Your fairing his cape too much. He is skinny and his cape stays close to him. I did vote good cause it is better but the eye is now really off and the hair as well. He has a kind look not a heartless one. he looks more like the guy from god eater or kiba now. Keep at it. Still way better than I could do.
erlonr replied at 2017-2-17 23:22
Heyy! Thanks, girl! It's really good to know that you liked my drawing, post your version of Kirit ...
lol ur welcome
i'm more of a copy-artist than an original artist haha that said i'll see if I can find a kirito pic to draw sometime then i'll post it, you can give me crit then hehe