And guys, tell me why you voted for "bad", what do i need to improve?
the proportion of the left arm compared to the right arm is a bit off, the right is slightly longer so it throws the eye a little, but the shading is excellent and over all it's a pretty decent job :)
Don't stress about votes, the comments are where you'll get the most constructive crit which'll only help you improve - no one improves from being told they're good or bad, only in what they're doing right and where to be better ;)
Its an original drawing of Kirito or based on an existing one?
I voted good but I feel like using better materials could improve it also. Like mechanical drawing pencils for sharper lines and sketch paper would help brighten the image as it seems that ruled paper has some stress marks in places
Chihiro135 replied at 2017-2-16 16:37 static/image/common/back.gif
the proportion of the left arm compared to the right arm is a bit off, the right is slightly longer ...
Eyyy! :D Thanks for your feedback! :D Well, ppl is voting for bad and nobody tells me why, so i posted a comment saying " why you voted for "bad and what should i improve?" I'm always trying to improve, i'm gonna post another drawing with more details tonight... maybe XD Well, thank you very much!
trojandrew replied at 2017-2-16 16:41 static/image/common/back.gif
I voted good but I feel like using better materials could improve it also. Like mechanical drawing p ...
Lol i only have a black pyro pen and some Faber Castell pencils, thanks for the feedback.
erlonr replied at 2017-2-16 14:45 static/image/common/back.gif
Lol i only have a black pyro pen and some Faber Castell pencils, thanks for the feedback.
A trick I used to use is get a bic mechanical pencil one of the crappy ones. And some scratch paper. Angle the pencil and do a rubbing to sharpen the point. Then use it for crisp lines. And resharpen it as needed.
erlonr replied at 2017-2-16 21:42 static/image/common/back.gif
Eyyy! Thanks for your feedback! Well, ppl is voting for bad and nobody tells me why, so i po ...
lol no prob, I love to draw as well so I'm aware of the pit traps of proportion!
And never ever put "bad" as an option for poll here, because the trolls will jump on that without a thought and you'll have no crit and sit thinking that you're terrible when actually you're not :lol
Just keep working it hey! then you will always improve. Also post your stuff on DeviantArt, there you will find many aspiring artists and many amazing artists who give great tutorials and tips.
Looking forward to the next pic! ;)
Edited by erlonr at 2017-2-16 17:14
Jackski replied at 2017-2-16 16:41 static/image/common/back.gif
Its an original drawing of Kirito or based on an existing one?
Well, i think it's original :/ i don't know if somebody drew the same thing as me, with the same position, the same facial expression or the position of the swords, so.. yeah, it's original, i only watched some parts of the anime.
Chihiro135 replied at 2017-2-16 16:58 static/image/common/back.gif
lol no prob, I love to draw as well so I'm aware of the pit traps of proportion!
And never ever ...
ahh.. the trolls, i hate'em