard to fall with dark blood around his heart and the sword absorbing the blood covering it , the guards started trembeling , he look at them , with his smile , the smile of death and reassure them , his sword , called " akuma ryu no ken " was said to have the power when pierced in the body of the enemy to reach the depth of his soul and curse it , only for his dark claws to show in it and eat it , it is said that the dark soul of the god-like dragon was sealed in that sword , being able to pass through anything , awakening the " kage no geijutsu " , the art of rulling over shdows and curses , that sword was supposed to kill his little brother , amadai , so the emperial chair will be for him alone and he will be the only successor , because no one know yet from the high council of the 7 lords who was responsible of this incident and who killed the emperor . meanwhile a storm was getting near from the little baby who was freezing from the cold , when it arrived the piece of wood started to sink under the water along with the child , the kid faling into the sea , closed his eyes not knowing what is happening , not knowing death finally caught him ... or is it really the end ? who knows ... reaching a high depth the baby open his mouth only for the water to enter his mouth , then his lungs and being his end . SUDDENLY , a hand pull off the baby from water , from the deep water , and saves him from death again , while the kid lost his consciouness , the storm was gone , he opens his eyes , getting his life back thanks to the man who pulled him , it was a stranger , an unknown man , never seen in the empire before , the necklace glowed , the reason being unknown the man looked at the baby laughing , only for him to laugh with him . at that time THE GUARDS ENTERED TO katara's room telliung him they didn't find the baby but telling him the story of the little kif they left in the sea , katara pissed off look at them taking his sword out and killing all three and sending them to the shadows where their soul is transformed to the guardians of shadows , looking nervous , he was smiling in fact , he knew that was going to happen ...  that is because he planned for that , but what was his intention . did he really have mercy for his little brother ? or was it for another thing , and why the necklace glowed when the baby waked up , what is the secret between all those facts .... that's where mystery begins , where lies and truth get mysterious ....

P.S : hope you liked 2nd chapter i am gonna make 3rd chapter if i got enough reads and likes ( 3-4 likes are enough )
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Post time 2015-6-14 18:22:42 |Show the author posts only
spacing mate, spacing. Feels like reading a never ending sentence.

Spoilers: they all die in the end

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Post time 2015-6-14 18:24:16 |Show the author posts only
Chkval replied at 2015-6-14 18:22
spacing mate, spacing. Feels like reading a never ending sentence.

Spoilers: they all die in the en ...

well no they will not die lel and no need for spacing cz even if there is you won't read it cz it will be longer

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Post time 2015-6-14 18:26:51 |Show the author posts only
Chkval replied at 2015-6-14 18:27
Nope, got too much attached to the story. Wow, such words, much epicness. Even Doge agrees

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lolz you have  A ZOO well sirnibbles had a snake in home , right nibles ? XD

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SeiryuSky replied at 2015-6-15 01:24
well no they will not die lel and no need for spacing cz even if there is you won't read it cz it  ...

Nope, got too much attached to the story. Wow, such words, much epicness. Even Doge agrees

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Post time 2015-6-14 18:27:38 |Show the author posts only
SeiryuSky replied at 2015-6-14 18:26
lolz you have  A ZOO well sirnibbles had a snake in home , right nibles ? XD

used to

used to be 2 dogs, 2 cats, 2 guinea pigs and a snake

now it's 3 dogs, 2 cats

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Post time 2015-6-14 18:27:58 |Show the author posts only
SeiryuSky replied at 2015-6-15 01:26
lolz you have  A ZOO well sirnibbles had a snake in home , right nibles ? XD

check Doge meme on google, you'll understand

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Post time 2015-6-14 18:29:57 |Show the author posts only
Chkval replied at 2015-6-14 18:27
check Doge meme on google, you'll understand

XD lolz now i understand

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sirnibbles replied at 2015-6-14 18:27
used to

used to be 2 dogs, 2 cats, 2 guinea pigs and a snake

lolz was it your zoo that the animals got put today in georgia ?

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Post time 2015-6-14 18:32:28 |Show the author posts only
SeiryuSky replied at 2015-6-14 18:30
lolz was it your zoo that the animals got put today in georgia ?

haha nope

don't think we can handle anymore due to our 3rd dog

he's a rioty doge

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