Ragnos: Drawing (Incomplete)

TanakaAiri

Well I'm not an artist .....(failed every art exam in school) but anyway, on topic of shadows, the shadows under his neck on the right side looks a bit odd? Idk like if its just "too much". The left side looks more smooth...even ...to me

But other than that!! Looks awesomeee! Should totally draw me a pic of Shunsui so i can print n hang in my room....wud totally be my BFFL

RiadDahoe

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-24 18:35
Thanks, but something just seems off to me... hrm.

maybe the scar is 2 big, anyways, awesome work , i have problems drawing a square ..lolzz

SeptaTK

You drawn super nice his Hair.

You should make him look Angry ;D (Eyes)

MylarHyrule

nose and chin don't quite line up right...  check the jaw line from the tip of the nose down.  and to have that hard of a shadow on the right side of his neck, he'd need a much stronger jaw to have that much shadow on the left.  he looks good, just the devil is in the details....   BTW, I can't draw to save my life...  just took too many art classes, lol

criminal238

Eyebrows maybe.

sirnibbles

TanakaAiri replied at 2015-9-25 10:53
Well I'm not an artist .....(failed every art exam in school) but anyway, on topic of shadows, the s ...

nibbles seconds this

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ummm , it will be cool if he get some shade above his eyes , that will be awesome , btw nice effort brother!

Zento-Hazashi

you chose a mix between 3d and 2d on this drawing which doesn't bode well for a sketch/anime drwaing like that rejoices only the body, so try and find the certain style of 'camera' onto the picture

missing quite a lot on the face in terms of detail, go wild on there!

the layered hair looks to be the best of it all, nicely done from top-bottom, great job ^^

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Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-25 20:09
you chose a mix between 3d and 2d on this drawing which doesn't bode well for a sketch/anime drwaing ...

agree with this here, the shadow in hair would be better if you mirrored it onto the left side and the right side, at first glance i thought it looked crooked due to the nose and chin, the idea of the scar is good.. but might wanna slim that up a bit and probably add face lines, laugh lines, 5'0'clock shadow.. maybe even cheekbone indents

ataksuki

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