Calling any Good Writers: Game Intro

Ragnos

Hey everyone!
Dreadnought Interactive has been steadily working on our new game Terra Evil, and we wanted to have a voiced-over intro which calls for a good writer. I have three other working on creating a intro script and I'm either going to blend it all together or choose the best one.
So I decided why not have my good and trusty friends on Bleach Forums have a crack at it so if you think you can write a pretty good opening script for the game go ahead!

SETTING FOR THE CURRENT EVENTS
About 1000 years ago (897 years to be exact) a demon arose in an attempt to destroy all of humanity. The demon's shear destructive force earned him the name of Ragnarok. Three great armies of the three greatest kingdoms came together to defeat Ragnarok, only to be miserably crushed under Ragnarok's power. Then when humanity was on the verge of existence with only small pockets of survivors scattered throughout the world, six heroes appeared to fight Ragnarok. No-one knows how or what happened on that day, but the heroes returned with news of Ragnarok's death, and the fate of two of their fellow members who died in the fight. Years after Ragnarok's defeat a rumor arose that Ragnarok had a son who is named Ragnos (I know I know, don't judge), but it was only a myth and no-one believed it.
You are a Myth Hunter trained from the age of ten who decided to track down and prove if the Myth of Ragnarok's bastard son who would be hundreds of years old, and to find out why he had not yet attacked humanity after so long... if he exists.

ryugakill

I think it's fine
Really cool story line

ryugakill

Hmmm I'm a really good thinker so I'll help you
What types of stuff you need help with it I'm ready when you tell me what type of stuff you need on it

Ragnos

ryugakill replied at 2015-10-27 18:26
Hmmm I'm a really good thinker so I'll help you
What types of stuff you need help with it I'm ready ...

Well it has to be a somewhat short intro, that can really hook a player into the story.

ryugakill

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-27 20:18
Well it has to be a somewhat short intro, that can really hook a player into the story.

Okay I'll start to work

Ragnos

ryugakill replied at 2015-10-27 19:19
Okay I'll start to work

Thanks, if you want I can add you in the credits of the game.

ryugakill

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-27 20:22
Thanks, if you want I can add you in the credits of the game.

Yeah thanks and your welcome I'm 15 but good thinker with games and all kinds of stuff

Ragnos

ryugakill replied at 2015-10-27 19:24
Yeah thanks and your welcome I'm 15 but good thinker with games and all kinds of stuff

Yeah, I started my book Alvond when I was 15.
I would do it myself, but I'd like to see what other people can come up with.

ryugakill

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-27 20:27
Yeah, I started my book Alvond when I was 15.
I would do it myself, but I'd like to see what othe ...

Really cool and not bad ideas

SeiryuSky

Ragnos replied at 2015-10-27 20:27
Yeah, I started my book Alvond when I was 15.
I would do it myself, but I'd like to see what othe ...

i completed 1/4 of the pearls and the hidden soul part it's turning to be so interesting even to me the story maker lol