Wow that was really good! Well, good in the sense of the emotional state, but all in all great.
I wasn't moved to tears, because there are a helluva lot more people during that time that felt the same
way so I can understand the situation he was in. But the feels were there alright.
With your permission I'd like to put this in a game someday. So that many more people can understand the horror of war.
We have an upcoming game that this would fit perfectly in.
Dreadnought is dealing with a finacial contract right now about on of our games, so it may be a bit before we go anywhere.