Vote for good or bad!! drawing Kirito from SAO

zealvioxs

erlonr replied at 2017-2-17 10:02
Gonna post in 1 hour, i have to paint it.

so, what you truly mean you going make another thread for that????

erlonr

zealvioxs replied at 2017-2-18 00:48
so, what you truly mean you going make another thread for that????

Well, yes, i created another thread, check it if you want. It's called "HEHE i drew Kirito from Sword art online²"

erlonr

zealvioxs replied at 2017-2-18 00:48
so, what you truly mean you going make another thread for that????

Thanks for voting.

Askanya

Tis a very well done picture, however if i was able to do better i would have said otherwise
jk, even if i could do better it's still a pretty good drawing

erlonr

Askanya replied at 2017-2-22 04:37
Tis a very well done picture, however if i was able to do better i would have said otherwise {:3_57: ...

♥ :3 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

erlonr

Askanya replied at 2017-2-22 04:37
Tis a very well done picture, however if i was able to do better i would have said otherwise {:3_57: ...

It's good to see you liked the drawing! Thanks for voting!

MylarHyrule

while i'm unfamiliar with the anime he comes from, and the art classes I've taken have made me a better critic than an artist, so here goes...  
both swords are bent, blue one has bad hamon lines
hands are weak, no definition, fingers look twisted, and his left one...  not 1005 sure what's wrong with it
his arms look plastic...  no substance in the elbow (when you bend your arms, clothes bunch up, your arm pushes against itself making creases you would see in this pic...
either his arms are very long, or his waste is very high
for that much muscle showing in the V in his shirt and that hard of a slant off the neck to his shoulders, the rest of him looks way too thin...
looking at him, parts of him look very strong and muscley, and the rest of him looks like he's built like a string bean nerddy type
look at his left hand..   you can tell you thickened it up after you drew it originally, or it looks like you did
and his body is facing us, his head is turned away, but the neck doesn't tell that story

that was just the bad, lots of good as well...  but the biggest good is that you are out there drawing and looking for feedback...   the only way to get better is practice, and maybe an art class or two if you aren't in one already.  good job bro, and keep up the hard work!!  also, how old are you?  just curious

MylarHyrule

Chihiro135 replied at 2017-2-16 14:58
lol no prob, I love to draw as well so I'm aware of the pit traps of proportion!

And never ever  ...

or just throw in an odd answer, like "potato"  or "Starrk" lol  that's good troll bait

MylarHyrule

Jackski replied at 2017-2-17 08:13
He's skinny just like that

Also he's supposed to be a 14 year old kid in that point of the ser ...

yeah, you have him big meaty shoulders and a cut out chest making him look beefy...   since I saw the pic...  also, your scabbard is over the wrong shoulder, lol  looking at this pic, I can see you did a good job for sure... some better materials and a few more years of work and I think you may have something there for sure!!

Jackski

MylarHyrule replied at 2017-2-23 02:21
yeah, you have him big meaty shoulders and a cut out chest making him look beefy...   since I saw  ...

i think you replied to the wrong post