Vote for good or bad!! drawing Kirito from SAO

erlonr

Jackski replied at 2017-2-16 16:41
Its an original drawing of Kirito or based on an existing one?

Do you want me to draw him in another position to prove that it's original?

tytheboy

a bending eradicator (behind his head) but id say that is a pretty good kirito you have there ;-)
little tip tho when it comes to straight swords there is no shame in uging help to make a straight line ;-)
i do so myself all the time when i draw stuff

just ti clerify i voted good cause it relly is

erlonr

tytheboy replied at 2017-2-16 17:19
a bending eradicator (behind his head) but id say that is a pretty good kirito you have there ;-)
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okay, ty            

Jackski

erlonr replied at 2017-2-16 21:10
Well, i think it's original :/ i don't know if somebody drew the same thing as me, with the same p ...

I asked because I myself have drawn some copies of already existing drawings just for hobby, to entertain myself a while, im no artist

Well then I think the angles of the blades could be improved, the black one gives the impression that the sharp edge is against his shoulder and (while in SAO it shouldnt matter 'cause they're inside a game) if you were to get that picture out of context, putting someone in the same pose for example, it should be cutting him
And the blue one gives the impression (looking at the guard of the sword) of having its sharp edge pointing downwards but the blade itself seems at another angle, pointing towards kirito in a 45 degree angle or maybe just too thin

Overall, save the things i pointed (and some other things others have pointed already and im not gonna repeat) the drawing seems good, with good colors if maybe not uniform and good shades and the body and face looks good side face (which is something that always resists me ) and good proportions overall (except the already mentioned right arm hahaha)

P.S.: The left hand's fist seems like it has the handle of the sword going through it instead of be holding it. Still much better than the first thing I ever drew which I can show you if you want
Edit: sorry if there are some things that you cant understand completely, im not all that good at english, its not my main language

erlonr

Jackski replied at 2017-2-16 17:27
I asked because I myself have drawn some copies of already existing drawings just for hobby, to ent ...

Lol english is not my main language too, but i understand what you want me to do, i'm drawing him again right now. XD

Ragnos

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l3iXrlKMLjY

chiko88soem

erlonr

Ragnos replied at 2017-2-16 21:11
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l3iXrlKMLjY

eh... ? okay, it's a guy drawing kirito, i don't know who you sent me this link, you're trying to help me?

erlonr

gonna draw him now, it's 4:26 AM in Brazil XD. *yawn*

absolboy101

you realize you posted this in the wrong section x- x ?