first song i will be posting.

grimmjowpantera

hello guys. i made a post a while back about me putting songs i have writin my self. i hope you guys like this song. PS. i kinda messed with it a bit and will for a bit cuz i need to change a few things on the song. give me your opinons on the song and i hope you can give me some advise of what i can do to make the song better. thank you and good day                           (small guitar solo) hey there can't ya see? driving me crazy how ya can't. the deep pain of the spirit deep within. hey there cant ya see? driving me crazy how ya cant. the deep pain of the spirit deep within. now how about ya sit down there now. let me show you what type of person i am. now let's see how far i can take this. Give me your hand so we can fly together. Give me your hand so i can hold it forever. Give me your hand so i can be with you for ever. 1 2 3. let me have your heart so i can love once again. give me your love so i can have someone to care about. let me have you till the day i die. let me say a few things to keep you for a while. Give me your hand so we can fly together. Give me your hand so i can hold it forever. Give me your hand so i can be with your forever. 1 2 3. let me see the type of wonder you are. let me see how you react with this love. let me have you forever. hey. cant ya see its driving me crazy how you cant. the deep pain of my spirit hurts without you here. for you. this is only a few things i can say to you. Give me your hand so we can fly together. Give me your hand so i can hold it forever. Give me your hand so i can be with you forever. 1 2 3. let me have your heart so i can love you again. give me your love so i can care again. let me have you again till i die. now that i have gained what i lost before i can be the one to show you everything.  ( and that is all i have so far on this song.)

awesomeprussia1

*stares in amazement* THAT WAS AWESOME DUDETTE !!!!

awesomeprussia1

*stares in amazement* THAT WAS AWESOME DUDETTE !!!!

grimmjowpantera

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-6-1 16:27
*stares in amazement* THAT WAS AWESOME DUDETTE !!!!

why do you keep saying dudette? XD

awesomeprussia1

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-6-1 19:14
why do you keep saying dudette? XD

I don't know I keep saying dude and dudette one day and know I cant stop saying dude and dudette and plus dudette means girl and you are a girl so yea that's why dudette

grimmjowpantera

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-6-1 19:23
I don't know I keep saying dude and dudette one day and know I cant stop saying dude and dudette a ...

um. im a guy. o.0 on my profile is says i am. and i dont have any woman parts on me XD lol.

sirnibbles

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-6-1 20:55
um. im a guy. o.0 on my profile is says i am. and i dont have any woman parts on me XD lol.

lql well i'd hope not if you're a guy :p

awesomeprussia1

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-6-1 20:55
um. im a guy. o.0 on my profile is says i am. and i dont have any woman parts on me XD lol.

ok im a girl I thought you was a girl *rubs back of neck* sorry dude

grimmjowpantera

awesomeprussia1 replied at 2015-6-1 21:10
ok im a girl I thought you was a girl *rubs back of neck* sorry dude

it's alright. this was my sisters profile before she got in trouble and i took it. so no worries

awesomeprussia1

grimmjowpantera replied at 2015-6-2 00:28
it's alright. this was my sisters profile before she got in trouble and i took it. so no worries : ...

ok but still sorry dude....