Vote for good or bad!! drawing Kirito from SAO

erlonr

And guys, tell me why you voted for "bad", what do i need to improve?

Chihiro135

the proportion of the left arm compared to the right arm is a bit off, the right is slightly longer so it throws the eye a little, but the shading is excellent and over all it's a pretty decent job

Don't stress about votes, the comments are where you'll get the most constructive crit which'll only help you improve - no one improves from being told they're good or bad, only in what they're doing right and where to be better ;)

Jackski

Its an original drawing of Kirito or based on an existing one?

trojandrew

I voted good but I feel like using better materials could improve it also. Like mechanical drawing pencils for sharper lines and sketch paper would help brighten the image as it seems that ruled paper has some stress marks in places

erlonr

Chihiro135 replied at 2017-2-16 16:37
the proportion of the left arm compared to the right arm is a bit off, the right is slightly longer  ...

Eyyy! Thanks for your feedback! Well, ppl is voting for bad and nobody tells me why, so i posted a comment saying " why you voted for "bad and what should i improve?" I'm always trying to improve, i'm gonna post another drawing with more details tonight... maybe XD Well, thank you very much!

erlonr

trojandrew replied at 2017-2-16 16:41
I voted good but I feel like using better materials could improve it also. Like mechanical drawing p ...

Lol i only have a black pyro pen and some Faber Castell pencils, thanks for the feedback.

trojandrew

erlonr replied at 2017-2-16 14:45
Lol i only have a black pyro pen and some Faber Castell pencils, thanks for the feedback.

A trick I used to use is get a bic mechanical pencil one of the crappy ones. And some scratch paper. Angle the pencil and do a rubbing to sharpen the point. Then use it for crisp lines. And resharpen it as needed.

Chihiro135

erlonr replied at 2017-2-16 21:42
Eyyy!  Thanks for your feedback!  Well, ppl is voting for bad and nobody tells me why, so i po ...

lol no prob, I love to draw as well so I'm aware of the pit traps of proportion!

And never ever put "bad" as an option for poll here, because the trolls will jump on that without a thought and you'll have no crit and sit thinking that you're terrible when actually you're not

Just keep working it hey! then you will always improve. Also post your stuff on DeviantArt, there you will find many aspiring artists and many amazing artists who give great tutorials and tips.

Looking forward to the next pic! ;)

erlonr

Jackski replied at 2017-2-16 16:41
Its an original drawing of Kirito or based on an existing one?

Well, i think it's original :/ i don't know if somebody drew the same thing as me, with the same position, the same facial expression or the position of the swords, so.. yeah, it's original, i only watched some parts of the anime.

erlonr

Chihiro135 replied at 2017-2-16 16:58
lol no prob, I love to draw as well so I'm aware of the pit traps of proportion!

And never ever  ...

ahh.. the trolls, i hate'em