Ragnos: Drawing (Incomplete)

Ragnos

I've been practicing on some eyes. I'll upload them and see what you think.

Ragnos

I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on.
I have two types (well three if you count the one on the bottom left with flames in his eyes.) one facing the viewer and the same, looking to the left.

                    

ryugakill

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-28 17:37
I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on. ...

Some of the eyes are good

Zento-Hazashi

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-28 22:37
I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on. ...

most potential is within the 2nd and 4th eye

you should focus on tonal shading a bit more, seems quite identifiable there on how you're drawing those eyes

also im guessing you're using rubber for shine right? Work around it, don't just leave it there as a rub out, put light shine there, take a look at you're no.2 eye there more accurately, stare at it, think it's good? good, think you see something bad with that rubber space? improve

Ragnos

Zento-Hazashi replied at 2015-9-28 17:51
most potential is within the 2nd and 4th eye

you should focus on tonal shading a bit more, seems  ...

Thanks for the feedback.

erlonr

Ragnos replied at 2015-9-28 19:37
I tried a little bit harder on the eyes in this picture then the eyes in the drawing I'm working on. ...

wow,The 2nd eye is really good!

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kinda looks like starwind from outlaw star

Ragnos

[email protected] replied at 2015-9-30 16:07
kinda looks like starwind from outlaw star

Huh, yeah it does. I never noticed that. Now I just need to give him a cape and a Caster. XD