Calling any Good Writers: Game Intro

Suzuken

okay so what i though about might change what you said but it's the same story with a different plot, here it is
About 1000 years ago a demon who once was human arose from his slumber in an attempt to take revenge from humanity. The demon's powers were something no human can imagine a mysterious force that earned him the name of Ragnarok,
after the news of the long feared and awaited day spread through the land,Three great armies of the three greatest remaining kingdoms gathered in an attempt to gain glory by defeating the vengeful god that have brought destruction to the human world.... Ragnarok , but their hopes of victory were crushed in an instance, not even a soul remained after seeing the rage of Ragnarok.. no one lived to tell the tail.
Then when humanity lost all hopes even the desire to live and humanity was on the verge of extinction with only the few lucky wandering souls that managed to survive the rage of Rag the souls that no longer knew peace, just wandering .... around the hollow land with sounds of cries echo through the wind...
but that didn't last forever, because one day the wishes of the dead became true when finally six heroes appeared to fight Ragnarok.
after the long awaited day the heroes went to kill Ragnarok , and that's exactly what they did , no one knew how that happened though ... it remained a mystery til out current day... all what was known about that battle that 2 brave souls lost their lives in the attempt to kill Ragnarok ...
Years after Ragnarok's defeat a rumor arose that Ragnarok had a son from a human .. a bastard son who was called by the name Ragnos  but it was only a myth and no-one believed it.
sorry if i made it too long ._. and i might have missed a thing or two because i copy/paste what u said and adjusted it a bit

Ragnos

Suzuken replied at 2015-10-29 10:14
okay so what i though about might change what you said but it's the same story with a different plot ...

I'll look it over and get back to you. Thank you for your time. ^.^

Suzuken

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-29 23:20
I'll look it over and get back to you. Thank you for your time. ^.^

hahah no problem xD i think i changed too much stuff about the story though lol

Ragnos

Suzuken replied at 2015-10-29 14:29
hahah no problem xD i think i changed too much stuff about the story though lol

Wow! I just looked it over and made some corrections to it, and so this is the best one that I've seen. I'll definitely use this.

Ragnos

Suzuken replied at 2015-10-29 14:29
hahah no problem xD i think i changed too much stuff about the story though lol

And here is the ending product!


About 1000 years ago a demon who once was human arose from his slumber in an attempt to take revenge on humanity. The demon's powers were something no human could imagine, and the fiery rage he brought with him earned him the name Ragnarok.

After the news of the long feared and awaited day spread throughout the land, three great armies of the three greatest remaining kingdoms gathered in hopes of defeating the vengeful god that had brought destruction to the world. Sadly their hopes of victory were crushed in an instance, not even a soul remained after seeing the power of Ragnarok.. no one survived.

When humanity had lost all hopes even the desire to live and  was on the verge of extinction,  only a few lucky wandering souls that no longer knew peace had managed to survive the frightening rage of the vengeful god.

On one fateful day the wishes of the  dead came true when finally six heroes appeared to fight Ragnarok.
After the long awaited day the heroes marched out to end Ragnarok's fiery torment , and in the end, they did. No one knew exactly how they managed to do so, and to this day it still remains a mystery all what was known about that day is  that 2 heroic souls lost their lives in the attempt to kill Ragnarok .
Years after Ragnarok's defeat a rumor arose that Ragnarok had a son from a human .. a bastard son who was called by the name Ragnos it is said that his appearance would mean our damnation...

Ragnos

Dreadnought finally finished our title screen. And man it looks awesome!

ajoalex

i so miss this section. that was a good read ragnos

Suzuken

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-30 01:48
And here is the ending product!

woah XD that's much better than what  i wrote .
sounds like a promising start .