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Your Galactic Civilization. (Short Story) [Copy URL]

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Post time 2015-9-13 14:45:40 |Show the author posts only
Nice short story. Ending with the question 'Is it an eternal cycle?' as if the Zyls were once weak too, but to defend themselves, they got stronger. Upon defeating their predators, they became the predators themselves and tried to conquer all other stars. Now I, the main character became like them and later maybe some other civilization also become this in order to stop me...... Overall cool story.. I like it.

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Post time 2015-9-13 22:07:59 |Show the author posts only
nice one ragnos Guess i'l start waiting for this one as well
I hope u know what i mean

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Post time 2015-9-14 04:03:52 |Show the author posts only
Edited by sithumya at 2015-9-14 15:04

Great story Ragnos! I loved it!

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Post time 2015-9-14 07:10:57 |Show the author posts only
Ragnos replied at 2015-9-13 12:46
Sounds like an interesting game.

So why did you want to build a storyline

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Post time 2016-2-3 04:31:13 |Show the author posts only
Nice one there,kind of like continuous cycle of rule

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Post time 2016-2-3 04:38:44 |Show the author posts only
Sorry, i skipped after imagine.... i have a short atten


Ooh look, a butterfly

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Post time 2016-2-3 05:53:55 |Show the author posts only
There's a board game called Eclipse similar to that Suzuken

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